Fire - Destroyer & Creator
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Atakti
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Thanks, Broomie, for yr second entry, this intriguing tale of flames.
Yes, artkytech, I will accept your interpretation of the topic. :)
Yes, artkytech, I will accept your interpretation of the topic. :)
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Soul_Man_Ken
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 13th June 2012 Forum Posts: 898
War Zone
Concussions of fire
plummet down on the earth of my soul
feeling the ashes of contempt settle
into the drought cracks of my being
sensing the glare of the self righteous
burn my sensitive luster
till I'm naked and bare to the skin
wilted yet never defeated
And grace arose
greeting the salvo of fire
amidst a war zone
of life fighting for survival
armed with faith in possibilities
it dared to stand out
dared defy the haters
dared dream
that replenishing waters
merely an exhale away
Believing within another day's growth
another mistake's absolution
exists a chance to shine
to bask in the warmth of promise
to look to the morn
with dewed eyes of hope's potential
Concussions of fire
plummet down on the earth of my soul
feeling the ashes of contempt settle
into the drought cracks of my being
sensing the glare of the self righteous
burn my sensitive luster
till I'm naked and bare to the skin
wilted yet never defeated
And grace arose
greeting the salvo of fire
amidst a war zone
of life fighting for survival
armed with faith in possibilities
it dared to stand out
dared defy the haters
dared dream
that replenishing waters
merely an exhale away
Believing within another day's growth
another mistake's absolution
exists a chance to shine
to bask in the warmth of promise
to look to the morn
with dewed eyes of hope's potential
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thank you, Soul Man Ken, for that radiating read.
Pleased you're enjoying this competition, Broomie!
Pleased you're enjoying this competition, Broomie!
zenithquasar77
Marcus cooke
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Marcus cooke
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 6th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 88
Nothing Changes Under The Sun
Echoes endless
in canyons of glass,
Will this screaming
ever cease?
Rise up from the mecca of dirt
On my hands and knees begging please!!
Arise from this slum
We sit back in our arm chairs and drown in rum
Blackcurrants grow on trees
poison to the touch
Pedophiles walk round freely
grabbing there ass and crutch
Attackers, attack
as the world keeps turning
I duck for cover
as this city keeps burning
Broken body’s piled in the kerb
Shattered family’s
waiting for the word
Handbag snatchers,
child catchers,
Murders and scum
Car thief’s, Burglars,
benefit, thieves and the dumb.
Political back handers,
neighbours like salamanders
Nothing will ever change.
Like unidentified
Faceless targets
added to a shooting range
In this hellish utopia
my face wasn’t thrilled,
Hatred bottled,
forever distilled
I should have known better
I’ve come undone
Nothing changes under the sun
Echoes endless
in canyons of glass,
Will this screaming
ever cease?
Rise up from the mecca of dirt
On my hands and knees begging please!!
Arise from this slum
We sit back in our arm chairs and drown in rum
Blackcurrants grow on trees
poison to the touch
Pedophiles walk round freely
grabbing there ass and crutch
Attackers, attack
as the world keeps turning
I duck for cover
as this city keeps burning
Broken body’s piled in the kerb
Shattered family’s
waiting for the word
Handbag snatchers,
child catchers,
Murders and scum
Car thief’s, Burglars,
benefit, thieves and the dumb.
Political back handers,
neighbours like salamanders
Nothing will ever change.
Like unidentified
Faceless targets
added to a shooting range
In this hellish utopia
my face wasn’t thrilled,
Hatred bottled,
forever distilled
I should have known better
I’ve come undone
Nothing changes under the sun
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Marcus, thanks for your igniting images. :)
DystopianMelody
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Dangerous Mind
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I'll be back with something soon hopefully. Lol I hope there's a lot more entries, I wanna see exactly how many adjectives you can come up with for them lol
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Lol, Dystopian, someone noticed...
I'm not gonna run out! ..don't jinx me.
I'm not gonna run out! ..don't jinx me.
artkytech
Joined 11th Dec 2012
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Fire of Insight
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I have captured fire greater than that of any wealth
in a verbal cage feeding on the hot air that I beltch
I lured it in to its ultimate entrapment, with waves upon waves
Of enourmously potent and suggestively powerful content
It will forever feed and grow stronger without dwindle
A drop of sweat from my brow as it spews words from its kindle
I was blessed by the gods, gained their verbal and mental capacity
Before my exhistance demons had found scarcity in the face of audacity
In my creation the demons saw the soul and the mind of a literary machinist
The only one capable of harnessing this fiery ball of demonic genious
Now burdened with this knowledge, purpose, and godlike fiery intensity
My passion ever burns with the fires of hell in this verbal cage of destiny
in a verbal cage feeding on the hot air that I beltch
I lured it in to its ultimate entrapment, with waves upon waves
Of enourmously potent and suggestively powerful content
It will forever feed and grow stronger without dwindle
A drop of sweat from my brow as it spews words from its kindle
I was blessed by the gods, gained their verbal and mental capacity
Before my exhistance demons had found scarcity in the face of audacity
In my creation the demons saw the soul and the mind of a literary machinist
The only one capable of harnessing this fiery ball of demonic genious
Now burdened with this knowledge, purpose, and godlike fiery intensity
My passion ever burns with the fires of hell in this verbal cage of destiny
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thanks for the second entry, artky. Suitably sizzling. ;)
siphondarkness
Levi
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Levi
Dangerous Mind
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So...I have this Short Story, does it work?