Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2014 6:49pm
WINNER
TLIFD (Rope)
TLIFD (Rope)
hiphop battle.
Waterviolet said:Tic tac to thats a kids game give me that mike
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
Who gave this one the dumb luck?
Battling a kid handling tourettes
Ante up and place bets
Persons a worse version Of Ricky
And that other Emcee who will never be
Go backn to Spelling Bee Trophy's
I hope he dont try suicide
He already stepped beyond the mans lines
Termites and land minds
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
Who gave this one the dumb luck?
Battling a kid handling tourettes
Ante up and place bets
Persons a worse version Of Ricky
And that other Emcee who will never be
Go backn to Spelling Bee Trophy's
I hope he dont try suicide
He already stepped beyond the mans lines
Termites and land minds
Termites and land mines thats what i got in my brain
Dont cause no payn i like it makes me insane
Its all gona rain down on you
I just stepped in shit and it reminded me of you
I am gona clean it off on your head and have a nap in your bed
Dont cause no payn i like it makes me insane
Its all gona rain down on you
I just stepped in shit and it reminded me of you
I am gona clean it off on your head and have a nap in your bed
Waterviolet said:Tic tac to thats a kids game give me that mike
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
Your halfway there, flowery flow so precocious
with an attitude oh so ferocious
but the dyslexia in your words made me nauseous
atrocious grammar, had your grey matter trapped beneath a hammer
nobody told you yet, violets are shrinking leave your lips to drinking
stay hidden in the shade cos in the glade of beautiful minds resides your motherfucking doom
don't leave the gloom, ain't no water for you here
forever grower, but in the light you invert and disappear
I guess your not a shower
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
Your halfway there, flowery flow so precocious
with an attitude oh so ferocious
but the dyslexia in your words made me nauseous
atrocious grammar, had your grey matter trapped beneath a hammer
nobody told you yet, violets are shrinking leave your lips to drinking
stay hidden in the shade cos in the glade of beautiful minds resides your motherfucking doom
don't leave the gloom, ain't no water for you here
forever grower, but in the light you invert and disappear
I guess your not a shower
Reading between the lines of rules
proves my fingers to be fools
in this motherfucker there's gotta be more room for doom cos I'm bringing the end to the masked crusader
supervillains taking it sweet like I'm a home invader, digging deep into fleshy intersections of bums the personal manifestation of the violation of health and safety inspections
huddle in the corner and pray it ends quick
with no need to test your skills
on a prick
cos twist, lick and tongue flick
ain't no way to finally die, and you know the epitaphs won't lie
proves my fingers to be fools
in this motherfucker there's gotta be more room for doom cos I'm bringing the end to the masked crusader
supervillains taking it sweet like I'm a home invader, digging deep into fleshy intersections of bums the personal manifestation of the violation of health and safety inspections
huddle in the corner and pray it ends quick
with no need to test your skills
on a prick
cos twist, lick and tongue flick
ain't no way to finally die, and you know the epitaphs won't lie
Waterviolet said:Termites and land mines thats what i got in my brain
Dont cause no payn i like it makes me insane
Its all gona rain down on you
I just stepped in shit and it reminded me of you
I am gona clean it off on your head and have a nap in your bed
Worse even told you can enroll in this league?
This was worst than the last verse
I sense fatigue
You would be dumb enough to end up stepping in shit
Outfitted to play disabled kids in terrible flicks
Incomparable wits, unbearable spits
Again go back to what you call poetry
You dont flow with ease give your throat a squeeze
Hope you dont breathe throw you off the stage
Sad, bad half ass dont need to be classified
Get points for crowd surfing piss the judges off and stll win
Blow minds worse then those landminds
The menace is back at it again
Dont cause no payn i like it makes me insane
Its all gona rain down on you
I just stepped in shit and it reminded me of you
I am gona clean it off on your head and have a nap in your bed
Worse even told you can enroll in this league?
This was worst than the last verse
I sense fatigue
You would be dumb enough to end up stepping in shit
Outfitted to play disabled kids in terrible flicks
Incomparable wits, unbearable spits
Again go back to what you call poetry
You dont flow with ease give your throat a squeeze
Hope you dont breathe throw you off the stage
Sad, bad half ass dont need to be classified
Get points for crowd surfing piss the judges off and stll win
Blow minds worse then those landminds
The menace is back at it again
DystopianMelody said:Reading between the lines of rules
proves my fingers to be fools
in this motherfucker there's gotta be more room for doom cos I'm bringing the end to the masked crusader
supervillains taking it sweet like I'm a home invader, digging deep into fleshy intersections of bums the personal manifestation of the violation of health and safety inspections
huddle in the corner and pray it ends quick
with no need to test your skills
on a prick
cos twist, lick and tongue flick
ain't no way to finally die, and you know the epitaphs won't lie
Youre just
Fox Food impossible Syllable tossing feud
You will be offed in Two
Confuse you worse than a Rubix Cube
Place you either in a maze or a zoo
Or whatever I plan to do to a man like you
Ahead like Guillotines which you happen to fall in between
I climb style pinnacles
Your file and visuals are to municipal
You sound crabby must be a menstrual
proves my fingers to be fools
in this motherfucker there's gotta be more room for doom cos I'm bringing the end to the masked crusader
supervillains taking it sweet like I'm a home invader, digging deep into fleshy intersections of bums the personal manifestation of the violation of health and safety inspections
huddle in the corner and pray it ends quick
with no need to test your skills
on a prick
cos twist, lick and tongue flick
ain't no way to finally die, and you know the epitaphs won't lie
Youre just
Fox Food impossible Syllable tossing feud
You will be offed in Two
Confuse you worse than a Rubix Cube
Place you either in a maze or a zoo
Or whatever I plan to do to a man like you
Ahead like Guillotines which you happen to fall in between
I climb style pinnacles
Your file and visuals are to municipal
You sound crabby must be a menstrual
This menice just dosent give a shit what you spit
Whats with all this disabled kid bullshit ?
