Poetry competition CLOSED 11th March 2012 4:30am
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ImperfectedStone (The Gardener)
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Deadly Love

MidnightXDawn
Wynter-frost
Twisted Dreamer
Romania 4awards
Joined 1st Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 74

Poetry Contest

Make me a reomeo and Juliet scene
I want it as long or short as you want
it must be as tragic as anything
make me cry for once people!
if you need help look at my poem tale of two Sould


-no re-posts
-2 max
-no collaborations
-no talking over the competition page please i like to just ready poetry

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Can it be a repost?

MidnightXDawn
Wynter-frost
Twisted Dreamer
Romania 4awards
Joined 1st Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 74

i would rather it not, it needs to be fresh and horrid to make someone cry, dramtic and soft poetry!

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

Wardrobe.


I once imagined you were here,
standing in the corner
between the wardrobe and the table.
The lights were off,
I was half-sleeping.
I swore I could see you there.
I turned over, I tried to block it out
but your eyes, they were burning across my skin, I couldn't breathe.
I once imagined you were here
though you weren't, the Doctor explained my "vision"
over his desk, after prescribing me pills.
The lights were off,
I was half-sleeping.
I swore I could see you there
but it wasn't you,
just my Doctor with another dose.
I'll be seeing you.

poet Anonymous

DEADLY LOVE

It is the time I go into heat

The pheromones in me attract my mate

I choose the male who pleases me

With him I copulate freely

When we are done and he has had his fun

I kill him and watch the look on his face

So surprised was he at my ardor

Unexpected onslaught…bleeding all over

As he closes his eyes

I hold him and say surprise

Spider woman got her prize!!!!!

skinnyjean
Llamaliscious
Thought Provoker
New Zealand 6awards
Joined 23rd May 2010
Forum Posts: 311

Rivalry(Who loves who the most?)


Visions, fortold
To you;
Broken players on the pavement

Talent, behold
I do
Believe I know just what you're saying

Accents and descendants, woven
Into
Vodka and Narcotics

Patience, awoken
In me
Aguments equals violence

Weeping, swollen
Wiltered
Eye sockets in saturation

Making, holes in
Walls
Big enough to bury ourselves in

Drunken, bloodied bodies
Fall
Into those vacant spaces

Sirens quiet, clueless
No one cries
Breathe is non existant

Punishment, in excess
All because I
Said I might just love you less

I laughed it off when you said,
'Till death
Do us part'

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

Twisted consummation  
( colab with beautifully tourtured words ( Indie) )
 
String me up like a puppet
Romantically pair me with a muppet
I'll be your chocolate sundae fantasy
With razor blades for edge
Waiting with handcuffs at the end of the bed
 
I want to hold down my beauty; so true;
Just to prove my love is only for you.
To shackle your legs so not to leave me alone,
This anticipation can only start you to moan.
My lips touch yours as a dew upon a rose;
Two twisted pairs begin to enclose.
 
With sharpened nails for blackboard screams
And strawberry wounds to make me clean
You're the heaven in my hell
The chains of bondage that get me high
Your body, an ecstatic friction between my thighs
 
To penetrate as a nail through wood;
Only filling your gaping wound if I could.
Satisfying your every dying needs of lust;
To leave the imprint of a blackened heart I must.
Digging your nails inside of me; winning your heart;
Not even God could pull us apart.
 
I want to take this moment and pin it down
Scream your name and break the barriers of sound
And I need, I need to feel that bite in my veins
Cause you stole my soul and I'm dying of love
Drowning in ecstasy at you're touch
 
As your blood feels my mouth of undying love;
My delicious, fetishism black dove.
To fill you with a vein so solid as our lust between us;
Filling your nails deep with my flesh with every thrust.
Kissing your lips with a familiar taste of poison of shade;
Only from your blackened heart it was made.
 
Wanting us to be frictioned together as mountains on land;
To lay above he who walks below the land.
Those to envy this marriage of firery lustful degree;
The wild hellish fulfilment that must be.
 
