Dark City
Atakti
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Bump!
kriticool
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
.:Road to no...mostly:.
As it all unfurls. Welcome to my world
What you’ll find? The times, alotta times unkind
Oft times the repercussions from bad boy nights
Amber liquids mixed with amber lights
Not quite right when they meet up with them red eyes
Wannabe wise guys…
The ones looking to not slow down for nothing
Here is where the common creep is steep
that come-up…a climb-up with
intentions to reap. But most the time
just another “not so good” fight
thrown in, it’s what we sight…
Another sawed-off gone off into the night
Perhaps tonight…just more of that blight
The flipped script wherein
things weren’t meant to go right
As it all unfurls..
Next thing known is war of the worlds
It’s onto another bad bite
This one another one with that devil’s kiss
You know, some just love to get pissed…others?
Looking for that exit ‘cause
There 'art the bliss…Behind it?
Trouble indicating that it just won’t miss
Death…is a smirk… a wink, a nod
Where full metal jackets can’t protect the whole bod
Here where the attitude often shows itself rude
The kickback? The laying down of another dude
All dependent upon who’s the host or
Who want it most or
Who’s to be left standing?
That’s because them curb creepers
Them & their weapons be so demanding
It’s the heat they be fanning
Keeping a bad taste; a salt taste in they mouth
Sloshing it ‘round with they amber liquor
Gats gripped pistols smaller, some a bit bigger
Like tats on them asses of gold diggers
Now adding on the yin & yang of
young incorrigible figures
Figuring they’re some type of
concrete defenders
We see ‘em leaning into the ongoing chaos
Working it pretty hard
trying us with all they malice
Never learning how they all hyped by they yearning
Craving for they last day in this world
Sums here getting at it watching it all unfurl
In the end…pouring our own blood
spilling it right onto that concrete
adding those last few drops of some fancy tequila
Life death, a trip; Call it a real deal killer
Wherein short lived is any worthwhile empathy
There’s no apathy for broke minds with big talk
Wherein one never ever.. Rarely safely walks
All of it going down whilst the Grim Reaper stalks
These are the happenings that blow the mind
The same shit every bit and it’s
happening all the time
Atakti
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
kriticool, I really really want to hear a reading of this!
Please, all entrants, send me your YouTube links. If you need help with the technical side, PM me. Don't make me beg...
Please, all entrants, send me your YouTube links. If you need help with the technical side, PM me. Don't make me beg...
Diviy
The Illusionist ofSorrow
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The Illusionist ofSorrow
Thought Provoker
3
Joined 10th June 2012 Forum Posts: 341
Night Surgeon,
Alas, the night has come at last,
Hiding every inch of life,
And who would I be, to disagree,
I hold no tolerance for simple strife,
Though I must say, indeed,
That you mouth would be better shut,
Nothing though, I cannot fix,
With a simple nip and simple cut,
Who am I, you might of asked,
Before or after you fade to black,
Night surgeons have no need for names,
So one could simply call me Jack,
Now I do believe this case is bad,
In fact the worst that I have seen,
It seems my knife has taken a liking,
To both kidneys and your spleen,
By all means, That was rude,
Dying before I wanted you to,
I guess these intestines and ovaries,
Are now of no use to you.
Alas, the night has come at last,
Hiding every inch of life,
And who would I be, to disagree,
I hold no tolerance for simple strife,
Though I must say, indeed,
That you mouth would be better shut,
Nothing though, I cannot fix,
With a simple nip and simple cut,
Who am I, you might of asked,
Before or after you fade to black,
Night surgeons have no need for names,
So one could simply call me Jack,
Now I do believe this case is bad,
In fact the worst that I have seen,
It seems my knife has taken a liking,
To both kidneys and your spleen,
By all means, That was rude,
Dying before I wanted you to,
I guess these intestines and ovaries,
Are now of no use to you.
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thank you, Diviy, for your entry!
