Poetry competition CLOSED 10th October 2013 4:57am
WINNER
deadwolf
deadwolf
RUNNERS-UP:
PsychicApocalypse
and AscensionES
CALLING ALL METALHEADS
"sew your ass hole closed"
tooth growled the wild animosity
of anger and arggh-ness
chrome riveted snake entrails
wrapped around badass Rambo blade
spitting something disgusting
outlandishly vile
incredibly rude
is the stench from the unsavoriness
sprinkle the stripe of tiger
dragon master
live action roleplay
that mother fucker
like a jammed thumb
hurts sinister
diabolic
wish I new more words
to describe the dread
emitted from within this black t shirt
and social neurosis
which the much more metal way of saying
awfully shy
yeah, cripplingly uncomfortable
tooth growled the wild animosity
of anger and arggh-ness
chrome riveted snake entrails
wrapped around badass Rambo blade
spitting something disgusting
outlandishly vile
incredibly rude
is the stench from the unsavoriness
sprinkle the stripe of tiger
dragon master
live action roleplay
that mother fucker
like a jammed thumb
hurts sinister
diabolic
wish I new more words
to describe the dread
emitted from within this black t shirt
and social neurosis
which the much more metal way of saying
awfully shy
yeah, cripplingly uncomfortable
Anonymous
(Based on Opeth's 'The Drapery Falls')
The damsel fair,
her raven hair unravelled
past her eyes
in midnight waterfalls
sweet Jezebel, I swear
if I could take you back
I would sympathise, if I
could cauterise my heart
like candles to their flames
like poets without names,
like the gilded witch
and all her pretty games
and there the scarlet woman
she lays effervescent
to worlds and woes
beyond her eyes
her face returned
to cracks in the light
where darkness crept in
through the crypts of her lies
like candles to their flames
like poetry without a name,
like the gilded witch
and all her pretty games
The damsel fair,
her raven hair unravelled
past her eyes
in midnight waterfalls
sweet Jezebel, I swear
if I could take you back
I would sympathise, if I
could cauterise my heart
like candles to their flames
like poets without names,
like the gilded witch
and all her pretty games
and there the scarlet woman
she lays effervescent
to worlds and woes
beyond her eyes
her face returned
to cracks in the light
where darkness crept in
through the crypts of her lies
like candles to their flames
like poetry without a name,
like the gilded witch
and all her pretty games
first off \,,/ \,,/
a very old song of mine... it's along the lines of doom/ambient metal.
Angel of Hope
gazing through her empty lifeless eyes
upon the crimson sun before it dies
her shadow wanes so ever softly now
leaving her alone inside her mind
crying to the sky, conjure darkness light
wailing in her sorrow, failing might
the night is relentless here
maddening silence, it endears
never will she be, alive or free
trapped forever in her frozen life
pleading death she writhes
broken soul she hides
immortal are her fears
knowing no hate no sin
she hails from a land of fairytales
an angel of the river of hope
held against her will, how ironic still
endlessly she wanders this world
memories of her past tease her still
a need for belonging she craves
amongst the horrors now, blinded by desire
merciless she kills to fulfill
pleading death she writhes
tainted soul now rise
awaken from hell
purest soul now stained whole
the angel of death
rise to life, to god defy
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/36996-angel-of-hope/
a very old song of mine... it's along the lines of doom/ambient metal.
Angel of Hope
gazing through her empty lifeless eyes
upon the crimson sun before it dies
her shadow wanes so ever softly now
leaving her alone inside her mind
crying to the sky, conjure darkness light
wailing in her sorrow, failing might
the night is relentless here
maddening silence, it endears
never will she be, alive or free
trapped forever in her frozen life
pleading death she writhes
broken soul she hides
immortal are her fears
knowing no hate no sin
she hails from a land of fairytales
an angel of the river of hope
held against her will, how ironic still
endlessly she wanders this world
memories of her past tease her still
a need for belonging she craves
amongst the horrors now, blinded by desire
merciless she kills to fulfill
pleading death she writhes
tainted soul now rise
awaken from hell
purest soul now stained whole
the angel of death
rise to life, to god defy
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/36996-angel-of-hope/
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/150/f/2011/140/2/0/necrophilia_by_deadheadhorror-d3grlq9.jpg
My body, wanting
Ready to burst
Stiff and cold,
but writhing in thirst.
I passed a month below,
maggots feast on my decaying flesh.
Some one dugged me up,
waking me from my rest.
Eyes shown bright red,
with a body in heat.
Warm scat liquid poured upon me,
and my dead body was filled
with his seed.
With a thrust, he came blood
into my rotting carcass.
My body yellow and green with slime,
yet he filled my ass.
He fought with the maggots,
and fucked my mouth.
Gagged with his tool,
Bloody gel leaking out.
Violently sexy,
as the putrid jelly pours into me.
And as he finishes,
fingered my anus filled with wormies.
The Greatest thrill of the dead,
disgustingly delicious.
My skin greasy
with bloody jelly
it was all fucking Necrolicious!!
(The Dead Girl version.
Poem inspire by I Cum Blood- Cannibal Corpse)
The real lyrics are here:
http://www.metrolyrics.com/i-cum-blood-lyrics-cannibal-corpse.html
Is a VERY Rough Draft... an part of a bigger story... No chords written yet... Influenced by Iron Maiden and Iced Earth 
Revelations
Book of Revelation of Jesus Christ to Saint John the Evangelist at 6:1-8.
