Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2014 6:49pm
WINNER
TLIFD (Rope)
TLIFD (Rope)
hiphop battle.
Anonymous
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Go back to free verse your style needs work
The fact you like to see ass tear up
A queer bunch and shady like love shacks
Trying to battle rap but lack in punch set ups
You try hard id rather jump out of a moving car
Then you try to smooth bars
Lacking in fact and fiction
Get slapped on the dome with a real microphone
Been rhyming since a snot nosed filling pot holes with skills
Every time you recite its like flea bites
Just go back and re write
No need to think twice kids whack
Try me 3 rounds have your lungs collapse
Dumb luck and ugh type raps
The fact you like to see ass tear up
A queer bunch and shady like love shacks
Trying to battle rap but lack in punch set ups
You try hard id rather jump out of a moving car
Then you try to smooth bars
Lacking in fact and fiction
Get slapped on the dome with a real microphone
Been rhyming since a snot nosed filling pot holes with skills
Every time you recite its like flea bites
Just go back and re write
No need to think twice kids whack
Try me 3 rounds have your lungs collapse
Dumb luck and ugh type raps
you really shouldnt say words like retard
your only hurting yourself, playin that emo card
im speakin only for the key note like a ceelo bard.
im happy for you your pleased at your own progress
keep believin you a monster, fuck ghost rider, change your name to loch ness
MFdoom, i cant decide if you arrived to late or to soon but fuck it. i guess i'll just have to make room.
your only hurting yourself, playin that emo card
im speakin only for the key note like a ceelo bard.
im happy for you your pleased at your own progress
keep believin you a monster, fuck ghost rider, change your name to loch ness
MFdoom, i cant decide if you arrived to late or to soon but fuck it. i guess i'll just have to make room.
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
I'd rather have you step back
Before you get your attitude smacked
Socked and pushed off stage
Octopus rampage
Wheres the connection you verbally passed the 3rd grade
Feather weight for heavens sake
Listen to a couple of tapes
Get some confidence because on some honest shit
I help design these flipping fetishes
There you go rhyming without using your head again
Causing an ass whoop
WithDrawling From Black books
Mistook you as a wannabe
Want to see the mystic wizardry
Get choke slammed six feet
I'd rather have you step back
Before you get your attitude smacked
Socked and pushed off stage
Octopus rampage
Wheres the connection you verbally passed the 3rd grade
Feather weight for heavens sake
Listen to a couple of tapes
Get some confidence because on some honest shit
I help design these flipping fetishes
There you go rhyming without using your head again
Causing an ass whoop
WithDrawling From Black books
Mistook you as a wannabe
Want to see the mystic wizardry
Get choke slammed six feet
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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Anonymous
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MFDooM, i'll smack you like a sailors boom and leave your ass in pacific waters
man over board send in the choppers.
flight 19
like that loch ness monsters, no real sighting
im mountains above you, hope you like hiking
cant find your meaning through the lyrical content misleading, your in the bottom of the ocean now, wet dreaming when along comes a valhalen viking
Austin_Rura bringin myself up, the high king.
the one and only rap king,
yall just queens in drag wherein rags tryin your best at rapping
man over board send in the choppers.
flight 19
like that loch ness monsters, no real sighting
im mountains above you, hope you like hiking
cant find your meaning through the lyrical content misleading, your in the bottom of the ocean now, wet dreaming when along comes a valhalen viking
Austin_Rura bringin myself up, the high king.
the one and only rap king,
yall just queens in drag wherein rags tryin your best at rapping
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
You will get your EGO BROKE
See no flows he dont know
Please dont choke
I need more folks to roast
Yu got me snoozing
Hand this kid a brew
"Hes like 12 dude"
What ever put on the blues clues
Move out the way FOOL
You will never go Plat
He who came to destroy rap
You slow man with no chance
Ohh damn was that the best
Only impress when you finished your sentence
Glad its over,
You will get your EGO BROKE
See no flows he dont know
Please dont choke
I need more folks to roast
Yu got me snoozing
Hand this kid a brew
"Hes like 12 dude"
What ever put on the blues clues
Move out the way FOOL
You will never go Plat
He who came to destroy rap
You slow man with no chance
Ohh damn was that the best
Only impress when you finished your sentence
Glad its over,
Austin_Rura said:MFDooM, i'll smack you like a sailors boom and leave your ass in pacific waters
man over board send in the choppers.
