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First impression (everybody)

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 19th Jan 2012
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Poetry Contest

Piggy backing that lovely young ladies comp
The "first impressions" comp was kind of ballsy, and opened  up unexpected creative attitudes.... I would like to do this same thing, only every participant is up for grabs

to be an entrant, you must put your own beautiful mug into the profile pic... It can be staged, enhanced, or natural ... Fuck, give me a duck face of yourself .
Doesn't matter as long as its you

I am up for grabs , as well as any body else who posts. If you post, your profile pic is now up for grabs too


You can be a dick n slam them
Build a huge narrative around that image
Whatever

This could be particularly interesting to some of us who keep getting an increasing feel/knowing of fellow poets, that we haven't met yet

Very open
No soft skins

Post a few should ya need to but don't be silly

Mazel Tov!

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 90awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5706

I was thinking your thoughts LB--great idea! I'm in, but how do you want to work this--write about the person above you, or we all choose anyone who posts their intent here?

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

Chose anybody that posts in this thread .... You and I are the first viable targets

poet Anonymous

I'm in - for one week only...

Based on Lightbaron's picture, though not aimed directly at you. More the bearded kind

A letter to the bearded ones

Men with beards.
I want to love them,
really I do

but I can't get past
the shabby hobo
I'm-a-bum-and-I'm-proud

mentality.

Firstly,
I spend all my time
methodically

breaking
     them
         down

mentally I've got some
bonsai shit with scissors
going on

until I've molded it
in to a neater creation
that won't scratch my face.

Now - it won't effect
the man behind it,
don't get me wrong

won't effect his ability
to love, or write
a damn good song

about how good the road is
and the drink is
and how the mighty beard

leads the way

in to man hood
and I-dont-give-a-fuck hood
and other alpha quotes

while I'm stood here
thinking "Dude-
you look like a fucking goat"

... and maybe
I just need to meet a beard
that I like

(though it's never mattered
below the face
when it's dyke on dyke...)

MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 17awards
Joined 24th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 1878

Check out missy all nerdy lookin' and shit. :)

poet Anonymous

MrAlptraum said:Check out missy all nerdy lookin' and shit. :)

Check out Alpy lookin' all... feety and shit. Unfortunately I can't write a letter to your big toe. I am not a hobbit.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 90awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5706

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MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 17awards
Joined 24th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 1878

Who're, huh? :)

johnrot
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 10th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 3645

really missy???? beard bashing???

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

real men have curves, or was it beards...

Thanks for starting us off Madame and Missy!
think I got that same sweater JR
and we all know how Alpy looks; thin, bird chest, full flowing hair, wearing anything but Nikes

poet Anonymous

Slanted profile; Not a soul portrait.
I wonder: Do you feel that's your best half?
Sadness weighs the eyelids.
Strain has marked the brow
As hard bullet streaks between the eyes.
Strangely, though the lips pout,
Anger's frown is not hard set
On cheek that appears soft to touch.

I am not swayed by first glances,
Especially sideways ones.
I know the dark side of Lunacy,
Felt its bloody scream of sharp tongue
As it split face, tried to break
Something it could not recognize
Nor understand.

So distanced, I stand,
Guarding steel-crossed hills of my favor
During changeable phases of the moon
And study shadows moving in infrared lens.

(for John Rot)

BloodyTears
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 10th July 2013
Forum Posts: 203

I'm in but I'm at work so I'll be back.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 90awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5706

Hey LB--how many times can we enter?

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

Let em rip!
don't get silly, approaching ten might be silly
But feel free to submit multiple

DystopianMelody
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 9awards
Joined 9th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1391

Put my keys in the hat. I'm batman again after this is done though, coz batman fuckin rules.
And I can't help if I'm a dick, that's racist bro

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