:)
:)
Anonymous
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to dust off my home accent a little. Daaaammmn that felt good
Youtube video reading link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
Urban decay
So yeah
I'm a bit more council estate than country
or so my parole officer keeps telling me,
and yeah, I know where you can score
and how you can earn this shit for free
off people who are good for it
who know people just like me
and yeah,
there's some mean cunts down the street
that will kick off 'cause of weed
because it's all about the money
and the notoriety and the greed,
and by the way
your fifteen year old daughter
is fucking strangers for blow
(you can even film it if you want
if you keep it on the down low)
and there aint a day goes by
without another killing,
maybe we'll petrol bomb a car
and give the streets a good grilling
and watch the kids walk past
on their way to school
while they're dragging out a body bag
containing some tooled up fool,
who kept his friends close
but forgot to watch his enemies
who caught up with him on a side street
and executed him on his knees
but there's a life to lead and bills to pay
and pills to drop and shit to say
and blame to pin on the dear old prime minister
that the streets have got so fucking sinister,
and we welcome you all to our urban decay
but don't worry kid
nobody gets out alive
anyway
Youtube video reading link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
Urban decay
So yeah
I'm a bit more council estate than country
or so my parole officer keeps telling me,
and yeah, I know where you can score
and how you can earn this shit for free
off people who are good for it
who know people just like me
and yeah,
there's some mean cunts down the street
that will kick off 'cause of weed
because it's all about the money
and the notoriety and the greed,
and by the way
your fifteen year old daughter
is fucking strangers for blow
(you can even film it if you want
if you keep it on the down low)
and there aint a day goes by
without another killing,
maybe we'll petrol bomb a car
and give the streets a good grilling
and watch the kids walk past
on their way to school
while they're dragging out a body bag
containing some tooled up fool,
who kept his friends close
but forgot to watch his enemies
who caught up with him on a side street
and executed him on his knees
but there's a life to lead and bills to pay
and pills to drop and shit to say
and blame to pin on the dear old prime minister
that the streets have got so fucking sinister,
and we welcome you all to our urban decay
but don't worry kid
nobody gets out alive
anyway
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Missyyyyyyyy, thank you for the linkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk. That was an AWESOME read, thank you!
Ooh, can you tell I'm excited!
Ooh, can you tell I'm excited!
Anonymous
oh bless.
Anonymous
“Living 3-D”
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6531913061_de531c6668_z.jpg
The brilliant sun
blinded me through
ragged-curtains,
a baby somewhere wailed,
things smelled like urine.
Jesus, it was
another day already.
I’d been working
the downtown beat,
undercover,
busting hookers for my income,
life wasn’t so sweet.
Like angry woodpeckers,
jackhammers echoed
down the street,
the drone of traffic
stung my crusty ears,
Man, I was tired and
it was only 6 a.m..
I heard Betty,
the homeboy-diva,
humping for dollars
out in the roach-mill hallway.
I could have put
my wrinkled clothes on,
flashed my badge and
arrested her for
making ends meet.
But, I didn’t.
Would it really have
made a difference in
the broader scheme of things?
Me here,
her there,
living our
lives in 3-D,
another day,
another dollar,
another dirty shirt
or sheet,
depending on
what side you were on.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6531913061_de531c6668_z.jpg
The brilliant sun
blinded me through
ragged-curtains,
a baby somewhere wailed,
things smelled like urine.
Jesus, it was
another day already.
I’d been working
the downtown beat,
undercover,
busting hookers for my income,
life wasn’t so sweet.
Like angry woodpeckers,
jackhammers echoed
down the street,
the drone of traffic
stung my crusty ears,
Man, I was tired and
it was only 6 a.m..
I heard Betty,
the homeboy-diva,
humping for dollars
out in the roach-mill hallway.
I could have put
my wrinkled clothes on,
flashed my badge and
arrested her for
making ends meet.
But, I didn’t.
Would it really have
made a difference in
the broader scheme of things?
Me here,
her there,
living our
lives in 3-D,
another day,
another dollar,
another dirty shirt
or sheet,
depending on
what side you were on.
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thanks, Strider, for your entry!
One week left...
One week left...
mbass33
matthew bass
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matthew bass
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 22nd Nov 2010Forum Posts: 334
Metaphors In Uptown
Matthew Bass
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/92657-metaphors/
Chicago can be so cold
the pigeons shake themselves,
stuffing their heads in their necks
and pray for sun at 2:am
just like everyone else.