I aint gona fall off no stage ho
This is more like a soab box
I am swift like a fox
So u all can suck 10 dix
I no u wont spit cus u love that shit
Its your only friend
And u will wollow in it til the end
Whats with all this disabled kid bullshit ?
I aint gona fall off no stage ho
This is more like a soab box
I am swift like a fox
So u all can suck 10 dix
I no u wont spit cus u love that shit
Its your only friend
And u will wollow in it til the end
Calling me municipal
so hop on the bus, take a ride
it's about the principle
of man with last word rhymes
claiming glory and inviting me inside
a mind that can't move with the times
past, future and present have no divide
read between the lines of a guillotine and it says death
Is what happens when you don't move forward
don't let the crowd get bored
you climbed the style pinnacle and the substance fell off
come check if I'm crabby, dip a digit and taste the waters
see if the stains match the mouths of your daughters.
so hop on the bus, take a ride
it's about the principle
of man with last word rhymes
claiming glory and inviting me inside
a mind that can't move with the times
past, future and present have no divide
read between the lines of a guillotine and it says death
Is what happens when you don't move forward
don't let the crowd get bored
you climbed the style pinnacle and the substance fell off
come check if I'm crabby, dip a digit and taste the waters
see if the stains match the mouths of your daughters.
Waterviolet said:This menice just dosent give a shit what you spit
Whats with all this disabled kid bullshit ?
I aint gona fall off no stage ho
This is more like a soab box
I am swift like a fox
So u all can suck 10 dix
I no u wont spit cus u love that shit
Its your only friend
And u will wollow in it til the end
I write masterpieces better than your last release
And for the dick jokes a bad hoax
You must be one of them sick folks
Who would rather have your throat poked
For ten cents a cheap mistress
Keep dissing yourself
No one else even applauds you got more loss's then drawls
Stutter more than actually pause
Whack patterns your better collaborating with half of them
Who try and battle Doom
I laugh at you its like conversation with a failing
Retarded patient
You must be dope block every blow with your face
Manned for greatness
Youre just mad cause I slipped you aids mix
Now your stuck with the same shit your mother had
Another wannabe rapper got it bad.
Whats with all this disabled kid bullshit ?
I aint gona fall off no stage ho
This is more like a soab box
I am swift like a fox
So u all can suck 10 dix
I no u wont spit cus u love that shit
Its your only friend
And u will wollow in it til the end
I write masterpieces better than your last release
And for the dick jokes a bad hoax
You must be one of them sick folks
Who would rather have your throat poked
For ten cents a cheap mistress
Keep dissing yourself
No one else even applauds you got more loss's then drawls
Stutter more than actually pause
Whack patterns your better collaborating with half of them
Who try and battle Doom
I laugh at you its like conversation with a failing
Retarded patient
You must be dope block every blow with your face
Manned for greatness
Youre just mad cause I slipped you aids mix
Now your stuck with the same shit your mother had
Another wannabe rapper got it bad.
Anonymous
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DystopianMelody said:Calling me municipal
so hop on the bus, take a ride
it's about the principle
of man with last word rhymes
claiming glory and inviting me inside
a mind that can't move with the times
past, future and present have no divide
read between the lines of a guillotine and it says death
Is what happens when you don't move forward
don't let the crowd get bored
you climbed the style pinnacle and the substance fell off
come check if I'm crabby, dip a digit and taste the waters
see if the stains match the mouths of your daughters.
get slapped for the hell of it Ill melt ya quick
Dealing with a pretentious interventionist
You couldnt flip shit even with a spatula
Got more followers than a evangelist
Manage this I conqueror
Im a lot worse swamp words better than what you rehearsed
Before the post I thought you were just blowing smoke
Seems like you eat paint chips
Just a make shift you need maintenance
Dont worry I need patients I'll just put you on the waiting list
so hop on the bus, take a ride
it's about the principle
of man with last word rhymes
claiming glory and inviting me inside
a mind that can't move with the times
past, future and present have no divide
read between the lines of a guillotine and it says death
Is what happens when you don't move forward
don't let the crowd get bored
you climbed the style pinnacle and the substance fell off
come check if I'm crabby, dip a digit and taste the waters
see if the stains match the mouths of your daughters.
get slapped for the hell of it Ill melt ya quick
Dealing with a pretentious interventionist
You couldnt flip shit even with a spatula
Got more followers than a evangelist
Manage this I conqueror
Im a lot worse swamp words better than what you rehearsed
Before the post I thought you were just blowing smoke
Seems like you eat paint chips
Just a make shift you need maintenance
Dont worry I need patients I'll just put you on the waiting list
Anonymous
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this made me laugh out of all nice 
