Poetry competition CLOSED 18th April 2011 10:57am
WINNER
Viddax (Lord Viddax)
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RUNNER-UP: Jestalessa

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Romance

tidalnymph
Kasandra
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 13th Nov 2010
Forum Posts: 95

[color=Navy]
i.


She's the wrong woman
and you want
her bad.

She's a shipwreck
in a hooker's green
silk dress and you
can't wait to
take it off
her;

the more
desperate
the better.


ii.

Now, her dark
hazel gaze is
fixated right
at you,

thinking
of the same
thing;

She can't wait
to break your
heart.
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***this, doesn't necessarily reflect
my view about romance, I just want to go
against the flow since most of the
previous poems were sweet
and pleasant.

anandosen
Fire of Insight
India 6awards
Joined 22nd Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 316

Golden Yellow

My unlucky color of love,
I lost two of them with the same,
One I lost to my beloved,
And the other one to Australia in the game.
I proposed her that day-
Deep blue Indians chasing the golden yellows,
She never answered again to me,
She was raped by some unknown fellows.
That day I was wearing my golden yellow T-shirt,
And I never repeated again,
I am still weeping alone,
Don't touch me ever, I am still filled with pain.

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

Okay guys, I'm going to hand the winner over to Lord Viddaxion for creating such a vivid image and used the colour throughout. Second place goes to Jestalessa for the childlike, easy way the poem flowed with the colour she used.

Thank you all for entering. It was so difficult to choose as all the entries were fabulous. I'll get on with the next one. :)

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