Cause I can taste the scarlet scent of your skin
And the way you fuck me must be a sin
Teeth skimming and tearing at my throat
I need to feel you from the inside out
Beyond the rapture, deep into the black-out
 
Where I'm begging you to never stop
And I like it better when you're on top
Pinning me against the lightning clouds
Fucking me so deep and violent
Not even a gag can keep my silence
 
Melting together as a sodering pot;
Hearts of concertina wire in a knot.
You beg, and pled...
Faster; harder; make me bleed.
Your vangerous teeth latch upon my skin;
For this consummation is full of sin.
 
Up from the ashes: deep within my tides;
Soon to plant my spawn through your insides.
Never to feel death of two so sweet;
Making our heavens hell almost complete.

cavanwomble
Nob ody
Lost Thinker
Israel
Joined 10th Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 21

POISON

MY DOOR SHUTS LOUD
MY KEYS ARE THROWN FAR

"WHERE'S MY PRETTY LITTLE BOY HIDING NOW"

I'M UNDER THE TABLE KNEELING CAUSE I COULDN'T SIT
HOLDING A KNIFE THAT WOULD END UP INSIDE HIM
IF HE WAS TO FIND ME
IF HE WAS SMELL ME

I WOULD RUN FAST BUT HE WOULD RUN FASTER
I CAN'T WAIT TIL THE DAY THAT I'M BIGGER
HOLDING A KNIFE OR PULLING THE TRIGER

SOMETIMES I BLAME IT ON THE DRUGS AND DRINK INSIDE
BUT THEN I SEE IT IN HIS EYES I SEE THAT HE IS POISON

POISON

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

The red eye.
Beyond the window
is you.
I have nothing.
We have known loss.

Scattered - my mind,
flying to someone
I don't know
and I'll take his hand
and I'll step forwards until my feet hit the ground
and his fingers will place a ring on my finger
and my flowers fly
the way you flew out
to see
if I'd do it.
I'd be anyone
else
to keep you,
to let you stay.

I'd sail to you.
I'd step up onto your bubble
through the soft play and fights.
I'd yell your name until this voice box broke.
I'd suffer.

The red eye.
Heaving out these words,
build a wall away,
break these ribbon ties.
We have known love.

We dreamed it.
We breathed it.
We fooled it.
We believed it.
We sailed to it.
We climbed into it's bubble.
We have known loss.

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

FataL..

A fatal kind of love,
That would be yours and mine.
A consistant fear, yet a tasty wine!
Your killing me softly, without saying a word,
It takes a lethal combination to sooth this burn!
Which way to go, is what keeps us guessing...
Will it be you, or me, to do the messing?
To catch a feeling, my god , it's the worse...
You were once a blessing, but now a curse!
This monster, YOU created her!
So love it, or leave it,
But live to hate it!

TriTaoWisp
Lost Thinker
United Kingdom
Joined 23rd Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 15

In the club I feel ready for all of the night
Hoods in the front and punks too the right
Every breath beckons the sirens into my lungs
The pulse of the beats arise
And I dance entranced within a innocent fire

She appears as a angel embracing the dark
She moves through the crowd as a ocean
Moving them in and out
Tranquil states are brought to mind
But I do not see the vast depths    
Where many can drown

I see into her eyes
And lose my mind
This is not just lust but love
Gravity is turned towards neon lights
I stand closer too her gaze
She dances in my thighs
My hands become motion
Wrapped round her breast
And her beautiful neck
All the night is washed in her

We bed at dawn
At my flat by the rivers edge
The walk home was of dreams
Time was unseen
She lay down bare
Beauty I have never before seen
Pounding and softly touching
The sex is full of raptures
The room reaps our love juices
 
What bliss A fortnight of innocence at its best
Their is no other care
I can see no risk
Heaven is the only destination
On a road of summer twilight

It is late one night
When I wake to find only her warmth on the sheets
Shouts and screams transcend from back streets
Primal fear arises I take up my bat
I go through the door I leave it ajar
Wide Down the stairs
Sprint Pounding the rest

She is battered and bloody on the floor
A hooded figure shadow by nightmares
With a knife to her jaw
Am I dreaming is this just my fear
Is he a x-lover or a debt collector

I Launch through the air
I hit him on his twisted skull
I feel the knife in-bedded in my chest
With no pain hit him too death
I lay down with no grip unmovable lame
Moaning her name

I see her eyes
A tear on my cheek
Her hair on my brow
A kiss on my lips
A taste of her blood trickles on my tongue
She lay on my chest her ear too my heart
And then all goes dark
     






 



 

   

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

Expiration date:

Dear love of my life:
Dearest I am here:

( He )I love you do much I can not lie;
If you were to ever leave you will die. 
You feed my soul and heart;
Take that away: I will rip you apart

( She ) I spent my life making us;
The passionate moments; nights filled with lust. 
If you take my love an run with it;
You will end up with a throat that's slit. 

