Poetry competition CLOSED 29th May 2011 9:02pm
WINNER
mjs211 (MikeTheEngineer)
mjs211 (MikeTheEngineer)
RUNNERS-UP:
violet
and lepperochan
Most awesome challenge on the planet.
I once broke a mirror,
dropped it on the floor
and watched in horror
as it broke into five hundred
tiny slivers. Little daggers,
which cut me as I tried
to throw them out, keep
them from hurting others.
You paint your true opus
in five hundred little slivers,
tiny shards in which you
carve yourself, trying to
find reality. In a constant state
of looking for a full-length view
in each tiny little mirror, you
forget they all connect.
dropped it on the floor
and watched in horror
as it broke into five hundred
tiny slivers. Little daggers,
which cut me as I tried
to throw them out, keep
them from hurting others.
You paint your true opus
in five hundred little slivers,
tiny shards in which you
carve yourself, trying to
find reality. In a constant state
of looking for a full-length view
in each tiny little mirror, you
forget they all connect.
Anonymous
who am i
seeks the unknown in others
has so much to be thankful for in life
an aspiring poet with lots of potential
makes the best of each experience
a compassionate friend and a dreamer
nowhere near a self actualized being
seeks the unknown in others
has so much to be thankful for in life
an aspiring poet with lots of potential
makes the best of each experience
a compassionate friend and a dreamer
nowhere near a self actualized being
i have seen the splendor of the fall
beauty personified to near perfection
seasoned with the brightest of smiles
she invades my aspirations nightly
in black and white she stands proud
her hair spills down supple shoulders
eyes flaunting intellect and mystery
in my world she is most luminary
beauty personified to near perfection
seasoned with the brightest of smiles
she invades my aspirations nightly
in black and white she stands proud
her hair spills down supple shoulders
eyes flaunting intellect and mystery
in my world she is most luminary
Anonymous
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Hiding behind a wall they've built
A wall of brick
Coming across as a mean spirited person
But cares very much
Can be very rude and can say some harsh words
But they're only looking to better some
And stop all the cookie cutter bullshit
But they do like most, just not what they have to say.
They have no tolerance for childish banter
just give them no nonsense and be real!
If you do this, you will stay on there golden grace,,
oh and maybe if you have a pretty face ;)
Who am I
A wall of brick
Coming across as a mean spirited person
But cares very much
Can be very rude and can say some harsh words
But they're only looking to better some
And stop all the cookie cutter bullshit
But they do like most, just not what they have to say.
They have no tolerance for childish banter
just give them no nonsense and be real!
If you do this, you will stay on there golden grace,,
oh and maybe if you have a pretty face ;)
Who am I
Anonymous
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lets get some hints going 
am I right??
