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LIE TO ME...

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

FishCake said:[quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.

FishCake
Thought Provoker
8awards
Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113612-FishCake][quote-110939-Abramson]Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem

Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure


you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?[/quote]

yeah, yeah
that was quite
hard
i think
i wont be able to stop
for the up coming day
now
or maybe
sooner
thani thought

FishCake
Thought Provoker
8awards
Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113615-FishCake][quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.[/quote]

awww
dont be like that
we can always
play again
lets open
a comp
just like that
where we can play
all day :)

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

FishCake said:[quote-113616-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113612-FishCake][quote-110939-Abramson]Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem

Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure


you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?[/quote]

yeah, yeah
that was quite
hard
i think
i wont be able to stop
for the up coming day
now
or maybe
sooner
thani thought[/quote]
I am at peace now
My poems are done
Now im going to wait fir the rising sun
Have you fulfilled your need?
To write like this to me?
Or shall we conrinue elswhere.

FishCake
Thought Provoker
8awards
Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113620-FishCake][quote-113616-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113612-FishCake][quote-110939-Abramson]Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem

Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure


you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?[/quote]

yeah, yeah
that was quite
hard
i think
i wont be able to stop
for the up coming day
now
or maybe
sooner
thani thought[/quote]
I am at peace now
My poems are done
Now im going to wait fir the rising sun
Have you fulfilled your need?
To write like this to me?
Or shall we conrinue elswhere.[/quote]

i am good
i am done
but the sun
really does need to rise, huh

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

FishCake said:[quote-113618-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113615-FishCake][quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.[/quote]

awww
dont be like that
we can always
play again
lets open
a comp
just like that
where we can play
all day :)[/quote]
Ooo that sounds quite exciting
Ill get my pen and start writing
But really shant
I mean i cant
These things are unplanned
Made up on the spot
In this very fun game
I would love to play some more.

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

FishCake said:[quote-113624-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113620-FishCake][quote-113616-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113612-FishCake][quote-110939-Abramson]Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem

Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure


you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?[/quote]

yeah, yeah
that was quite
hard
i think
i wont be able to stop
for the up coming day
now
or maybe
sooner
thani thought[/quote]
I am at peace now
My poems are done
Now im going to wait fir the rising sun
Have you fulfilled your need?
To write like this to me?
Or shall we conrinue elswhere.[/quote]

i am good
i am done
but the sun
really does need to rise, huh[/quote]
Hmm.. I think
With a little bit of urging
It may rise a bit faster
And we can both view its
Beautifil rays in the morn,
With are much more beautiful
With their bursts
Of color
Than the sunset.

FishCake
Thought Provoker
8awards
Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113622-FishCake][quote-113618-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113615-FishCake][quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.[/quote]

awww
dont be like that
we can always
play again
lets open
a comp
just like that
where we can play
all day :)[/quote]
Ooo that sounds quite exciting
Ill get my pen and start writing
But really shant
I mean i cant
These things are unplanned
Made up on the spot
In this very fun game
I would love to play some more.[/quote]

maybe later
not right now
im afraid
im all worn out
poems are hard
way more than
i thought
but this really
was so fun

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

FishCake said:[quote-113626-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113622-FishCake][quote-113618-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113615-FishCake][quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.[/quote]

awww
dont be like that
we can always
play again
lets open
a comp
just like that
where we can play
all day :)[/quote]
Ooo that sounds quite exciting
Ill get my pen and start writing
But really shant
I mean i cant
These things are unplanned
Made up on the spot
In this very fun game
I would love to play some more.[/quote]

maybe later
not right now
im afraid
im all worn out
poems are hard
way more than
i thought
but this really
was so fun[/quote]
Good night new friend( i hope you dont mind)
Im going to sleep now
So i can be awake
For the days activities
Pm,
Or find a way to contact me
And we can play this game some
More
Amither time.

FishCake
Thought Provoker
8awards
Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113631-FishCake][quote-113626-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113622-FishCake][quote-113618-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113615-FishCake][quote-113614-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?

Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.

acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]

oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]

its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]

yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
so in way
im glad
its done[/quote]
Ah, allright
If you
Wish it
It shall
Be
This will end
our
Fun little game
is now over
I guess this is goodbye
For now
I had fun while it lasted.[/quote]

awww
dont be like that
we can always
play again
lets open
a comp
just like that
where we can play
all day :)[/quote]
Ooo that sounds quite exciting
Ill get my pen and start writing
But really shant
I mean i cant
These things are unplanned
Made up on the spot
In this very fun game
I would love to play some more.[/quote]

maybe later
not right now
im afraid
im all worn out
poems are hard
way more than
i thought
but this really
was so fun[/quote]
Good night new friend( i hope you dont mind)
Im going to sleep now
So i can be awake
For the days activities
Pm,
Or find a way to contact me
And we can play this game some
More
Amither time.[/quote]

of course i dont mind
good night
sleep tight
oh look
a new rhym
k

Abramson
Strange Creature
Dominican Republic
Joined 13th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 10

Wow, I have a lot of work!

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

Haha, yea sorry we got a bit carried away.

Abramson
Strange Creature
Dominican Republic
Joined 13th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 10

Next time I'll be sure to put an entries limit, hahahahaha!! A hug.

Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7awards
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325

:$ lol
Had  too much fun
To consider stopping but
Yes i advise that next time put an entry limit.:D

fleshofdanny
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 29th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 12

yay!!!!

:D

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