Poetry competition CLOSED 6th April 2011 10:31am
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mjs211 (MikeTheEngineer)
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Mother's Day

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

As Mother's Day is nearly here, write a poem about your mama.
As Mother's Day is nearly here, write a poem about your mama. I'll judge them in a week.

Dragonyear
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 1st Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 323

Gaia


Our Mother Earth


The whispers suggest

Her center is a smoldering molten core

All consuming melt of fire

I am skeptic of this witchery called science

Imagining the center to have a heart much like mine



Vulnerable and sore

Vibrant muscle drumming in gratitude

Capillary tunnels flowing out spreading life

Her blood runs blue

Into cavernous basins

Crystalline grotto of shimmering hue




Beating so profoundly

Resonating to the whole, in a world that thrives on music

In purity of tribal ritual to intricate unfurling of orchestral fantasia

Echoes of hollow sharp brass cutting the steady pound of the march to war

To serene fluid lickings of virgin fingertips caressing the strings of the harp

In the steamy moaning, dripping sex of onyx lips singing Mississippi blues



Surging vibrations in vast myriad of artery carnations

Fed by blood pumping of the same hallowed maternal heart

mjs211
MikeTheEngineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 20awards
Joined 22nd Aug 2010
Forum Posts: 1572

Your mama's so fat
she pours mayo
on chocolate cake

and she's so ugly
Notre Dame investigated,
thinking they lost
a gargoyle

and she's so loose
you could play
hide-and-seek
between her legs.

But doncha say nothing
'bout my mama!

rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
Canada 32awards
Joined 4th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 4409

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   < the hot reward from your sweet tits >

   my mouth was made for sucking tits
   my head was trained for sucking tits
   and my hands
   were already grabbing for your tits
   pressing on the warm sides of your tits
   learning the soft rhythm of pressing and sucking
   of pressing and sucking and tasting the hot reward
   of your sweet milk

   thanks, mom

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slimshady
Twisted Dreamer
Joined 22nd Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 100

^^Last 2 was kinda funny.... But the first one??? Such writings are very difficult to read, let alone understand

slimshady
Twisted Dreamer
Joined 22nd Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 100

Dragonyear said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--561-0-4]slimshady said:
^^Last 2 was kinda funny.... But the first one??? Such writings are very difficult to read, let alone understand


I take that as a compliment :)

I've read ya works before and know what staff you are made up of, but this one....well, like you said take it as a compliment

rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
Canada 32awards
Joined 4th Dec 2009
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[font=Courier New][size=2]
  yes, definitely a compliment

  but what's an appropriate gift for our earth-mother on her day?
  i guess flowers are out of the question.

LesAngelWi
SSensitiveSoul
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 6th Feb 2011
Forum Posts: 219

Mother

Mother, friend, confidant not hardly.
Drug addict, stranger, liar more likely.
The mention of you stirs anger and hatred.
The thought of you invokes frustration and hostility.
Your death brought me closure and relief,
happiness that you couldnt poison more.

Mother ah hardly


poet Anonymous

Mom

I never understood how you and dad came together
you 33 with 2 kids, his background
of renting lonely rooms and staying with strangers
and even if I was an accident
I'm glad you were glad to have me
cause I like it here
most of the time

Thanks mom
for the cookies on sunday
and the cable tv

CruelHandedWriter
Jamie Rhodes
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 8awards
Joined 20th Sep 2009
Forum Posts: 1426

I did the good son thing
and picked up the phone today.
Somethings never change.
I give you what pity
I have left.
That husband,
the prescrition
and an unnapreciative
little bastard
you need
living far away,
sat here,
wishing you well
in his own way.

All my love
on mother's day.

Gg78
Tyrant of Words
United States 26awards
Joined 5th Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 9051

Last three are good

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

[font=Verdana]Mike wins, with Jamie as runner-up. Mike made me laugh, Jamie made me depressed. Both admirable goals, well achieved.

LesAngelWi
SSensitiveSoul
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 6th Feb 2011
Forum Posts: 219

congrats jaime and mike. wonderful poems

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