Poetry competition CLOSED 6th December 2012 9:24pm
WINNER
J_J_Jay_Jr
J_J_Jay_Jr
RUNNERS-UP:
SupHomeboi
and 010101110110100101
love is...evil
Poetry Contest Description
love
aww you poor thing, sounds like someone needs a big hug..
or else you just write very short poems.
either way, you need to talk with this chap:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/siphondarkness/
or else you just write very short poems.
either way, you need to talk with this chap:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/siphondarkness/
Anonymous
Fucking lol CraicDealer, the man with a golden heart, and a heavy spray tan.
Anonymous
Anyway, why you make this a COMPETITION thread?
lepperochan said:aww you poor thing, sounds like someone needs a big hug..
or else you just write very short poems.
either way, you need to talk with this chap:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/siphondarkness/
Lmfao
or else you just write very short poems.
either way, you need to talk with this chap:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/siphondarkness/
Lmfao
oh ok more chance of winning if i'm the only actual entrant... right?
you don't know what you let out of the bag
sweetie
when you asked to hold my heart
the way I see it
my heart sprouts from my breast
from that pit
searching out the light (dumb thing)
blistering in it
a bruised, brackish, tentacled
cuthulu creature
wraps around your arms and legs
whips you close to me
holding you tight against my body
slithering all over
your tense form
you wanted me wet;
here is my slime:
now
we can fuck.
I LOVE U HONEY WE B 2GETHR 4EVA
you don't know what you let out of the bag
sweetie
when you asked to hold my heart
the way I see it
my heart sprouts from my breast
from that pit
searching out the light (dumb thing)
blistering in it
a bruised, brackish, tentacled
cuthulu creature
wraps around your arms and legs
whips you close to me
holding you tight against my body
slithering all over
your tense form
you wanted me wet;
here is my slime:
now
we can fuck.
I LOVE U HONEY WE B 2GETHR 4EVA
Ok Wing you have inspired me to be a team player. lol
A fatal kind of love...
that would be
yours and mine
a
conisistant fear
yet
a tasty wine..
Your killing me soflty
without saying a word
it takes
a lethal combination
to sooth this burn
which way to go
is what
keeps us guessing
will it be you
or me
to do the messing.
to catch a feeling
my god
it's the worse
you were once a blessing
now a curse..
this monster
you created her
so love it
or
leave it
but live to hate it..
A fatal kind of love...
that would be
yours and mine
a
conisistant fear
yet
a tasty wine..
Your killing me soflty
without saying a word
it takes
a lethal combination
to sooth this burn
which way to go
is what
keeps us guessing
will it be you
or me
to do the messing.
to catch a feeling
my god
it's the worse
you were once a blessing
now a curse..
this monster
you created her
so love it
or
leave it
but live to hate it..
Anonymous
“More Lies”
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_wtS7FnDvwIU/S7So_zV-_BI/AAAAAAAAAYc/cgj4XAw86MM/s1600/n61802904_30270077_4884.jpg
Your love for me oozed
from your precious lying lips.
I was sucked inside your beautiful
twisted warped world and loved it.
I cried when they stopped moving.
And, when you lost me, threw me away.
I miss the soothing sounds they made,
especially the sighs that happened when
I was deep inside your mind, caressing your soul.
Oh, please come back Sweet Lady, tell me more lies!
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_wtS7FnDvwIU/S7So_zV-_BI/AAAAAAAAAYc/cgj4XAw86MM/s1600/n61802904_30270077_4884.jpg
Your love for me oozed
from your precious lying lips.
I was sucked inside your beautiful
twisted warped world and loved it.
I cried when they stopped moving.
And, when you lost me, threw me away.
I miss the soothing sounds they made,
especially the sighs that happened when
I was deep inside your mind, caressing your soul.
Oh, please come back Sweet Lady, tell me more lies!
"Insecurity"
Insecurity
Heaven bathes you in light
Coming with me
Through the hurt and the dark and the shite
It’s a postman at the window
It’s a circle in the sand
It’s a face against a window
It’s the face of a new man
I would take you places where you wished you could have gone
Put your heart in different places
Picking up pieces where we left off
and places where we went from.
It took a life time with no cigarettes
It was a long way down
So tell me why I look the other way?
You were amazing
Slightly erotic
You are something I could never have
So tell me why I look the other way?
Its a rotten apple on a tree
It’s a letter through the door
It’s a neighbour in trouble
Banging on the bedroom wall
I could leave you places where you never could escape from
Hide my heart in different places
under the bed sheets and the wardrobe door.
It was a lifetime with no medicine
it was a long way down
so tell me why cant things remain the same
You were fantastic
Slightly neurotic
We had something we could never have
So tell me why I look the other way?
Insecurity
Heaven bathes you in light
Coming with me
Through the hurt and the dark and the shite
It’s a postman at the window
It’s a circle in the sand
It’s a face against a window
It’s the face of a new man
I would take you places where you wished you could have gone
Put your heart in different places
Picking up pieces where we left off
and places where we went from.
It took a life time with no cigarettes
It was a long way down
So tell me why I look the other way?
You were amazing
Slightly erotic
You are something I could never have
So tell me why I look the other way?
Its a rotten apple on a tree
It’s a letter through the door
It’s a neighbour in trouble
Banging on the bedroom wall
I could leave you places where you never could escape from
Hide my heart in different places
under the bed sheets and the wardrobe door.
