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Fire - Destroyer & Creator

artkytech
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 11th Dec 2012
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Atakti said:Thanks, artkytech, for that blaze of words!

Does gun fire count?

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Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thanks, Broomie, for yr second entry, this intriguing tale of flames.

Yes, artkytech, I will accept your interpretation of the topic. :)

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Soul_Man_Ken
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 13th June 2012
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War Zone

Concussions of fire
plummet down on the earth of my soul  
feeling the ashes of contempt settle
into the drought cracks of my being
sensing the glare of the self righteous
burn my sensitive luster
till I'm naked and bare to the skin
wilted yet never defeated

And grace arose
greeting the salvo of fire  
amidst a war zone
of life fighting for survival  
armed with faith in possibilities
it dared to stand out
dared defy the haters  
dared dream
that replenishing waters  
merely an exhale away

Believing within another day's growth
another mistake's absolution  
exists a chance to shine  
to bask in the warmth of promise  
to look to the morn
with dewed eyes of hope's potential

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you, Soul Man Ken, for that radiating read.

Pleased you're enjoying this competition, Broomie!

zenithquasar77
Marcus cooke
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 10awards
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Nothing Changes Under The Sun

Echoes endless
in canyons of glass,
Will this screaming
ever cease?
 
Rise up from the mecca of dirt
On my hands and knees begging please!!
Arise from this slum
We sit back in our arm chairs and drown in rum
 
Blackcurrants grow on trees
poison to the touch
Pedophiles walk round freely
grabbing there ass and crutch
 
Attackers, attack
as the world keeps turning
I duck for cover
as this city keeps burning
 
Broken body’s piled in the kerb
Shattered family’s
waiting for the word
 
Handbag snatchers,
child catchers,
Murders and scum
Car thief’s, Burglars,
benefit, thieves and the dumb.
 
Political back handers,
neighbours like salamanders
Nothing will ever change.
 
Like unidentified
Faceless targets
added to a shooting range
 
In this hellish utopia
my face wasn’t thrilled,
Hatred bottled,
forever distilled
 
I should have known better
I’ve come undone
Nothing changes under the sun

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Marcus, thanks for your igniting images. :)

DystopianMelody
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 9awards
Joined 9th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1391

I'll be back with something soon hopefully. Lol I hope there's a lot more entries, I wanna see exactly how many adjectives you can come up with for them lol

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Lol, Dystopian, someone noticed...

I'm not gonna run out! ..don't jinx me.

artkytech
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 11th Dec 2012
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I have captured fire greater than that of any wealth
 in a verbal cage feeding on the hot air that I beltch
I lured it in to its ultimate entrapment, with waves upon waves
Of enourmously potent and suggestively powerful content
It will forever feed and grow stronger without dwindle
A drop of sweat from my brow as it spews words from its kindle
I was blessed by the gods, gained their verbal and mental capacity
Before my exhistance demons had found scarcity in the face of audacity
In my creation the demons saw the soul and the mind of a literary machinist
The only one capable of harnessing this fiery ball of demonic genious
Now burdened with this knowledge, purpose, and godlike fiery intensity
My passion ever burns with the fires of hell in this verbal cage of destiny



Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thanks for the second entry, artky.  Suitably sizzling.  ;)

Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
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Ah, thank you so much! I very much appreciate that.

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Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 6th Apr 2011
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So...I have this Short Story, does it work?

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