I watched as the Lamb opened the first of the seven seals. Then I heard one of the four living creatures say in a voice like thunder, "Come and see!" I looked, and there before me was a white horse! Its rider held a bow, and he was given a crown, and he rode out as a conqueror bent on conquest.
When the Lamb opened the second seal, I heard the second living creature say, "Come and see!" Then another horse came out, a fiery red one. Its rider was given power to take peace from the earth and to make men slay each other. To him was given a large sword.
When the Lamb opened the third seal, I heard the third living creature say, "Come and see!" I looked, and there before me was a black horse! Its rider was holding a pair of scales in his hand. Then I heard what sounded like a voice among the four living creatures, saying, "A quart of wheat for a day's wages, and three quarts of barley for a day's wages, and do not damage the oil and the wine!"
When the Lamb opened the fourth seal, I heard the voice of the fourth living creature say, "Come and see!" I looked and there before me was a pale horse! Its rider was named Death, and Hell was following close behind him. They were given power over a fourth of the earth to kill by sword, famine, and plague, and by the wild beasts of the earth.
[size=3]The Four[/size]
In a voice that sounds like thunder, The living creatures said “come and see”,
Rising forth from the four corners, the horsemen ride on colored steeds,
Obeying the voice of the Master, riding out they sing
“Glory to GOD, Hallowed be thy name;”
“The Four seals, opened by the Lamb”
“Bringing forth terror and justice, Unknown since the reign of man”
“His is the truth, accept faith, we will devour, we ride alone”
The Pale Rider
The prophecy fulfilled, The Pale Rider Is Revealed;
I walked the sands of time… I always live and die;
But do you believe in Love… I too have Loved;
It always brings me here;
I set aside my own will… in faith of his kingdom come be fulfilled;
For the Greater good of GOD… I fought his Holy wars Loyally;
I shed blood for his power and His Glory;
He took her from me… I prayed for her soul… I prayed for her peace;
Can you tell me what war is… Can you tell me what Love is;
What is life dammed eternally… How is this reward… I served you Loyally;
This faith I defy… In the blood lies the life;
The House of Drăculești brings forth the Dragon king;
In this war I ride alone…Red blood flows, forever taking peace away from the thrones;
He took her from me… With all of the darkness I avenge… He took her from me;
Feasting on blood from the children of light… Bodies hang in the streets from the doors;
I am the dragon of wars; I am the dragon of flames… the blood is the life…
Hunger fills the street as light turns to black… old and young go with nothing to eat…
Living for love and dying in hate… My soul is forever stained and walks alone;
My followers are near… My churches will spread… My kingdom is here;
Much Power is given me… I am your inner fear… Death and Hell follows near;
Revelations
Book of Revelation of Jesus Christ to Saint John the Evangelist at 6:1-8.
I watched as the Lamb opened the first of the seven seals. Then I heard one of the four living creatures say in a voice like thunder, "Come and see!" I looked, and there before me was a white horse! Its rider held a bow, and he was given a crown, and he rode out as a conqueror bent on conquest.
When the Lamb opened the second seal, I heard the second living creature say, "Come and see!" Then another horse came out, a fiery red one. Its rider was given power to take peace from the earth and to make men slay each other. To him was given a large sword.
When the Lamb opened the third seal, I heard the third living creature say, "Come and see!" I looked, and there before me was a black horse! Its rider was holding a pair of scales in his hand. Then I heard what sounded like a voice among the four living creatures, saying, "A quart of wheat for a day's wages, and three quarts of barley for a day's wages, and do not damage the oil and the wine!"
When the Lamb opened the fourth seal, I heard the voice of the fourth living creature say, "Come and see!" I looked and there before me was a pale horse! Its rider was named Death, and Hell was following close behind him. They were given power over a fourth of the earth to kill by sword, famine, and plague, and by the wild beasts of the earth.
[size=3]The Four[/size]
In a voice that sounds like thunder, The living creatures said “come and see”,
Rising forth from the four corners, the horsemen ride on colored steeds,
Obeying the voice of the Master, riding out they sing
“Glory to GOD, Hallowed be thy name;”
“The Four seals, opened by the Lamb”
“Bringing forth terror and justice, Unknown since the reign of man”
“His is the truth, accept faith, we will devour, we ride alone”
The Pale Rider
The prophecy fulfilled, The Pale Rider Is Revealed;
I walked the sands of time… I always live and die;
But do you believe in Love… I too have Loved;
It always brings me here;
I set aside my own will… in faith of his kingdom come be fulfilled;
For the Greater good of GOD… I fought his Holy wars Loyally;
I shed blood for his power and His Glory;
He took her from me… I prayed for her soul… I prayed for her peace;
Can you tell me what war is… Can you tell me what Love is;
What is life dammed eternally… How is this reward… I served you Loyally;
This faith I defy… In the blood lies the life;
The House of Drăculești brings forth the Dragon king;
In this war I ride alone…Red blood flows, forever taking peace away from the thrones;
He took her from me… With all of the darkness I avenge… He took her from me;
Feasting on blood from the children of light… Bodies hang in the streets from the doors;
I am the dragon of wars; I am the dragon of flames… the blood is the life…
Hunger fills the street as light turns to black… old and young go with nothing to eat…
Living for love and dying in hate… My soul is forever stained and walks alone;
My followers are near… My churches will spread… My kingdom is here;
Much Power is given me… I am your inner fear… Death and Hell follows near;
