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Dark Erotic Bliss

poet Anonymous

"True Believers"
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She craved ancient ritual,
prayed to gods
and
the goddesses,
no less,
I was conjured
from the Gates of Hell.
She made her confession
on all fours
splendid ripeness.
Angling up
I pressed her inside,
orb-deep.
She bucked
like a crazed-demon,
frenzied,
my veined-tool
glowed red-hot,
crystals danced,
emblazoned,
my seed flowed
from balls below.
I liquidated her senses,
she begged forgiveness
with curled toes,
tasted my lava
spilling into
her behind.
Our infection streamed
quivering thighs as
we melted Heaven,
eyes crying
as true believers,
not liars.  

BlackVelvetRose
Ragdoll Raven
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A slave's desire



a voice spoken on the breeze
brought me here to this place with ease
in the secrecy of the night
a gift of slave for You upon this twilight...

bound by Your chains
spread between these graves
my flesh embraced by Your whip
for You, Master my cunt will drip...

Your hands find my breasts
as Your teeth devour their pink crests
this slaves passion
burns only within her Masters flame...

You are the pleasure that brings me pain
under this opalescent sky
Your smile i bejewel with this slaves tears
cradled in Your lust as i fondle Your desire...

tonight i am Yours
i weep only for You
i am Your breathing feast
a tainted girl for your curiosity...

i will forever walk within this secrecy
pleasures driven by flesh
and the cold lingering pinch of submission
as i beg for the sting of Your cane...

i walk behind You
sin for my leash
as You tug on my chain
i am at Your command again...

NimmieAmee
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(I'm rather of the 'less is more' camp of erotic poetry, for the most part)


A lesson in patience


I wait for you
excitedly

I wait for you
bare flesh flushed hot

I wait for you
heart hammering

I wait for you
trying to anticipate

I wait for you
self-consciousness creeping in

I wait for you
aware of my nudity

I wait for you
impatiently

I wait for you
in enforced darkness

I wait for you
heart rate slowing

I wait for you
in silicone flavored silence

I wait for you
no longer expectant

I wait for you
in shackled stillness

I wait for you
calmly

I wait for you
collar weighing heavily

I wait for you
patient at last


Lookawaynow
Rose
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 7th Jan 2013
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Lisa Doyle aged 18





Oh how she loved a country gent.  
Few came her way,  
But,  
when they did..  
   
No-one would see her arrive,  
They were discrete, Never charming.  
They were paying to play and dirty
they wanted it.  
   
No place sacred as he buggered her violently
till her blood flowed.  
This gentlemen beast fucker would pay  
   
She had brought the tape,  
Pushing him down, She taped his hands to
the bedstead.  
Playing the roll of the willing servant,
To the masters needs.  
 
He smiled at the thought.
 
The pain from between her legs brought tears  
His cum would make that pain go away real soon  
 
She smiled at the thought..
   
His cock stood proud splattered in her blood.  
   
She watched him as her pussy swallowed is cock.  
   
She rose and fell upon his cock  
as he watched her tits move with
the motions.    
 
He was close, She could feel his
cock ready to pump the contents of
his balls into her.
 
   
With quick movements she used the tape,
And covered his nose and mouth,
Blocking his airways as intended.  
 
   
His eyes flaired wide open,
With the realisation of his soon to be
demise dawned on him.  
     
   
He struggled violently.  
     
   
She stayed upright and still...watching and waiting  
as he bucked like a bronco the dance of death.  
   
The last thing he saw  
was her smile.  
 
The last thing he remembered  
was his cum shooting into her.  
   
Finally he lay prone.    
 
Her orgasm took hold as she rode his lifeless form.  
His cock twitching it's own deathly dance
as his balls pumped for the last time.
   
What would the papers say  
she would read it with little interest  
   
 
She hoped it would be a girl,
One of good looks and
now good stock.
 
She laughed out loud
feeling his seed leek out.      
as she walked into the nights fog


Written by Lookawaynow  

Lookawaynow
Rose
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 126

A Tasty Revenge ! extreme content !





