Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd June 2011 7:06am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
WINNER
Dragonyear
Dragonyear
Fictious Character Story Poem Challenge
The Bad Tutor
I am a nobody, no one knows who I am.
That’s why I can get away with my sinful crimes.
A sin not only because of religion but because of the law.
What I do is frowned upon by society and I do not understand why.
I understand that their younger then the legal age, but the way they present themselves, any man would be slightly tricked.
My first one was was sixteen, shehad long blonde hair, size c breast I’d guess and say.
She was a little over developed and she led me on.
When I gave her a ride home one day, I took a detour.
I took her back to my place and saidI had to pick something important up.
I invited her in and I sensed her uncomfortability.
Her blue eyes, perky lips, she wore a tight black skirt with a very low and also tight white shirt.
She had no bra on, I knew this because her hard nipples were on my mind all day.
When she took a seat, I sat beside her and put my hand on her leg, started moving it closer up her skirt.
She pushed my hand away and said “I want to go home”.
I don’t know what came over me, I forced her down, gagged her mouth so she wouldn’t scream.
I took her cherry, she was so tight I’m hard just thinking about it.
I remember each of her grunts and sqeals, the look on her face when I finished.
Like she lost a piece of her soul.
I told her to keep this quiet or I’d kill her family, I didn’t mean it but she thought I thought.
I drove her home, heading to my next student to tutor, hoping she’d be more willing to learn…
I am a nobody, no one knows who I am.
That’s why I can get away with my sinful crimes.
A sin not only because of religion but because of the law.
What I do is frowned upon by society and I do not understand why.
I understand that their younger then the legal age, but the way they present themselves, any man would be slightly tricked.
My first one was was sixteen, shehad long blonde hair, size c breast I’d guess and say.
She was a little over developed and she led me on.
When I gave her a ride home one day, I took a detour.
I took her back to my place and saidI had to pick something important up.
I invited her in and I sensed her uncomfortability.
Her blue eyes, perky lips, she wore a tight black skirt with a very low and also tight white shirt.
She had no bra on, I knew this because her hard nipples were on my mind all day.
When she took a seat, I sat beside her and put my hand on her leg, started moving it closer up her skirt.
She pushed my hand away and said “I want to go home”.
I don’t know what came over me, I forced her down, gagged her mouth so she wouldn’t scream.
I took her cherry, she was so tight I’m hard just thinking about it.
I remember each of her grunts and sqeals, the look on her face when I finished.
Like she lost a piece of her soul.
I told her to keep this quiet or I’d kill her family, I didn’t mean it but she thought I thought.
I drove her home, heading to my next student to tutor, hoping she’d be more willing to learn…
Tommy Time-Traveller
Hi my name is Tommy the time traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking I was just here before
This moment really seems a familiar door!,
Been doing this for quite some time
At light-speed and can stop on a dime!,
Aerodynamics has nothing to do with this
Aim at a nanosecond and just won't miss!,
Can't recall from what time I originally began Not sure if I'm here now or just cycling again?!
Wish that I could remember from where I was?!
The past is all a blur and a disorientating buzz!,
Hi my name is Tommy the time-traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking that I was just here before
This moment seems a familiar door!
Been doing this for quite some time
Woe!!! Crazy rewinds and mistakes of mine!,
Here let me say this from a century ago
Projecting my voice so you hear it as so
I was, will be, am a master of time-travel
Anyone know me before I began to unravel???
Hi my name is Tommy the time traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking I was just here before
This moment really seems a familiar door!,
Been doing this for quite some time
At light-speed and can stop on a dime!,
Aerodynamics has nothing to do with this
Aim at a nanosecond and just won't miss!,
Can't recall from what time I originally began Not sure if I'm here now or just cycling again?!
Wish that I could remember from where I was?!
The past is all a blur and a disorientating buzz!,
Hi my name is Tommy the time-traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking that I was just here before
This moment seems a familiar door!
Been doing this for quite some time
Woe!!! Crazy rewinds and mistakes of mine!,
Here let me say this from a century ago
Projecting my voice so you hear it as so
I was, will be, am a master of time-travel
Anyone know me before I began to unravel???
Anonymous
Accidental Accident
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/16032/
[quote]darkshine said:
Tommy Time-Traveller
Hi my name is Tommy the time traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking I was just here before
This moment really seems a familiar door!,
Been doing this for quite some time
At light-speed and can stop on a dime!,
Aerodynamics has nothing to do with this
Aim at a nanosecond and just won't miss!,
Can't recall from what time I originally began Not sure if I'm here now or just cycling again?!
Wish that I could remember from where I was?!
The past is all a blur and a disorientating buzz!,
Hi my name is Tommy the time-traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking that I was just here before
This moment seems a familiar door!
Been doing this for quite some time
Woe!!! Crazy rewinds and mistakes of mine!,
Here let me say this from a century ago
Projecting my voice so you hear it as so
I was, will be, am a master of travel
Anyone know me before I began to unravel???
