Poetry competition CLOSED 14th July 2012 4:42pm
WINNER
RSena (Sena)
RSena (Sena)
LEAVE A LETTER!!!
Dear Depression,
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.
Anonymous
"Kaye's Farewell Letter"
Dear Kaye,
Sorry babe,
it’s nearing our end.
I
need to
go away.
I
can’t stay.
I
know you feel gray.
But, please believe
me,
it’s better this way.
Tomorrow, is
another
day.
Hooray.
Dear Kaye,
Sorry babe,
it’s nearing our end.
I
need to
go away.
I
can’t stay.
I
know you feel gray.
But, please believe
me,
it’s better this way.
Tomorrow, is
another
day.
Hooray.
DEAR FRED
A memory that comes to me every time that I’m alone,
And my tears are the only ones that comfort me even though you are gone,
It hurt me, but I’m going to have to let you go,
Let you rest, let your soul fly, it will be better for both,
To a better place, God decided it anyway
Stop this denial shit, understood you went away,
Where we all wished for you in our deepest pray, I see your picture and listen
To all your favor song, like boys don’t cry, and boy it makes me cry.
You taught me, that humans are different, and we have to accept them,
Never to judges, because they are lesbian or gay, know them because
One they I might depend. I see how our live changed so fast, I could not even
See you for a last, time was never that, god damn I wish you met my Son and my Dad.
I will be going to your tomb one of this days, with flowers,
Is sad, I know that if you only knew what I have become you would be more prouder,
I hope god is not prejudice against gay,
I hope he understands that you are one of his creatures so you got stay,
that’s why for you, I kneel and pray,
I know, you had a tuff life, because of what you were,
So sad, if you only knew, now you can merry another man, could it be possible over there?
Teddy still email me, asking me if you are coming back,
I always tell him yes, with time he will understand,
He ask about my country, one day I asked him why,
He tells me because my uncle Fred always wanted to go back.
Trust in me I will never fail you, did I tell I graduated,
I know you did not missed it, because I felt your presence,
Maybe what I’m saying does not make any sense,
I will progress, our dream
Will be my grace,
Check me out from heaven above
Know that I still think for both,
You are just resting,
We haven’t lost the war,
I will keep writing poems,
And I still keep my promise
To pay for your nieces prom.
Even though what I write, or say,
The breeze could take it way,
Poems would be my allied
To give me company,
Because of this emptiness
Only it would fill it up, that’s destiny
That your gone, is so hard to feel
Alone,
Your family are doing good,
And your nephew Teddy too,
Im going to go ahead like always doing my best,
Remember that you are now my angel, and you need to protect me,
You know I always protest, you helped me with my faith,
When I was hiding, maybe I was only afraid,
Now my son ask me when is coming Uncle Fred
After your departure, you have left my wound
Open and bleeding more than it would.
Dude.
Because In heaven there’s a new angel
Is my friend, that left for a reason that I know
I know I will see you again,
You haven’t die you still living inside My heart.
You still in my heart.
Thats why today on your grave,
im leaving this note, so you know
that I have to let you go,
but I would never forget about you,
you know I wont.
SENA
A memory that comes to me every time that I’m alone,
And my tears are the only ones that comfort me even though you are gone,
It hurt me, but I’m going to have to let you go,
Let you rest, let your soul fly, it will be better for both,
To a better place, God decided it anyway
Stop this denial shit, understood you went away,
Where we all wished for you in our deepest pray, I see your picture and listen
To all your favor song, like boys don’t cry, and boy it makes me cry.
You taught me, that humans are different, and we have to accept them,
Never to judges, because they are lesbian or gay, know them because
One they I might depend. I see how our live changed so fast, I could not even
See you for a last, time was never that, god damn I wish you met my Son and my Dad.
I will be going to your tomb one of this days, with flowers,
Is sad, I know that if you only knew what I have become you would be more prouder,
I hope god is not prejudice against gay,
I hope he understands that you are one of his creatures so you got stay,
that’s why for you, I kneel and pray,
I know, you had a tuff life, because of what you were,
So sad, if you only knew, now you can merry another man, could it be possible over there?
