Poetry competition CLOSED 9th April 2012 7:28pm
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uniqueshaky
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A tricky Write

Posted: 4th April 2012 4:10pm
goodest
goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007
in the early morning sun
touched by my tongue
pleasure goes beyond
mere fun
sprung.....

Posted: 4th April 2012 4:14pm
Cinny
Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983
Silver metal is so soft,
comforts my pale skin
as it slices
and draws
blood.

Posted: 4th April 2012 4:15pm
Cinny
Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983
I've found relief exists when
I am holding a
razor against my
wrist, I'm
cut.

Posted: 4th April 2012 4:27pm
poet Anonymous
Beautiful--keep it up, thank's so much :-)

Posted: 4th April 2012 5:58pm
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Dangerous Mind
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bust the blunt....i comply
insert mary....dont deny
fire....now fly
just....try
high....

Posted: 4th April 2012 6:22pm
MrAlptraum
MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 17awards
Joined 24th Dec 2011
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I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.

Posted: 4th April 2012 7:41pm
lightbaron
lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
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MrAlptraum said:I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.


dig it mr.a

Posted: 4th April 2012 8:25pm
Edited: 4th April 2012 8:32pm
poet Anonymous
WONDERFUL..THANK'S...Please continue-it is going to be really hard to pick a winner here-wow,,lol

These entries are so good
Choosing one is hard
I really love
Every single
One

Posted: 5th April 2012 10:26am
dustyjjewels
dustyjjewels
Fire of Insight
Nigeria 15awards
Joined 24th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 241
Lastnight I was lost
Strayed into a world of lust
So in need
Couldn't control my greed
Now it's time to face the cost

Posted: 5th April 2012 10:31am
MrAlptraum
MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 1878
lightbaron said:[quote-73902-MrAlptraum]I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.


dig it mr.a[/quote]

Can ya?

Posted: 5th April 2012 10:46am
dustyjjewels
dustyjjewels
Fire of Insight
Nigeria 15awards
Joined 24th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 241
The emblems of our love will never die
Though I left and made you cry
I did what was best for us,if you look into my eyes
You'd see we were heading for the worse
Disaster wasn't too far

Posted: 5th April 2012 4:23pm
poet Anonymous
MrAlptraum said:[quote-73928-lightbaron][quote-73902-MrAlptraum]I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.


dig it mr.a[/quote]

Can ya?[/quote]


I have seen an allusion to me and my memory a few times-If there is anything or anyone I need to remember-they better remember my brain injury and speak up---I AM GONNA STATE-FOR THE RECORD-I SEE CLEARLY BEYOND THE CRAP-EITHER SAY-OR STFU

Posted: 5th April 2012 4:32pm
goodest
goodest
Dangerous Mind
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how did it really happen
now blue lights flashing
i'm just laughing
police harassing
embarassing.....lol

Posted: 5th April 2012 4:35pm
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Dangerous Mind
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five words in first line
four more next time
three equals Divine
two rhymed
fine....

Posted: 5th April 2012 5:41pm
diddi
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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Forum Posts: 1704
Life the horse race money
the pace , every day
we look through
its invisible
face .

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