Poetry competition CLOSED 24th December 2012 8:55pm
WINNER
RSena (Sena)
RSena (Sena)
RUNNERS-UP:
kriticool
and ItsUpToU
Page:
KINKY REGGAE
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
Take your favorite Kinks or Bob Marley Song and craft a poem about it.
Include the title of the song somewhere in the words to your poem. Make it rock~really try to get the feeling of the song into your work!!!
No limit on words.
Poetic license on style.
Collaborations accepted (both poets will get credit if selected as the winner).
Two entries per poet.
Good luck to everyone.
http://static-l3.blogcritics.org/09/12/27/122137/TheKinks.jpg
http://thumbpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/bob_marley.jpg
No limit on words.
Poetic license on style.
Collaborations accepted (both poets will get credit if selected as the winner).
Two entries per poet.
Good luck to everyone.
http://static-l3.blogcritics.org/09/12/27/122137/TheKinks.jpg
http://thumbpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/bob_marley.jpg
World…you really got me blowing
You got me so I don’t know who I’m screwing
E x t r a
You really got me down
The sin I’m in: I can’t come home again
Oh World, you really are so foul
You gotta a flow I don’t know where we’re going
Oh No; I’m thinking we’re gonna blow
Tonight the minds hear appeals to that end
You silly planet
You silly planet
You silly planet
Doomed!
Ye Earth, a turf that won’t take the blame
Though I know you’ll blame the ass in the rain
Oh World, you really are so foul
I feel the spin, but can’t say where I am
Oh World I wanna run to your core
I wanna feel all the heat while I'm sleep
Oh World you’ll really have me in there
And I’ll be so glad to shut that last door
You crazy planet
You crazy planet
You crazy planet
Doomed!
Reggae Mix.
All this pirates, oh they go by
Every four year living my city,
Sorrow, worse, child with empty
Feet, but I keep praying in peace,
So I scream, so my God can hear me,
So this song comes strong and heard,
So please, let me sing,
that there’s nothing
Worse than an ignorant being happy.
And with nothing to eat.
The motion is wrong,
There’s not such a thing as freedom
I had but what I have,
Is a sorrow heart.
A sorrow heart.
But I don’t want to,
My vein is burning,
Why wait in vain,
If there’s nothing promise to come.
Stirring everything to see what
Comes, but I see they how they hide,
Wow, I see rich people getting
What they want easily, while
We have to fight.
So this Man named Bob Marley
Sang for our freedom and happiness,
Now there’s singer, singing for the money,
For their self, and they are careless.
I know now, that I’m the only one,
That raises my eyes on this.
The others just live life,
Like heart don’t beat.
So kaya, has become my close friend,
But make me think outside of the space,
There’s nothing better than defend,
Your right with a secure face.
I would never let not body
To tell me how to be,
They talk about love no more,
Or even worse let me see the true,
but i know, i'm no thee only full.
So, how that could be love,
When they have an empty heart,
Full of greatness, and anvisious these word
Does not feet, so they think
They are above.
So woman, so please don’t cry,
I have noticed that the woman does
Not forgive the one that love her,
Or love the one that forgive her.
let just live in peace.
SENA
All this pirates, oh they go by
Every four year living my city,
Sorrow, worse, child with empty
Feet, but I keep praying in peace,
So I scream, so my God can hear me,
So this song comes strong and heard,
So please, let me sing,
that there’s nothing
Worse than an ignorant being happy.
And with nothing to eat.
The motion is wrong,
There’s not such a thing as freedom
I had but what I have,
Is a sorrow heart.
A sorrow heart.
But I don’t want to,
My vein is burning,
Why wait in vain,
If there’s nothing promise to come.
Stirring everything to see what
Comes, but I see they how they hide,
Wow, I see rich people getting
What they want easily, while
We have to fight.
So this Man named Bob Marley
Sang for our freedom and happiness,
Now there’s singer, singing for the money,
For their self, and they are careless.
I know now, that I’m the only one,
That raises my eyes on this.
The others just live life,
Like heart don’t beat.
So kaya, has become my close friend,
But make me think outside of the space,
There’s nothing better than defend,
Your right with a secure face.
I would never let not body
To tell me how to be,
They talk about love no more,
Or even worse let me see the true,
but i know, i'm no thee only full.
So, how that could be love,
When they have an empty heart,
Full of greatness, and anvisious these word
Does not feet, so they think
They are above.
So woman, so please don’t cry,
I have noticed that the woman does
Not forgive the one that love her,
Or love the one that forgive her.
let just live in peace.
SENA
"Get Up, Stand Up"
Why lay down your life
There is a you
That is a part of me
It is time we mend our hearts with Unity
Bleed out the hate and be set Free
His Imperial Majesty rules on HIS throne
Psalm 72, This end the Psalms of Jesse
the father
to
David his son
Who was appointed Israel's first King
Follow his line on and on
It leads you to HIS name
The Anointed ONE
"Don't Give Up the Fight"
You know were sick and tired of the bullshit game, die and go to heaven in a Jesus name...."
"So you better get up stand up, stand up for your right."
Why lay down your life
There is a you
That is a part of me
It is time we mend our hearts with Unity
Bleed out the hate and be set Free
His Imperial Majesty rules on HIS throne
Psalm 72, This end the Psalms of Jesse
the father
to
David his son
Who was appointed Israel's first King
Follow his line on and on
It leads you to HIS name
The Anointed ONE
"Don't Give Up the Fight"
You know were sick and tired of the bullshit game, die and go to heaven in a Jesus name...."
"So you better get up stand up, stand up for your right."
Anonymous
Fellow poets,
I felt the flow in all of your poems. I shot the sheriff was an awesome start...oh, to have more. Was hoping lightbaron would have come back. Natural mystic could have exploded into a kaleidoscope. Sena wove a reggae story. Kriticool brought out serious edginess. Isaiah pegged one of my favorites. I can only pick one....but, truly all worthy.
Happy Holidays.
Strider :)
I felt the flow in all of your poems. I shot the sheriff was an awesome start...oh, to have more. Was hoping lightbaron would have come back. Natural mystic could have exploded into a kaleidoscope. Sena wove a reggae story. Kriticool brought out serious edginess. Isaiah pegged one of my favorites. I can only pick one....but, truly all worthy.
Happy Holidays.
Strider :)