Teddy still email me, asking me if you are coming back,
I always tell him yes, with time he will understand,
He ask about my country, one day I asked him why,
He tells me because my uncle Fred always wanted to go back.
Trust in me I will never fail you, did I tell I graduated,
I know you did not missed it, because I felt your presence,
Maybe what I’m saying does not make any sense,
I will progress, our dream
Will be my grace,
Check me out from heaven above
Know that I still think for both,
You are just resting,
We haven’t lost the war,
I will keep writing poems,
And I still keep my promise
To pay for your nieces prom.
Even though what I write, or say,
The breeze could take it way,
Poems would be my allied
To give me company,
Because of this emptiness
Only it would fill it up, that’s destiny
That your gone, is so hard to feel
Alone,
Your family are doing good,
And your nephew Teddy too,
Im going to go ahead like always doing my best,
Remember that you are now my angel, and you need to protect me,
You know I always protest, you helped me with my faith,
When I was hiding, maybe I was only afraid,
Now my son ask me when is coming Uncle Fred
After your departure, you have left my wound
Open and bleeding more than it would.
Dude.
Because In heaven there’s a new angel
Is my friend, that left for a reason that I know
I know I will see you again,
You haven’t die you still living inside My heart.
You still in my heart.
Thats why today on your grave,
im leaving this note, so you know
that I have to let you go,
but I would never forget about you,
you know I wont.
SENA
[quote-107863-SupHomeboi]Dear Depression,
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.[/quot
i wish i cant away from it, just with a note.
nice one.
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.[/quot
i wish i cant away from it, just with a note.
nice one.
RSena said:DEAR FRED
A memory that comes to me every time that I’m alone,
And my tears are the only ones that comfort me even though you are gone,
It hurt me, but I’m going to have to let you go,
Let you rest, let your soul fly, it will be better for both,
To a better place, God decided it anyway
Stop this denial shit, understood you went away,
Where we all wished for you in our deepest pray, I see your picture and listen
To all your favor song, like boys don’t cry, and boy it makes me cry.
You taught me, that humans are different, and we have to accept them,
Never to judges, because they are lesbian or gay, know them because
One they I might depend. I see how our live changed so fast, I could not even
See you for a last, time was never that, god damn I wish you met my Son and my Dad.
I will be going to your tomb one of this days, with flowers,
Is sad, I know that if you only knew what I have become you would be more prouder,
I hope god is not prejudice against gay,
I hope he understands that you are one of his creatures so you got stay,
that’s why for you, I kneel and pray,
I know, you had a tuff life, because of what you were,
So sad, if you only knew, now you can merry another man, could it be possible over there?
Teddy still email me, asking me if you are coming back,
I always tell him yes, with time he will understand,
He ask about my country, one day I asked him why,
He tells me because my uncle Fred always wanted to go back.
Trust in me I will never fail you, did I tell I graduated,
I know you did not missed it, because I felt your presence,
Maybe what I’m saying does not make any sense,
I will progress, our dream
Will be my grace,
Check me out from heaven above
Know that I still think for both,
You are just resting,
We haven’t lost the war,
I will keep writing poems,
And I still keep my promise
To pay for your nieces prom.
Even though what I write, or say,
The breeze could take it way,
Poems would be my allied
To give me company,
Because of this emptiness
Only it would fill it up, that’s destiny
That your gone, is so hard to feel
Alone,
Your family are doing good,
And your nephew Teddy too,
Im going to go ahead like always doing my best,
Remember that you are now my angel, and you need to protect me,
You know I always protest, you helped me with my faith,
When I was hiding, maybe I was only afraid,
Now my son ask me when is coming Uncle Fred
After your departure, you have left my wound
Open and bleeding more than it would.
Dude.
Because In heaven there’s a new angel
Is my friend, that left for a reason that I know
I know I will see you again,
You haven’t die you still living inside My heart.
