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someone least expected
kourtnissixxx
Forum Posts: 928
Dangerous Mind
12
Joined 12th July 2011Forum Posts: 928
Poetry Contest Description
That someone who has caught your interest more than once on DU
I'm not looking for your DU crush but rather a person who has surprised you with their poetics on separate occasions. May It be quality, content, or the person they have presented behind the poetic demeanor; accidentally or purposely. Write a poem about them in any form you like.
Rules:
*you get one new poem
*no collabs or prose
*make it anonymous
Rules:
*you get one new poem
*no collabs or prose
*make it anonymous
slayer69
Joined 26th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 107
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 107
For One Of DU's Truest Freaks
I imagine you,
as a rose amongst thorns
cursed by the tragedy of perfection.
Cynical, dry and pretentious.
I imagine you,
as someone who likes to inspire,
but seeks inspiration in secret.
Proud, lonely and detached.
I imagine you,
as someone allot like me,
designed for their own punishment.
Abstract, hypocritical and guarded.
I imagine you,
as a friend to me.
A true poets apprentice,
Blatant, truthful and soulful.
I imagine you,
as a rose amongst thorns
cursed by the tragedy of perfection.
Cynical, dry and pretentious.
I imagine you,
as someone who likes to inspire,
but seeks inspiration in secret.
Proud, lonely and detached.
I imagine you,
as someone allot like me,
designed for their own punishment.
Abstract, hypocritical and guarded.
I imagine you,
as a friend to me.
A true poets apprentice,
Blatant, truthful and soulful.
Anonymous
Anonymous
I gather his words
as I would dried flowers
tying them up in small bundles
in the eaves of this house,
filling my bare halls
with fragrance-
petals
that shower down
as sweet confetti
upon my lips
that are seductively starved
of your name.
You are the silence
I adore in secret moments,
whose words steal breath
as they ask me to dance
through landscapes
hidden within subtle lines,
as I sing you my praise
and lay verse at your feet.
I gather his words
as I would dried flowers
tying them up in small bundles
in the eaves of this house,
filling my bare halls
with fragrance-
petals
that shower down
as sweet confetti
upon my lips
that are seductively starved
of your name.
You are the silence
I adore in secret moments,
whose words steal breath
as they ask me to dance
through landscapes
hidden within subtle lines,
as I sing you my praise
and lay verse at your feet.
AlisVolatPropriis8
Forum Posts: 322
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Oct 2011Forum Posts: 322
Wishing stone
Pour those droplets again against my calm screen
unguided red orange hues of sun bleaching
our new morning's glorious face
i left you broken in scars of star
melting space and void
queer in endless frozen hopes
coat me in walls of
she-ness and witty
political scarcasm
she radiates vanity through sin smell & smokes
clawing moon in canvas of blackened shadows,
soaking swollen white flames in hell's blood winter
for there was nothing to live without you.
Pour those droplets again against my calm screen
unguided red orange hues of sun bleaching
our new morning's glorious face
i left you broken in scars of star
melting space and void
queer in endless frozen hopes
coat me in walls of
she-ness and witty
political scarcasm
she radiates vanity through sin smell & smokes
clawing moon in canvas of blackened shadows,
soaking swollen white flames in hell's blood winter
for there was nothing to live without you.
