Poetry competition CLOSED 29th August 2012 11:32pm
WINNER
wanderer (Faceless)
wanderer (Faceless)
RUNNER-UP:
PierreTheMad
A write for the one above!
Anonymous
Whitewand6 said:my Lilith
you sit atop me
wearing a fluid tiara of flaming stars
blazing at a few trillion degrees of
eternal celestial passion
and slowly move
having shed the sky embroidered with
tragic overtures ciphers
you engulf me
in wormholes
oceans die
deaf deaths
deserts cave in
molten fire rages across
and i float placid reverent
held by your hands
glorious in your kisses
in your fluid want
my inana, my goddess
my mother
my sacred spell of greed
of eternal unison
I'm still in awe. Thank you for the lavish beauty, Bara. I love it! In reciprocation:
Sinuous
blooming
gift
of the
Sacred
name
dances
on
above
atop
my
hips
swing
sway
open
rotating
in
imitative
Unison
our
pitch
perfect
Harmonics
are
Divine
our
undulation
Immaculate
my teeth
unzip
your
diaphonous
skinsuit
a new Self
is formed
I eat
your sadness
swallow
your clay
as god
takes form
in your eyes
symbiotic
singing
to awaken
the
sacred
liquid
lotus
flame
sibilant
serpent
mother
goddess
numinous
coccooned
in
sussurus
perfume
anticipating
the blessed hour
of
Infinity
you sit atop me
wearing a fluid tiara of flaming stars
blazing at a few trillion degrees of
eternal celestial passion
and slowly move
having shed the sky embroidered with
tragic overtures ciphers
you engulf me
in wormholes
oceans die
deaf deaths
deserts cave in
molten fire rages across
and i float placid reverent
held by your hands
glorious in your kisses
in your fluid want
my inana, my goddess
my mother
my sacred spell of greed
of eternal unison
I'm still in awe. Thank you for the lavish beauty, Bara. I love it! In reciprocation:
blooming
gift
of the
Sacred
name
dances
on
above
atop
my
hips
swing
sway
open
rotating
in
imitative
Unison
our
pitch
perfect
Harmonics
are
Divine
our
undulation
Immaculate
my teeth
unzip
your
diaphonous
skinsuit
a new Self
is formed
I eat
your sadness
swallow
your clay
as god
takes form
in your eyes
symbiotic
singing
to awaken
the
sacred
liquid
lotus
flame
sibilant
serpent
mother
goddess
numinous
coccooned
in
sussurus
perfume
anticipating
the blessed hour
of
Infinity
aish
colorful soul with
many dimensions
writes true and pure
listen up,
pay attention
fire of insight
78 poems she has written
each one a masterpiece
i think i might be smitten
like lilith standing
at the inland sea
looking back in awe
she knows how to bend her words
be sure to read her poem called whore
i bow down in your light
as i understand your cause
you have taken my breath away
made me stop and pause
such beauty from france
so far from me
i tip my hat to you
and smile in glee
9.8 on the richter scale
she shook me to my core
her poems just fed my craving
i want more . . . . . . .
colorful soul with
many dimensions
writes true and pure
listen up,
pay attention
fire of insight
78 poems she has written
each one a masterpiece
i think i might be smitten
like lilith standing
at the inland sea
looking back in awe
she knows how to bend her words
be sure to read her poem called whore
i bow down in your light
as i understand your cause
you have taken my breath away
made me stop and pause
such beauty from france
so far from me
i tip my hat to you
and smile in glee
9.8 on the richter scale
she shook me to my core
her poems just fed my craving
i want more . . . . . . .
Faceless, you won!
Mind-Boggler(Lepperochan)
Distant and far away across the screen
In and over the sea
Sits an intelligent man
who's red pen and black ink writes
as an artist paints;
One line he draws to another
And Another he mixes with the colourful
Other
To capture a picture;
To paint as an artist paints!
Intelligent words he sprinkles on screen-
Intelligent words bound together by a
Hinge, a focal point,
which hints
to the existence of a an experienced and
well furnished mind with a brain to observe- find patterns-
Decode codes-
And to relay an addiction on strangers minds
First time my attention was turned to the Mind-Boggler,
He struck me as a Questioner of some sorts...
a Seeker
Of something
I couldn't quite place my thumb on...