You still in my heart.
Thats why today on your grave,
im leaving this note, so you know
that I have to let you go,
but I would never forget about you,
you know I wont.
SENA
long, but i like the flow you used. is like a slow rap song.
nice post.
A memory that comes to me every time that I’m alone,
And my tears are the only ones that comfort me even though you are gone,
It hurt me, but I’m going to have to let you go,
Let you rest, let your soul fly, it will be better for both,
To a better place, God decided it anyway
Stop this denial shit, understood you went away,
Where we all wished for you in our deepest pray, I see your picture and listen
To all your favor song, like boys don’t cry, and boy it makes me cry.
You taught me, that humans are different, and we have to accept them,
Never to judges, because they are lesbian or gay, know them because
One they I might depend. I see how our live changed so fast, I could not even
See you for a last, time was never that, god damn I wish you met my Son and my Dad.
I will be going to your tomb one of this days, with flowers,
Is sad, I know that if you only knew what I have become you would be more prouder,
I hope god is not prejudice against gay,
I hope he understands that you are one of his creatures so you got stay,
that’s why for you, I kneel and pray,
I know, you had a tuff life, because of what you were,
So sad, if you only knew, now you can merry another man, could it be possible over there?
Teddy still email me, asking me if you are coming back,
I always tell him yes, with time he will understand,
He ask about my country, one day I asked him why,
He tells me because my uncle Fred always wanted to go back.
Trust in me I will never fail you, did I tell I graduated,
I know you did not missed it, because I felt your presence,
Maybe what I’m saying does not make any sense,
I will progress, our dream
Will be my grace,
Check me out from heaven above
Know that I still think for both,
You are just resting,
We haven’t lost the war,
I will keep writing poems,
And I still keep my promise
To pay for your nieces prom.
Even though what I write, or say,
The breeze could take it way,
Poems would be my allied
To give me company,
Because of this emptiness
Only it would fill it up, that’s destiny
That your gone, is so hard to feel
Alone,
Your family are doing good,
And your nephew Teddy too,
Im going to go ahead like always doing my best,
Remember that you are now my angel, and you need to protect me,
You know I always protest, you helped me with my faith,
When I was hiding, maybe I was only afraid,
Now my son ask me when is coming Uncle Fred
After your departure, you have left my wound
Open and bleeding more than it would.
Dude.
Because In heaven there’s a new angel
Is my friend, that left for a reason that I know
I know I will see you again,
You haven’t die you still living inside My heart.
You still in my heart.
Thats why today on your grave,
im leaving this note, so you know
that I have to let you go,
but I would never forget about you,
you know I wont.
SENA
long, but i like the flow you used. is like a slow rap song.
nice post.
Dear friend,
I tried to write down all the reasons why
my plan never worked
but all i got was a few simple words
they soon turned into lakes spilling
off of these pages
so dont be disturbed if you cant read
the ruined words
all i wanted was to be yours
wrapped in the embrace
of your arms
but you let me go
for what
a size two
with a nice pair of shoes
the only thing you ever wanted
wanted was a girl who said "yes"
instead of "no"
who laughed at all your jokes
and smiled at the sound of your name
while i sat at the side
the only one aware of the game
you played
tugging at the string of my emotions
i let myself fall
without realizing
how far i had to go
purging myself of the thought
of us of you
i dissapear back into the scenery
and let the roots that once held me
comfort me
from the fear of one day
loving another
that was never mine.
so as i apologize
for the beast you unleashed
in me
i write these last words
that will release me
from the spell
you sowed in me
this- is -goodbye
this - is - the- last- time
Sincerely
That Girl
I tried to write down all the reasons why
my plan never worked
but all i got was a few simple words
they soon turned into lakes spilling
off of these pages
so dont be disturbed if you cant read
the ruined words
all i wanted was to be yours
wrapped in the embrace
of your arms
but you let me go
for what
a size two
with a nice pair of shoes
the only thing you ever wanted
wanted was a girl who said "yes"
instead of "no"
who laughed at all your jokes
and smiled at the sound of your name
while i sat at the side
the only one aware of the game
you played
tugging at the string of my emotions
i let myself fall
without realizing
how far i had to go
purging myself of the thought
of us of you
i dissapear back into the scenery
and let the roots that once held me
comfort me
from the fear of one day
loving another
that was never mine.
