Poetry competition CLOSED 17th April 2012 00:28am
WINNER
LadyC
LadyC
RUNNERS-UP:
Grace
and raorrick
Break
You left me alone, a turning point in my life,
I always believed you, no matter in what
Your last words are still in my heart,
It’s hard to believe, sorrow in my life
I will always be a friend to you, wonder how you are,
The bond will always be there, and stays with us
I will never wish to leave you, please don’t break my heart,
The pain it causes for me, is hard more enough
You once said you loved me, but that all soon changed
I can’t smile while hurt, but still giving you a fake one
Screaming from the pain, with my thoughts being of you
Loving the pain still, because you gifted me that one
I know you will never know how much I love you
And how much I miss you, and how much I deserve you
Yeah, I know you will never know how much I love you
And how much I care you, and how much I obsessed into you
Do you believe love is everlasting?
Or else I’ll prove you how it is
Do you believe love is never breakable bond?
Or else I’ll prove you because I can’t stop loving you
I know you will never know how much I love you
And how much I miss you, and how much I deserve you
Yeah, I know you will never know how much I love you
And how much I care you, and how much I obsessed into you
Losing you
is like a death
hard
to let go
of
the past
and
never agains
the future
and
never wills
I let you become
my everything
my world was
of your love
for me
you
were the air
I breathed
the water
I drank
the food
I ate
the shelter
I needed
I hate
how much
I love you
I can see
in your eyes
feel
in your embrace
the person
you long to be
and
it tricks me
into believing
that’s who you are
but you’re not
my hope
for you
is no longer
enough
to endure
the hurt
it’s become
too much
for my heart
to bear
the
resentment
that
resides inside
your words
will never
be enough
to override
your lack
of
actions
you failed
me
and now
you
must
go
Cinny said:[quote-77093-LadyC]Thank you Miku-chii! Thank you Rachel its a honor to be in the winning circle with you I think you're awesome!
No, thank you LadyC!
I loved your poem, it was so powerful and emotional, I could really see how much your heart must've trembled as you wrote it! (:[/quote]
Yea I shed a tear or 2. Thank you again
No, thank you LadyC!
I loved your poem, it was so powerful and emotional, I could really see how much your heart must've trembled as you wrote it! (:[/quote]
Yea I shed a tear or 2. Thank you again