BloodyTears
Forum Posts: 203
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 10th July 2013Forum Posts: 203
The Road Home
Her poetry, yes that’s what it is
Whether she know it or not
Slowly getting to know her
Maybe it is a bit of a crush
But it’s more than that
Before I started to come to know her
It’s her words
The ones she writes
Reminding me of home
Love and life
Dreams I’d once had
Wishes I’d wished once upon a time
Setting into motion
The strength I’d forgotten
The who, I used to be
This is what her words do to me
They bring about
Memories I’d forgotten
Long to make some more
Have a bit of fun
And enjoy life once again
Getting to my core
That part I ran away from
Because I was too scared to stay
Afraid of what I’d become
Instead of embracing who
I could turn into
I love her words
Her smile, reminding me
Of friendships I’d once had
We’d hug and kiss
Make fun of one another
Share our secrets, dreams and loves
Share a bed (no, not that way)
As we stayed up talking about running away
Just for the hell of it
Not to forget those mistakes we made
The many apologies we’d had to utter
She inspires my heart
To write a bit better
Experiment and learn
Write out my secret fantasies
I never would let out
To embrace those words I’ve begun to pen
And enjoy story telling
Once again
Inspiring me to step out of my box
Paint it with the colors of the rainbows
And all the other colors too
Get back to dancing
Around my living room
No care about who sees
As I sound like a banshee singing to the words
She brings me home
With those words of hers
And though I know
It’s a long road now
She brings me back
To my soul
And I want to know more of her
Crush or not
I know that if we were face to face
A lifelong friendship
With the strongest of bonds
Is what we could make
Her poetry, yes that’s what it is
Whether she know it or not
Slowly getting to know her
Maybe it is a bit of a crush
But it’s more than that
Before I started to come to know her
It’s her words
The ones she writes
Reminding me of home
Love and life
Dreams I’d once had
Wishes I’d wished once upon a time
Setting into motion
The strength I’d forgotten
The who, I used to be
This is what her words do to me
They bring about
Memories I’d forgotten
Long to make some more
Have a bit of fun
And enjoy life once again
Getting to my core
That part I ran away from
Because I was too scared to stay
Afraid of what I’d become
Instead of embracing who
I could turn into
I love her words
Her smile, reminding me
Of friendships I’d once had
We’d hug and kiss
Make fun of one another
Share our secrets, dreams and loves
Share a bed (no, not that way)
As we stayed up talking about running away
Just for the hell of it
Not to forget those mistakes we made
The many apologies we’d had to utter
She inspires my heart
To write a bit better
Experiment and learn
Write out my secret fantasies
I never would let out
To embrace those words I’ve begun to pen
And enjoy story telling
Once again
Inspiring me to step out of my box
Paint it with the colors of the rainbows
And all the other colors too
Get back to dancing
Around my living room
No care about who sees
As I sound like a banshee singing to the words
She brings me home
With those words of hers
And though I know
It’s a long road now
She brings me back
To my soul
And I want to know more of her
Crush or not
I know that if we were face to face
A lifelong friendship
With the strongest of bonds
Is what we could make
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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YOUR POETRY GREW ON ME
When I first looked at your poetry
I thought is was drivel
It was as though
You had put
The alphabet
Into the blender
Posted the result
Which looked like a list
Of words, helter-skelter
Not very readable
So I shut it out
Now I realize
That a poet and lyricist
Are one and the same
Oral history
Preceded poetry
The two are in parallel lanes
So you may wonder who this is about
And maybe you will know it is you
You are a wonderful poet
I admire you!
YOUR POETRY GREW ON ME
When I first looked at your poetry
I thought is was drivel
It was as though
You had put
The alphabet
Into the blender
Posted the result
Which looked like a list
Of words, helter-skelter
Not very readable
So I shut it out
Now I realize
That a poet and lyricist
Are one and the same
Oral history
Preceded poetry
The two are in parallel lanes
So you may wonder who this is about
And maybe you will know it is you
You are a wonderful poet
I admire you!
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17052
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17052
Turning Away
I turned away
I didn't look
I had nothing to say
I had nothing to see
Colours went grey
and it was no longer
anything important
But once upon a time
You mattered so much
You were the reason
I honed my pen
You were a promise
of a midnight sun
then you withered and died
Every time I see your name
I wish I could call it again
the same way I did then
its all gone now
Your shadow has faded
though silver thread flickers
Still.
