Tangled in 50?
LobodeSanPedro
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Her blue song
Trade my blue smoked mountains
because you wanna surf?
Trade serving blue plate specials
for whatever I can get?
Trade my womb one more time
because you want a son?
Trade my value as a woman
because your life as a man
Hasn't begun?
Untangled from you,
I traded for him.
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I'm impressed by the entries so far, thank you all :-)
LobodeSanPedro
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The inhumanity of blue
Turquoise numbers contaminated my friend Mr. Goldberg's forearm
And humanity
Dad basked in the defiance of Malcom
Not Martin's azure tranquility
Ultimately dad's cut down
Cobalt steel from behind the blue wall
Today I'm tattooed
A number
"Call it if you're arrested."
blue wall
March
Past
Through
Over
For a boy eating candy, some of it
blue
Turquoise numbers contaminated my friend Mr. Goldberg's forearm
And humanity
Dad basked in the defiance of Malcom
Not Martin's azure tranquility
Ultimately dad's cut down
Cobalt steel from behind the blue wall
Today I'm tattooed
A number
"Call it if you're arrested."
blue wall
March
Past
Through
Over
For a boy eating candy, some of it
blue
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
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Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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A boy lies,
some where in this blue horizon.
Whether it may be underground,
he's still some one's son.
[color=Blue]A lone tree,
with bony finger-like branches
are reaching out.
A little boy's soul,
is being chased,
my a hell hound.
A mother's tears,
are wasted some where.
For a son, gone missing,
in this breathtaking atmosphere.
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“Sapphire Loneliness”
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You were a
raging-riptide,
and
though
I tried,
I could not swim
against your flow,
it killed my spirit.
Constantly,
you pulled me down
into a kaleidoscope
of azures and cobalt,
navies and indigo,
the darkest-depths
of untold pain.
Now,
I
wear
sapphire-loneliness
for
you
and
cry.
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You were a
raging-riptide,
and
though
I tried,
I could not swim
against your flow,
it killed my spirit.
Constantly,
you pulled me down
into a kaleidoscope
of azures and cobalt,
navies and indigo,
the darkest-depths
of untold pain.
Now,
I
wear
sapphire-loneliness
for
you
and
cry.
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these are all such great entries/reads..thank you all..
souladareatease
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A Blue Period
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He fell
into the dream
holding on
with his everything
strings tied
to nimble fingers
bled blue
to tangled tears
apocalyptic raids
as encircled secrets
flew through
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
lay blue
and once ignited
he spiraled
flying once again
http://youtu.be/itRrG4jCa1w
He fell
into the dream
holding on
with his everything
strings tied
to nimble fingers
bled blue
to tangled tears
apocalyptic raids
as encircled secrets
flew through
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
lay blue
and once ignited
he spiraled
flying once again
ZexionKingdomHeart
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Surreal Paradise
The quickest stroke of the hand
Could be your last muse
Taking all the conscience in the land
And its all you can use
The water entraps you, in its icy grasp
You will float to the bottom
And hit the rocky floor
Arms flailing everywhere
You had no idea what might have ensued
Now you're at the bottom
Tangled in blue.
The quickest stroke of the hand
Could be your last muse
Taking all the conscience in the land
And its all you can use
The water entraps you, in its icy grasp
You will float to the bottom
And hit the rocky floor
Arms flailing everywhere
You had no idea what might have ensued
Now you're at the bottom
Tangled in blue.
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Tough picking the winner here, I usually don't award runner up but there were so many good entries...Thank you ALL!
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Congratulations to all. Thanks miki...great comp.
strider...:)
strider...:)
ZexionKingdomHeart
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Thanks for the win! and congrats to everyone else! your poems were all great!