so as i apologize
for the beast you unleashed
in me
i write these last words
that will release me
from the spell
you sowed in me
this- is -goodbye
this - is - the- last- time
Sincerely
That Girl
Anonymous
Dear John
I guess you must have read the letter
Before the poison got to you
I thought of leaving
But then I would be grieving
For the loss of you
This way, I know
I will have you forever
Buried in the basement
Down below
Love
Carmen
x0x0x0x0x
I guess you must have read the letter
Before the poison got to you
I thought of leaving
But then I would be grieving
For the loss of you
This way, I know
I will have you forever
Buried in the basement
Down below
Love
Carmen
x0x0x0x0x
Dear World,
I have had enough.
Your laughing, your mocking.
It hurts more than i think you know.
Inocence you play.
I can never have a good day.
Please stop hurting me.
Stop and you will see.
That i am dying.
Your abuse, is like a stab.
Your stares, like an arrow
hitting my heart.
I want this all to end.
I will be leaving now.
i see a river flowing black
a small boat to,
to take me down.
Down to hell.
Where i will be seeing
you next.
FishCake
I have had enough.
Your laughing, your mocking.
It hurts more than i think you know.
Inocence you play.
I can never have a good day.
Please stop hurting me.
Stop and you will see.
That i am dying.
Your abuse, is like a stab.
Your stares, like an arrow
hitting my heart.
I want this all to end.
I will be leaving now.
i see a river flowing black
a small boat to,
to take me down.
Down to hell.
Where i will be seeing
you next.
FishCake
A LETTER TO TUPAC SHAKUR
Its now 16 years since u left
Why did they pull the trigger to see u dead?
These other rappers cant even reach close to your name
Yet u left with only 25 years of age.
Im a die hard fan thats why I wrote this letter
LIFE GOES ON but not like the way u left us
We try to SMILE KEEP OUR HEADS UP but never
Have we found a replacement like u never.
Good news LL SNOOPY and DRE still in the game
DMX took control in the mid 90s but now its LIL WAYNE
Im sure v u heard of PAUL WALL,WALE and EMINEM
They are a witness of RAP spreading to every place and race.
The game hasnt changed much its corrupted and dirty
These fake rappers cant do it without ILLUMINATI
Hip Hop has gone commercial big in every country
But the spirit of rappers is weaker I say that loudly.
The WEST COAST EAST COAST feud is no longer strong
I wish u see the video of DIDDY and SNOOP DOGG
East Coast rappers believe BIGGIE SMALL is the king of hip hop
But the rest of the world still know u own the crown.
Send my greetings to SCARFACE and NATE DOGG greatly
Marven Gaye BIG L and all of them MAKAVELI
We miss u ask the OUTLAWS TI and SLIM SHADY
Goodbye PAC this is the end of my letter MAKAVELI.
Its now 16 years since u left
Why did they pull the trigger to see u dead?
These other rappers cant even reach close to your name
Yet u left with only 25 years of age.
Im a die hard fan thats why I wrote this letter
LIFE GOES ON but not like the way u left us
We try to SMILE KEEP OUR HEADS UP but never
Have we found a replacement like u never.
Good news LL SNOOPY and DRE still in the game
DMX took control in the mid 90s but now its LIL WAYNE
Im sure v u heard of PAUL WALL,WALE and EMINEM
They are a witness of RAP spreading to every place and race.
The game hasnt changed much its corrupted and dirty
These fake rappers cant do it without ILLUMINATI
Hip Hop has gone commercial big in every country
But the spirit of rappers is weaker I say that loudly.