It was a lifetime with no medicine
it was a long way down
so tell me why cant things remain the same
You were fantastic
Slightly neurotic
We had something we could never have
So tell me why I look the other way?
Anonymous
LOST ALIBI
I
Would
Kill
You
Too
Only
The walls
And the fence
Knew
When I said
I loved you
It was
Just a lie
All
You
Were
Is
My alibi
To sin
Bleed
My blood
Through
This gunshot
You shall
Receive
Sacramental
Peace
As I bury
You deep
Under
The roses
Rose
Thou
Are
Red
My
Knuckles
Are black
And Blue
And
I
Loved
You
Anonymous
Love is such a silly word,
For little Juliets that forget what happened to Romeo,
Romance, ah yes, tipped off with a bloody rose,
So wrapped up in their hearts,
They forget the thorn until it pokes,
And next you know love has become woe,
So really what's the difference,
Love and hate, love and sadness,
Love just comes attached with other feelings,
Which isn't right, it's madness.
Love is such a misused word,
People mix it up with lust,
If you want real love take your time,
Love in action, read 50 Shades Of Gray,
Love is as love does and nothing more,
The sweet petal of the rose,
Or the sharp point of the thorn,
Pain and misery come from love,
Like the petal attached to the stem,
They are connected.
For little Juliets that forget what happened to Romeo,
Romance, ah yes, tipped off with a bloody rose,
So wrapped up in their hearts,
They forget the thorn until it pokes,
And next you know love has become woe,
So really what's the difference,
Love and hate, love and sadness,
Love just comes attached with other feelings,
Which isn't right, it's madness.
Love is such a misused word,
People mix it up with lust,
If you want real love take your time,
Love in action, read 50 Shades Of Gray,
Love is as love does and nothing more,
The sweet petal of the rose,
Or the sharp point of the thorn,
Pain and misery come from love,
Like the petal attached to the stem,
They are connected.
Heartbreaking Even
If I could shoot love in the face I would
Watch its brains spill out of its head
Splattered all over the sidewalk
Blood decorating the pavement
Clear my throat and spit on its corpse
Whip my dick out and piss on it too
Fuck you!
The shortest eulogy in history
For the emotion that double crossed me
If I could shoot love in the face I would
Watch its brains spill out of its head
Splattered all over the sidewalk
Blood decorating the pavement
Clear my throat and spit on its corpse
Whip my dick out and piss on it too
Fuck you!
The shortest eulogy in history
For the emotion that double crossed me
SupHomeboi said:Heartbreaking Even
If I could shoot love in the face I would
Watch its brains spill out of its head
Splattered all over the sidewalk
Blood decorating the pavement
Clear my throat and spit on its corpse
Whip my dick out and piss on it too
Fuck you!
The shortest eulogy in history
For the emotion that double crossed me
Damn! This here miss just sent a chill straight through me. wow.. awesome kitty!
If I could shoot love in the face I would
Watch its brains spill out of its head
Splattered all over the sidewalk
Blood decorating the pavement
Clear my throat and spit on its corpse
Whip my dick out and piss on it too
Fuck you!
The shortest eulogy in history
For the emotion that double crossed me
Damn! This here miss just sent a chill straight through me. wow.. awesome kitty!
I'll tell you
I'll tell you what you were.
You were a notch on my bed post,
locker room bragging rights.
You were a cunt to receive my dick,
a receiver of my wet dream's emissions.
You were a blonde to follow the redhead,
not as good as the brunet.
You were way too short, barely up to my chin,
not fun size at all.
Your boobs were so small, most boys have more,
couldn't fill a training bra.
You were skinny, arms bony and legs gangly,
all skeletal angles and points.
You were a slippery mouth with a wet double jointed tongue,
that swallowed my cum.
Your mop head's hair, never combed, much less fixed,
made good handles to hold your mouth around my cock.
Your eyes were out of a cartoon, shadowed like a raccoon,
one green and one blue.
Your fingers were anorexic, without the grip of a noodle,
barely good to stroke me before entered you.
Your ass was something to grip with my hands,
as I unload my cum inside you.
That's why I ignored you when I was with my guys.
So why did it shatter my heart, cause me to sink to my knees,
and wish I could die?
When you walked out of my life, with a tear in your eye,
and whispered over your shoulder,
"I loved you."
I'll tell you what you were.
You were a notch on my bed post,
locker room bragging rights.
You were a cunt to receive my dick,
a receiver of my wet dream's emissions.
You were a blonde to follow the redhead,
not as good as the brunet.
You were way too short, barely up to my chin,
not fun size at all.
Your boobs were so small, most boys have more,
couldn't fill a training bra.
You were skinny, arms bony and legs gangly,
all skeletal angles and points.
You were a slippery mouth with a wet double jointed tongue,
that swallowed my cum.
Your mop head's hair, never combed, much less fixed,
made good handles to hold your mouth around my cock.
Your eyes were out of a cartoon, shadowed like a raccoon,
one green and one blue.
Your fingers were anorexic, without the grip of a noodle,
barely good to stroke me before entered you.
Your ass was something to grip with my hands,
as I unload my cum inside you.
That's why I ignored you when I was with my guys.
So why did it shatter my heart, cause me to sink to my knees,
and wish I could die?
When you walked out of my life, with a tear in your eye,
and whispered over your shoulder,
"I loved you."