I really enjoyed this one
Tommy Time-Traveller
Hi my name is Tommy the time traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking I was just here before
This moment really seems a familiar door!,
Been doing this for quite some time
At light-speed and can stop on a dime!,
Aerodynamics has nothing to do with this
Aim at a nanosecond and just won't miss!,
Can't recall from what time I originally began Not sure if I'm here now or just cycling again?!
Wish that I could remember from where I was?!
The past is all a blur and a disorientating buzz!,
Hi my name is Tommy the time-traveller
Am I saying this now or tommorrow???
I'm a thinking that I was just here before
This moment seems a familiar door!
Been doing this for quite some time
Woe!!! Crazy rewinds and mistakes of mine!,
Here let me say this from a century ago
Projecting my voice so you hear it as so
I was, will be, am a master of travel
Anyone know me before I began to unravel???
I really enjoyed this one
Onyx Eyes (SP Summerscales)
Creatures whine
under sombre intolerance
pallid and dark at the same time
you know
she aint one of us
blood bottled fine wine
is a stolen gift out of our populous
all clocks now chime
its time
for mass exodus.
She steps from the portal
demons hold her long cape
encrusted in immortal
medieval and keyhole shaped
cellos groan a deep mourning
for all will not escape
her polished
eye aura
of onyx
black cover
for now its all over
in the early hours
of too late .
Creatures whine
under sombre intolerance
pallid and dark at the same time
you know
she aint one of us
blood bottled fine wine
is a stolen gift out of our populous
all clocks now chime
its time
for mass exodus.
She steps from the portal
demons hold her long cape
encrusted in immortal
medieval and keyhole shaped
cellos groan a deep mourning
for all will not escape
her polished
eye aura
of onyx
black cover
for now its all over
in the early hours
of too late .
[quote]Paul Summerscales said:
Onyx Eyes (SP Summerscales)
Creatures whine
under sombre intolerance
pallid and dark at the same time
you know
she aint one of us
blood bottled fine wine
is a stolen gift out of our populous
all clocks now chime
its time
for mass exodus.
She steps from the portal
demons hold her long cape
encrusted in immortal
medieval and keyhole shaped
cellos groan a deep mourning
for all will not escape
her polished
eye aura
of onyx
black cover
for now its all over
in the early hours
of too late .
Hey Paul!
I am seeing you after a long time in this site. How are you dear?
This one is a g8 entry and I am glad that you entered my contest once again. Thanks for your participation.
Onyx Eyes (SP Summerscales)
Creatures whine
under sombre intolerance
pallid and dark at the same time
you know
she aint one of us
blood bottled fine wine
is a stolen gift out of our populous
all clocks now chime
its time
for mass exodus.
She steps from the portal
demons hold her long cape
encrusted in immortal
medieval and keyhole shaped
cellos groan a deep mourning
for all will not escape
her polished
eye aura
of onyx
black cover
for now its all over
in the early hours
of too late .
Hey Paul!
I am seeing you after a long time in this site. How are you dear?
This one is a g8 entry and I am glad that you entered my contest once again. Thanks for your participation.
Dear Poets,
Another few hours till midnight I will accept your entries. Then I will judge with the good number of entries so far and will declare the winner within three working days. Hurry Up...I will be overjoyed with more talents flowing in.
Another few hours till midnight I will accept your entries. Then I will judge with the good number of entries so far and will declare the winner within three working days. Hurry Up...I will be overjoyed with more talents flowing in.
[quote]Gg78 said:
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
The dangerous thing about the character is that I am not sure to be before her without my undies:-)
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
The dangerous thing about the character is that I am not sure to be before her without my undies:-)
Well I really enjoyed the contest and all the entries. This will be the first time I am declaring winners out of so many talents and it was difficult for me. But still then I have my own reasons.
I declare Dragoyear's entry A Vampire Invited and Cori Has Whiskers Accidental Accident as the two joint winners.
Other than this I appreciate the efforts made by violet because the dramatisation was intense and very near to the context of the contest.
I had a double mind to pick up Viddax's Auyoshine The Divider of Ways because the oening was just brilliant beyond what I had in my mind, but then I am sorry to say that the title of the contest Fictious character Story Poem Contest was not justified without a proper story.
Congratulations my winners again:
Dragonyear & Cori Has Whiskers jointly.
I declare Dragoyear's entry A Vampire Invited and Cori Has Whiskers Accidental Accident as the two joint winners.
Other than this I appreciate the efforts made by violet because the dramatisation was intense and very near to the context of the contest.
I had a double mind to pick up Viddax's Auyoshine The Divider of Ways because the oening was just brilliant beyond what I had in my mind, but then I am sorry to say that the title of the contest Fictious character Story Poem Contest was not justified without a proper story.
Congratulations my winners again:
Dragonyear & Cori Has Whiskers jointly.