The moonless smog hid her features well.
To be true she did'nt clearly see him either.
Plying the trade, Blade close at hand
She waited for pleasure and pain.
He turned up, Her arm grabbed.
The iron railings between them
His breath foul
Breasts found by dirty hands.
He wasnt concerned for pussy,
As he pushed down, He unzipped
His manhood pushed through the rails.
 
Upto that moment he was a nobody a nothing,
To let him gain pleasure from experienced
hands without any pain were the only thoughts..
But when his dick came into sight, She knew,
She knew she had seen it in years past,
Hands caressed it to be sure.
Huge it were, Her arse quivered at the
painful memories, One so young shouldnt see
such acts let alone act them out for this animal.
Oh she knew what he wanted alright,
He wanted a quick fix and who was she
to let him down..
 
She sucked the head of this beastly cock good,
Wanting to give him his best explosion ever.
One he would never forget..
 
Gripping his balls as they swelled and moved,
Ready to unleash his necter.
Her other hand gripped the blade.
His hands gripping the rails readying himself
His cock head swelled as he neared his climax.
Oh she was ready too.
He was too busy looking for passers by to notice
the blade close to his shaft.
His cock twitched, Her mouth started to fill.
One slice and shafts blood carrying vein cut through.
He did'nt notice in his orgasmic state that his cock
now pulsed blood.
 
Walking away into the night.
His screams of realisation echoing off the walls.  
The taste of him on her tongue.
Orgasmic heaven taking her away.
 
This had indeed been a good night


Written by Lookawaynow  

Lookawaynow
Rose
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Damn Him! ! extreme content !





Damn him!
 
Why am i doing this?
Standing at his front door, The time
requested. I feel like a sacrificial slut
For his dirty sexual desires.
 
He answers the door.
 
Damn him!
 
He made me wait again.
 
He ushers me inside, Making
glances up and down the street.
 
 
Hate him now.
 
I step inside and into the kitchen.
 
Damn him!
 
 
He makes me stand still,
As he takes a slow walk around me.
Feeling his eyes ripping at my soul.
 
"Are you wet?"
Oh he's a smart one
He thinks I'm going to answer that?.
I look to the floor.
"Yes.."
Was all i said.
 
"Show me."  
 
His voice now commanding
 
The cheek of him, Bloody pervert!.
 
 
I lift up my skirt,  
A damp patch is visible.
 
 
He makes me wait.
 
 
As i hold my skirt up...
 
 
He moves closer to me.
I feel his breath on my face.
Oh so close, I can feel his cock.
Against my damp spot, As if probing
For a way in.
If he thinks that's happening then he'll
Be well wrong!.
 
 
His hand travels down, As he watches me watch him.
He moves his fingers into my knickers with ease.
A sharp intake of breath, As his fingers push oh so slowly
 
into my wet pussy.
"Yes indeed," He says
.."Very..very wet".
 
Damn him!
 
Taking his fingers out
He say's one word..
 
"Open".
 
He expects me to open my mouth?!.
And accept his fingers?
Fool is he!..
 
My mouth opens slowly
to accept his fingers,
Slowly sucking them.
As eye contact is kept....
 
 
So here I stood in this mans kitchen, Having kissed  
my partner goodbye a short while ago, And dropped
the kids off to school, A prim and proper wife, Now
standing with my damp knickers on show, With a  
naked man about to make me his slut whore.
The shame of it, The taste of myself in my mouth,
and the faint taste of my husbands cum from that
morning lingered on my taste buds.
 
 
"Ok..bend over that table"
 
 
I did as I was told.
He lifted my skirts and pulled off my knickers.
My bum on show, On the very table he and his
family a little while ago had had breakfast on.
I leaned closer and licked my bum cheeks.
 
 
"Don't leave marks please.. "My partner will see"
 
 
Damn him!
 
 
He slapped me hard on my bum.
"Sorry.."   I said..
As he gorged on my bum, biting and sucking....
 
 
 
He finally stopped attacking my bum.
I'd have to keep that covered, away from my husbands gaze
He turned me over, Putting my legs on his shoulders,
all of him pressed against my wet slit.
 
"Get you're tits out", He barked
 
"No tits out?, No cock, You're choice".
 
"Ok! Ok". As I hurriedly removed my blouse,
lifting my bra over my head.
 
