Poetry competition CLOSED 11th November 2012 5:19am
WINNER
Icuduseahugritenow (WallFlower)
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RUNNERS-UP: Magdalena and shaunda

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Judgement

Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
Wales 62awards
Joined 21st Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 3005



Care(less)



Could it be a lack of thought that strikes
with a sharp sting on the temple of truth
carelessly couldn't care less in a motion
where emotion lacks for another's heart




Unintentional intentions smack hard on the mind
with a splitting of veins that bleed inwardly
pooling inside the feet in lead weight consistency
as movement lacks bound by restricting forces




Considerations lost in the drive of single mindedness
with body underfoot not seen as the trample hinders
the one that is often crushed by the care(less) action
needing to step away from the pushers of selfish acts




Breaking the chain and escaping the loop no more repeat
on the outside of the convenience of others care(less)ness
moving in a different direction with eyes always wide open





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Poetryman
Tyrant of Words
United States 29awards
Joined 14th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 1541

Congratulations to you WallFlower!

Excellent poems from you and also shaunda and Magdalena for yours as well... JJ

Icuduseahugritenow
WallFlower
Thought Provoker
United States 3awards
Joined 1st Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 108

Poetryman said:Congratulations to you WallFlower!

Excellent poems from you and also shaunda and Magdalena for yours as well... JJ

:D Thank you

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