I think him friendly and humorous-
sometimes jolly
And I dare say- he seldomly gives in to folly;
a joker, then a gentle man,
a ladies man, then a serious man-
resourceful, industrious,
a fervent man ?
Hmm... Here I am drawing in the sand;
Building
a castle in air with my pen...
Many's crusty curiosities are directed towards you;
His Hers
and mine too
Congratulations!
Aish and Pierre, runners up, you are! So congrats to both x
All of the entries were beautiful and appreciated, those choices are the ones which stood out to me most. I thank you all for entering!
:)
Mind-Boggler(Lepperochan)
Distant and far away across the screen
In and over the sea
Sits an intelligent man
who's red pen and black ink writes
as an artist paints;
One line he draws to another
And Another he mixes with the colourful
Other
To capture a picture;
To paint as an artist paints!
Intelligent words he sprinkles on screen-
Intelligent words bound together by a
Hinge, a focal point,
which hints
to the existence of a an experienced and
well furnished mind with a brain to observe- find patterns-
Decode codes-
And to relay an addiction on strangers minds
First time my attention was turned to the Mind-Boggler,
He struck me as a Questioner of some sorts...
a Seeker
Of something
I couldn't quite place my thumb on...
I think him friendly and humorous-
sometimes jolly
And I dare say- he seldomly gives in to folly;
a joker, then a gentle man,
a ladies man, then a serious man-
resourceful, industrious,
a fervent man ?
Hmm... Here I am drawing in the sand;
Building
a castle in air with my pen...
Many's crusty curiosities are directed towards you;
His Hers
and mine too
Congratulations!
Aish and Pierre, runners up, you are! So congrats to both x
All of the entries were beautiful and appreciated, those choices are the ones which stood out to me most. I thank you all for entering!
:)
violet said:Faceless, you won!
Mind-Boggler(Lepperochan)
Distant and far away across the screen
In and over the sea
Sits an intelligent man
who's red pen and black ink writes
as an artist paints;
One line he draws to another
And Another he mixes with the colourful
Other
To capture a picture;
To paint as an artist paints!
Intelligent words he sprinkles on screen-
Intelligent words bound together by a
Hinge, a focal point,
which hints
to the existence of a an experienced and
well furnished mind with a brain to observe- find patterns-
Decode codes-
And to relay an addiction on strangers minds
First time my attention was turned to the Mind-Boggler,
He struck me as a Questioner of some sorts...
a Seeker
Of something
I couldn't quite place my thumb on...
I think him friendly and humorous-
sometimes jolly
And I dare say- he seldomly gives in to folly;
a joker, then a gentle man,
a ladies man, then a serious man-
resourceful, industrious,
a fervent man ?
Hmm... Here I am drawing in the sand;
Building
a castle in air with my pen...
Many's crusty curiosities are directed towards you;
His Hers
and mine too
Congratulations!
Aish and Pierre, runners up, you are! So congrats to both x
All of the entries were beautiful and appreciated, those choices are the ones which stood out to me most. I thank you all for entering!
:)
Faceless, great stuff man!
Aish nice one !
Pierre happy days man
great comp Violet
Mind-Boggler(Lepperochan)
Distant and far away across the screen
In and over the sea
Sits an intelligent man
who's red pen and black ink writes
as an artist paints;
One line he draws to another
And Another he mixes with the colourful
Other
To capture a picture;
To paint as an artist paints!
Intelligent words he sprinkles on screen-
Intelligent words bound together by a
Hinge, a focal point,
which hints
to the existence of a an experienced and
well furnished mind with a brain to observe- find patterns-
Decode codes-
And to relay an addiction on strangers minds
First time my attention was turned to the Mind-Boggler,
He struck me as a Questioner of some sorts...
a Seeker
Of something
I couldn't quite place my thumb on...
I think him friendly and humorous-
sometimes jolly
And I dare say- he seldomly gives in to folly;
a joker, then a gentle man,
a ladies man, then a serious man-
resourceful, industrious,
a fervent man ?
Hmm... Here I am drawing in the sand;
Building
a castle in air with my pen...
Many's crusty curiosities are directed towards you;
His Hers
and mine too
Congratulations!
Aish and Pierre, runners up, you are! So congrats to both x
All of the entries were beautiful and appreciated, those choices are the ones which stood out to me most. I thank you all for entering!
:)
Faceless, great stuff man!
Aish nice one !
Pierre happy days man
great comp Violet