He waited..
 
I laid back naked, My arms outstretched, My tits bare as requested.
 
He waited..
 
"Please"
 
"Fuck me"
 
And so he did
Slow at first, Slow powerful strokes.
With each thrust into me my tits would move and ripple.
He now moved both feet to one shoulder as he slammed
into me, making the table move slightly with every thrust.
 
Sudden silence fell as his mobile went off.
He pulled out and picked up the phone, his wife!
As he chatted to her he grabbed my panties and stuffed
them into my mouth, As if I would talk anyway.
Then proceeded to fuck me with slow deep powerful thrusts
with my legs on his shoulder as he proceeded to chat to his wife
about how he was working out and out of breath. He put his
wife on speaker phone so she could hear his work out.
"That's it darling.. Don't over do it will you"
With that he hung up and really started to pound my soaking pussy....
 


Written by Lookawaynow  

LeColonel
Fire of Insight
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Duo pour le Donjon (Dungeoned Duet)

(A Collaboration with the fair Rosebud)

Flickering candles and wispy shadows lick and dance
painting creamy bared skin along with a deeper nakedness
you obediently gather up your long tresses in silent reverence
allowing me to fully sheath your neck in harsh leather tautness

    Downcast eyes watch Your form engulf all light
    passion floods my mouth as Your essence fills my nostrils
    excitement spreads across my neck as
    Your fingers secure my will  

With hands most firm I drive you down onto bended knees
then smother all light and hope with snug fitted silk
stepping back I inspect your flexed slaven perfection
finally glazing you warm with oily lavender drizzles  

    Bowing in body from depths of soul,
    i long to touch You from inside out
    i accept darkness inhaling my helpless strength
    becoming unknown with arched back and budding warmth  

Now all is ready for tonight's weighty lesson
an old leather bound tome secured from my library
balanced perfectly atop my still, craned swan  
you breathe in deep, knowing all that is at stake  

    Resolute to surpass Your expectations
    delight cascades down gracefully erect spine
    student to Your sorcery divine, i am stillness.  
    attentive only to my assignment.  

Most patient, I await the inevitable fall
thunderclap so loud it unhinges you fully
your head droops as I retrieve retribution
ornate solid oak with horse hair bristles fierce  

    i feel the balance tip but startle at the loss
    only moments graced to prepare for correction
    an eternity lived with tightened throat
    until the air separates and crackles with my due  

A thorny drag across shoulders signifying commencement
alternating slaps, white hot sting for flesh anticipating  
encroaching I seek most feminine places, evoking a silent rain
but then, a cradled grooming tender for my love so completing  

Pravus
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poet Anonymous

“Blackest Shadows”
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(A poetic experiment into the sensual dark side)

And,
who really knows
what lurks
below the surface
of my skin,
deep inside my
blackened-core,
the part
that
nobody sees,
my hidden doors of pain,
a dark crazed-heart,
craving her sex.
I smell her musk,
taste her ripened fruit
fiendishly,
swollen-slick,
spread open,
so tasty before me.
Her honey drips
from
my tendrils,
I lust for her
like no other,
I pray she smothers
my face with her
pink-tenderness.
I caress myself
a million
times,
hoping she
catches every drop
of my precious
warm seed
in my words,
jack-planted for
her pleasure.
In my mind,
she is my nasty-treasure,
I am her dark buccaneer
yearning to pillage her
on all decks,
fuck her
into a
near-death
experience,
infect her with my
diseased-cream,
stream her with
endless injections,
make her scream for more
in the blackest shadows
of my debauched
imagination,
who knew.

tommielynn
Tommie Lynn
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The best poem I've read on here!
Fantastic, steamy, erotic, so damn good!!Bravo...I loved it!! ;)

RomanceWit
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 20th Apr 2013
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                          Domination Matrix

Do you have any idea who the fuck I am? I am bigger than old uncle

Sam. Then I whip out my annointed cock and give you a quick slam.