I turned away
I didn't look
I had nothing to say
I had nothing to see
Colours went grey
and it was no longer
anything important
But once upon a time
You mattered so much
You were the reason
I honed my pen
You were a promise
of a midnight sun
then you withered and died
Every time I see your name
I wish I could call it again
the same way I did then
its all gone now
Your shadow has faded
though silver thread flickers
Still.
malin69
malin
Forum Posts: 820
malin
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 12th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 820
Love your poems...http://lesdebrouillards.tv/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/Caro_poesie-300x300.jpg
Love your poems, nice and light
A free way to write poetry slight
No constraint of style, but poetry
With a music inside and mystery
Love the themes you like to write
Deep and whole, light and right
The rythme inside is wonderful
Contributes to a reading restful
Love the faithfulness of your life
Who appears in your poetry nice
Even if you like to exhibe to us
Some part of intimity precious
Love pictures you like to show
Through avatars, here and now
Which allow us to understand
How you are loved by husband
Love your comments for others
Allow us to feel your brothers
In my case, so helpful for first
Steps, to avoid surely the worst
Love your style, mine too stiff
Proof by this poem like plaintiff
Who doesn't demonstrated
My capacity of progressed
You are a model as you write
Please stay always so bright
If your poetry lights this site
Hope I contribute a little bit
Love your poems, nice and light
A free way to write poetry slight
No constraint of style, but poetry
With a music inside and mystery
Love the themes you like to write
Deep and whole, light and right
The rythme inside is wonderful
Contributes to a reading restful
Love the faithfulness of your life
Who appears in your poetry nice
Even if you like to exhibe to us
Some part of intimity precious
Love pictures you like to show
Through avatars, here and now
Which allow us to understand
How you are loved by husband
Love your comments for others
Allow us to feel your brothers
In my case, so helpful for first
Steps, to avoid surely the worst
Love your style, mine too stiff
Proof by this poem like plaintiff
Who doesn't demonstrated
My capacity of progressed
You are a model as you write
Please stay always so bright
If your poetry lights this site
Hope I contribute a little bit
Anonymous
Rightfully Respected Writer
There's a lack of ego behind his pen
he's more of a writer because of it
with a confrontational, observant
sideline style that narrates and builds
by taking away
always strays to passages that ask and explain
faithfully giving more, when read once again
truths divulged and manipulated
tactfully buried in the understatements
he's so real that his fiction is honest
a self that looms larger from inclusion's removal
an exposed nerve sentiment, raw to the reader
with sneak peaks and previews that allude to deeper meanings
devour the hints, savor the flavor
he's the master alchemist
transforming life stories to paper
masterfully introspective, never overtly revealing
the protagonist, in all his strength
confesses angst and weakness
which keeps him at his strongest
he's a devoted sinner with a warrior spirit
but, every God knows he tries
with all that's in him
There's a lack of ego behind his pen
he's more of a writer because of it
with a confrontational, observant
sideline style that narrates and builds
by taking away
always strays to passages that ask and explain
faithfully giving more, when read once again
truths divulged and manipulated
tactfully buried in the understatements
he's so real that his fiction is honest
a self that looms larger from inclusion's removal
an exposed nerve sentiment, raw to the reader
with sneak peaks and previews that allude to deeper meanings
devour the hints, savor the flavor
he's the master alchemist
transforming life stories to paper
masterfully introspective, never overtly revealing
the protagonist, in all his strength
confesses angst and weakness
which keeps him at his strongest
he's a devoted sinner with a warrior spirit
but, every God knows he tries
with all that's in him
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 1483
He speaks of the dark,
and endless,
words that make you shiver.
Sophisticate, and
assembled,
utterly neatly put together.
The pieces he has
produce,
have scarred my mind.
I just love his sinister-like
poems,
and interesting rhymes.
Whether they be long,
short,
or just a few words.
So catchy, rhyming,
they belong on
Halloween cards.
I've been blown away,
surprise at his
precise dark poetry.
I'm not the only one,
who laughs at the idea of
Necrocisity.
By now,
you might already know
who this poet may be.
But if you don't,
go read some dark writes,
and you'll see,
this poet's identity.
violet
Vi
Forum Posts: 2523
Vi
Dangerous Mind
6
Joined 13th Feb 2011 Forum Posts: 2523
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AlisVolatPropriis8
Forum Posts: 322
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Oct 2011Forum Posts: 322
Wow,i enjoyed writing it..:),least expected though
congratulations to Miki and Kitty as well.
Thankyou.
congratulations to Miki and Kitty as well.
Thankyou.
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 1483
Congrats Rakhi Rudra
Nice entry!!
and also congrats to Miki and Kitty too!!
Nice entry!!
and also congrats to Miki and Kitty too!!