Like everyone else,
they find no comfort
in nooks of decayed rusted
L track support beams
that should not be able
to support anything. Or
the rickety sounds of train cars
bumbling along to a statacco beat
praying they don't fall apart over you.
The 12 degrees
on the automated bank sign
broke my heart, but the homeless man
who asked for two dollars shattered it
on the sidewalk.
There is a difference between
the way a man panhandles for a fix
and because he is not sure
he won't freeze to death
that night.
We both knew
the sixty cents in my pocket
wasn't enough.
He said,
"Please, I just ned two dollars
for a sandwich and a pop".
But his eyes said he wanted
to be treated like a person.
They were so big his eyelids
disappeared in front of me
and I couldn't look at him
because all I saw was my
negative account balance
imprinted in my head.
Like everything else,
the yuppies stumbling out of
the Green Mill or the Uptown Lounge
never saw the irony or the poetry
underneath those L tracks
just a few blocks from
brand new condos;
A metaphor for Uptown's
recent past.
I asked God that night
for one more week, and
the strength to not fall
under those rusted beams
that support the red line;
A metaphor of an icon
that might fall
any moment.
I told myself:
"I will never be that man"
"I will never freeze to death
in hopeless anonymous darkness"
"I will never stumble
down the hip sidewealks
of a drunken urban-chic mirage"
"I will never be the
person on the 2:am train
defeated by the unfair fight
in the money grab of the fleeting moment".
Next time
I'll give that man two dollars
and ask him his name.
Matthew Bass
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/92657-metaphors/
Chicago can be so cold
the pigeons shake themselves,
stuffing their heads in their necks
and pray for sun at 2:am
just like everyone else.
Like everyone else,
they find no comfort
in nooks of decayed rusted
L track support beams
that should not be able
to support anything. Or
the rickety sounds of train cars
bumbling along to a statacco beat
praying they don't fall apart over you.
The 12 degrees
on the automated bank sign
broke my heart, but the homeless man
who asked for two dollars shattered it
on the sidewalk.
There is a difference between
the way a man panhandles for a fix
and because he is not sure
he won't freeze to death
that night.
We both knew
the sixty cents in my pocket
wasn't enough.
He said,
"Please, I just ned two dollars
for a sandwich and a pop".
But his eyes said he wanted
to be treated like a person.
They were so big his eyelids
disappeared in front of me
and I couldn't look at him
because all I saw was my
negative account balance
imprinted in my head.
Like everything else,
the yuppies stumbling out of
the Green Mill or the Uptown Lounge
never saw the irony or the poetry
underneath those L tracks
just a few blocks from
brand new condos;
A metaphor for Uptown's
recent past.
I asked God that night
for one more week, and
the strength to not fall
under those rusted beams
that support the red line;
A metaphor of an icon
that might fall
any moment.
I told myself:
"I will never be that man"
"I will never freeze to death
in hopeless anonymous darkness"
"I will never stumble
down the hip sidewealks
of a drunken urban-chic mirage"
"I will never be the
person on the 2:am train
defeated by the unfair fight
in the money grab of the fleeting moment".
Next time
I'll give that man two dollars
and ask him his name.
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thank you, matthew bass... your avatar shows you with a microphone... any readings? *hopeful grin*
mbass33
matthew bass
Forum Posts: 334
matthew bass
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 22nd Nov 2010Forum Posts: 334
yep, at least twice a week
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
... so, please can we have a link to youtube? where you host the vids of said readings....? Looking for these links.
Look, Missy sent this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
which was brill! Anyone else wanna get me all excited? (I'm stooping to euphemisms now, have mercy people!)
Look, Missy sent this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
which was brill! Anyone else wanna get me all excited? (I'm stooping to euphemisms now, have mercy people!)
Carpe_Noctem
Forum Posts: 3040
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 3rd Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3040
Atakti said:... so, please can we have a link to youtube? where you host the vids of said readings....? Looking for these links.
Look, Missy sent this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
which was brill! Anyone else wanna get me all excited? (I'm stooping to euphemisms now, have mercy people!)
Soon mate promise
Look, Missy sent this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83Ycw4voSWk&feature=youtu.be
which was brill! Anyone else wanna get me all excited? (I'm stooping to euphemisms now, have mercy people!)
Soon mate promise