Ever heard the saying dicks are for chicks? I don't give a fuck

welcome to my world and the dominatrix. Time for you all to get

your errotic fill fix. Ever heard of absolute domination over

your sex? I have more energy by far than good old T-Rex. Ever

heard wham bam thank you maam? After I said thank you I did a

lightning fast up her thang ram. I attain the love power to set

you free, it doesn't matter if you agree. Open your eyes, time

to see. Did I fail to mention that I am a king? Her precious

vagina for me does romantically sing. I jackhammer into your

pussy deep. You then yelp out with a joy filled peep. You become

out of control horny when I just look your way and my dear you

don't have to pay. Your vagina screams out in massive pleasure

sublime. Did I fail to mention I love to rhyme? Whenever you gaze

upon me your vagina erupts with a seismic orgasm. Your whole body

ripples with a love spasm. Sexual pleasure beyond your wildest

dream, take my hand join the dream team. Then I spread upon your

bod fluffy whipped cream. This errotic love is not at all what it

did seem. Time to spread open your vagina cheeks, then it erupts

and leaks. The lips of your vagina taste like wild cherry, your

extatic love makes me very merry. Let us both make love until we

are extremely weary.
 


RomanceWit
Strange Creature
United States
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Twidle dee do, twidle dee dum. I flick my fingers inside you

until you explosively cum. Then my sweet darling if you like

anal I shall thrust up your bum. This will taste so much better

than just getting some. Even better than being drunk on the

finest rum. I then clean you out with my tongue saying yum, yum

in my tum. Look at all these bunnies going crazy wild. Then I

turned to them and greatly smiled. It doesn't matter how big the

size or girth of my penis. Truly, this love shall surpass the

goddess Venus. She is my jackrabbit procreating bunny and I will

laugh with her and be funny.

kriticool
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CROSSING OVER



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This declaration
The finality of our

Mutual Procrastination

We were supposed to be temporary
Avoiding that which was too merry
That which was too inclined to be fine
Some how we’ve morphed
Gotten off course

Freefalling into this

Realm of the
Undercut of Scary
It’s gotten over the top kinda hairy and
What’s more?  


For sure..      I’m thinking we’ve sliced our way into each other’s core


Yes we’ve been masterful at the unrelenting
The Signals…All the ones we’ve been sending
The one’s that couldn’t wait

Now's time to come ahead
Time to storm the gate

For us…the oxygen
All of that will have to wait
Too late to breathe deep

Come on in & blend
Time to suffocate

You & I

Such is our fate

So come - clean
Take part in this dare
Perhaps for a while we’ll fake we don’t care
But later on we’ll trust our lust

For us it’s a must… Crossing that line

The one meant to cross







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LobodeSanPedro
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FUMAR
 
She smokes her cigarro puro
the same way she takes her men
Inhale deeply
Swallow him whole
She wants him to slide to the back of her throat
Linger there
Burn a little
 
Lagrimas
Tears
 
Ectasty
 
He's inside her
She can feel all of him
Even as he pollutes her
with promises that won't last beyond this moment
She loves him
 
She tastes all of him
He was beaten by the plantation sun
Browned
Aged
Hardened
Crushed by whips and chains old and new
Doused in rum to sweeten the pain
 
None of that matters now
She just wants his taste
The satisfaction it brings
 
He seduces her
She loves the way her lips caress the length of him
Take the satisfaction now
Agony and consequences are por mañana
 
As he rolls in her mouth
Her chocha is wet
She fingers her lips to part them
Her own juices bathe her
Saturation
 
Her cocoa brown nipples are almendra
Hard
Fruity
 
She plays freely now
Her hips roll in a primordial rhythm
All the while rolling him and his heat in her mouth
She's gasping
 
Loving his stench
Loving the choke in her throat
 
Damelo papi
Give it to me
Metemelo mi boca papi
Fuck my mouth
Duro asi duro
Hard that's it hard
Si papi si
Tu gusto mi lengua
You love my tongue
 
She exhales and he is out of her
When she releases him it's back into the world
To corrupt others with his diluted stench
He floats over her in that moment
Only because she let's him
 
The best of him has fallen at her feet
Ashen flakes
 
After he is long gone
She may have the need for another
This time Robusto
 
Metemelo ay dios mas rapido
Fuck me oh God fuck me faster

 

Lookawaynow
Rose
Tyrant of Words
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hahaha  nice quote :)

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