flight 19
like that loch ness monsters, no real sighting
im mountains above you, hope you like hiking
cant find your meaning through the lyrical content misleading, your in the bottom of the ocean now, wet dreaming when along comes a valhalen viking
Austin_Rura bringin myself up, the high king.
the one and only rap king,
yall just queens in drag wherein rags tryin your best at rapping
You recycle rhymes
Just go pantomime
Before you get a damaged spine
And its time for you to learn dude
What doesnt concern you isnt your business
You dont flow vicious enough
Youll get your poster ripped up
Like Nicorete Patches
In a sentence ive already bagged this
Youre lyrics are better of being trashed and forgotten
Was this your best at your misquotes
Next time youll get your ribs broke for that type of a sick joke
man over board send in the choppers.
flight 19
like that loch ness monsters, no real sighting
im mountains above you, hope you like hiking
cant find your meaning through the lyrical content misleading, your in the bottom of the ocean now, wet dreaming when along comes a valhalen viking
Austin_Rura bringin myself up, the high king.
the one and only rap king,
yall just queens in drag wherein rags tryin your best at rapping
You recycle rhymes
Just go pantomime
Before you get a damaged spine
And its time for you to learn dude
What doesnt concern you isnt your business
You dont flow vicious enough
Youll get your poster ripped up
Like Nicorete Patches
In a sentence ive already bagged this
Youre lyrics are better of being trashed and forgotten
Was this your best at your misquotes
Next time youll get your ribs broke for that type of a sick joke
Oh a wigger now? theirs a word i aint heard since '06 wow.
yeah i post my real name Austin. come find me get tossed on some shit that would scare hopsin.
it aint about being black, i just grew up in a town you mind find yourself lost in
in fact... police have to escort your ass off my block
better watch your mouth on that shit that you talk you might find your exact measurements etched in chalk.
aint you know i weave words like a lyrical loom?
why you so interested in the way i groom?
MFdoom
motherfucking speakin of whom
wake up on fire in a barrel, bury your ass in a chemical tomb.
yeah i post my real name Austin. come find me get tossed on some shit that would scare hopsin.
it aint about being black, i just grew up in a town you mind find yourself lost in
in fact... police have to escort your ass off my block
better watch your mouth on that shit that you talk you might find your exact measurements etched in chalk.
aint you know i weave words like a lyrical loom?
why you so interested in the way i groom?
MFdoom
motherfucking speakin of whom
wake up on fire in a barrel, bury your ass in a chemical tomb.
Body bagging galore
Hardly laugh at you dorks
A Tactical chore
To Try and take this microphone
You'll get stabbed with a spork
Result I vault out the window and avoid the Police Report
You spit the same Okay Doke Artichoke Lame-O Flows
No wonder why you stay so broke with no soul
Playing Dart Games Right Where your picture hangs
Small Fish Watching to Much last Action hero
Dressed up and posed nice for your funeral though
]Lyrically youve been tic tac toed
Hardly laugh at you dorks
A Tactical chore
To Try and take this microphone
You'll get stabbed with a spork
Result I vault out the window and avoid the Police Report
You spit the same Okay Doke Artichoke Lame-O Flows
No wonder why you stay so broke with no soul
Playing Dart Games Right Where your picture hangs
Small Fish Watching to Much last Action hero
Dressed up and posed nice for your funeral though
]Lyrically youve been tic tac toed
Tic tac to thats a kids game give me that mike
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
Your lame hang your head in shame
Yo mamma is to blame
You gota be imbread
Whats rong with you sick in the head
Body is filled with dread
I am gona fuck you in the head and barry u under my shed