The WEST COAST EAST COAST feud is no longer strong
I wish u see the video of DIDDY and SNOOP DOGG
East Coast rappers believe BIGGIE SMALL is the king of hip hop
But the rest of the world still know u own the crown.
Send my greetings to SCARFACE and NATE DOGG greatly
Marven Gaye BIG L and all of them MAKAVELI
We miss u ask the OUTLAWS TI and SLIM SHADY
Goodbye PAC this is the end of my letter MAKAVELI.
JAITO said:A LETTER TO TUPAC SHAKUR
Its now 16 years since u left
Why did they pull the trigger to see u dead?
These other rappers cant even reach close to your name
Yet u left with only 25 years of age.
Im a die hard fan thats why I wrote this letter
LIFE GOES ON but not like the way u left us
We try to SMILE KEEP OUR HEADS UP but never
Have we found a replacement like u never.
Good news LL SNOOPY and DRE still in the game
DMX took control in the mid 90s but now its LIL WAYNE
Im sure v u heard of PAUL WALL,WALE and EMINEM
They are a witness of RAP spreading to every place and race.
The game hasnt changed much its corrupted and dirty
These fake rappers cant do it without ILLUMINATI
Hip Hop has gone commercial big in every country
But the spirit of rappers is weaker I say that loudly.
The WEST COAST EAST COAST feud is no longer strong
I wish u see the video of DIDDY and SNOOP DOGG
East Coast rappers believe BIGGIE SMALL is the king of hip hop
But the rest of the world still know u own the crown.
Send my greetings to SCARFACE and NATE DOGG greatly
Marven Gaye BIG L and all of them MAKAVELI
We miss u ask the OUTLAWS TI and SLIM SHADY
Goodbye PAC this is the end of my letter MAKAVELI.
i like your poem, so beautiful, i hear sometimes some of his rap, especial the one for his mom, thanks for sharing this with us.
ginet
Its now 16 years since u left
Why did they pull the trigger to see u dead?
These other rappers cant even reach close to your name
Yet u left with only 25 years of age.
Im a die hard fan thats why I wrote this letter
LIFE GOES ON but not like the way u left us
We try to SMILE KEEP OUR HEADS UP but never
Have we found a replacement like u never.
Good news LL SNOOPY and DRE still in the game
DMX took control in the mid 90s but now its LIL WAYNE
Im sure v u heard of PAUL WALL,WALE and EMINEM
They are a witness of RAP spreading to every place and race.
The game hasnt changed much its corrupted and dirty
These fake rappers cant do it without ILLUMINATI
Hip Hop has gone commercial big in every country
But the spirit of rappers is weaker I say that loudly.
The WEST COAST EAST COAST feud is no longer strong
I wish u see the video of DIDDY and SNOOP DOGG
East Coast rappers believe BIGGIE SMALL is the king of hip hop
But the rest of the world still know u own the crown.
Send my greetings to SCARFACE and NATE DOGG greatly
Marven Gaye BIG L and all of them MAKAVELI
We miss u ask the OUTLAWS TI and SLIM SHADY
Goodbye PAC this is the end of my letter MAKAVELI.
i like your poem, so beautiful, i hear sometimes some of his rap, especial the one for his mom, thanks for sharing this with us.
ginet
SupHomeboi said:Dear Depression,
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.
you really called my atettion make it dificult for me to choose. well done. really
I'm saying goodbye to sleepless nights
Staying up late getting fat off junk food
Picking up the booze when I should be picking up The Bible
Popping anti-depressants like breath mints
Leaving behind the suicidal thoughts
Crying sad songs of my painful yesterdays
I'm looking forward to happier tomorrows
No more playing the victim hungry for sympathy
Time for me to be my own superhero
But I thank you despite everything you put me through
You've tried to kill me but only made me stronger
Bought me so down the only direction was up
This is why I've sealed this letter with a kiss
I loved you but I love myself more
Sincerely,
L.J.
you really called my atettion make it dificult for me to choose. well done. really