( He )I am not trying to scare you to never leave;
I just need you to know how much I love you...please believe. 
You are the only one that completes me;
Please don't walk away and set me free.

( She )I will always be you love that slaves;
Your my road to heaven; your heart that paves. 
Their no simple way just to say " I LOVE YOU!"; 
This consummation, this courtship is long overdue. 

( He ) You can try to run if so desired;
I promise you this; you will only die tired. 
I just wanted you to know that I can not exist without you;
We have been partners for do long; what would I do?

( He )I love you my darling dearest;
I will wait for you to sleep, then cut you wrist. 
I am not threatening you just stating;
Without you I'm a bird with one wing. 

(She) So I love you with all my heart forever and a day;
You break my heart and you will pay. 
So if you so I love you under you cough;
I will be more than happy to cut your head off. 

( We ) We must live our lives in death;
We will still say I love you with our last breath. 
Now it's time to be together and end it all;
For always and forever we are. 

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

Atropabelladonna said:Twisted consummation  
( colab with beautifully tourtured words ( Indie) )
 
String me up like a puppet
Romantically pair me with a muppet
I'll be your chocolate sundae fantasy
With razor blades for edge
Waiting with handcuffs at the end of the bed
 
I want to hold down my beauty; so true;
Just to prove my love is only for you.
To shackle your legs so not to leave me alone,
This anticipation can only start you to moan.

My lips touch yours as a dew upon a rose;
Two twisted pairs begin to enclose.
 
With sharpened nails for blackboard screams
And strawberry wounds to make me clean
You're the heaven in my hell
The chains of bondage that get me high
Your body, an ecstatic friction between my thighs
 
To penetrate as a nail through wood;
Only filling your gaping wound if I could.
Satisfying your every dying needs of lust;
To leave the imprint of a blackened heart I must.
Digging your nails inside of me; winning your heart;
Not even God could pull us apart.
 
I want to take this moment and pin it down
Scream your name and break the barriers of sound
And I need, I need to feel that bite in my veins
Cause you stole my soul and I'm dying of love
Drowning in ecstasy at you're touch
 
As your blood feels my mouth of undying love;
My delicious, fetishism black dove.
To fill you with a vein so solid as our lust between us;
Filling your nails deep with my flesh with every thrust.
Kissing your lips with a familiar taste of poison of shade;
Only from your blackened heart it was made.
 
Wanting us to be frictioned together as mountains on land;
To lay above he who walks below the land.
Those to envy this marriage of firery lustful degree;
The wild hellish fulfilment that must be.
 
Cause I can taste the scarlet scent of your skin
And the way you fuck me must be a sin
Teeth skimming and tearing at my throat
I need to feel you from the inside out
Beyond the rapture, deep into the black-out
 
Where I'm begging you to never stop
And I like it better when you're on top
Pinning me against the lightning clouds
Fucking me so deep and violent
Not even a gag can keep my silence
 
Melting together as a sodering pot;
Hearts of concertina wire in a knot.
You beg, and pled...
Faster; harder; make me bleed.
Your vangerous teeth latch upon my skin;
For this consummation is full of sin.
 
Up from the ashes: deep within my tides;
Soon to plant my spawn through your insides.
Never to feel death of two so sweet;
Making our heavens hell almost complete.



OMIT IT'S A COLAB SORRY

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

ImperfectedStone said:Wardrobe.


I once imagined you were here,
standing in the corner
between the wardrobe and the table.
The lights were off,
I was half-sleeping.
I swore I could see you there.
I turned over, I tried to block it out
but your eyes, they were burning across my skin, I couldn't breathe.
I once imagined you were here
though you weren't, the Doctor explained my "vision"
over his desk, after prescribing me pills.
The lights were off,
I was half-sleeping.
I swore I could see you there
but it wasn't you,
just my Doctor with another dose.
I'll be seeing you.

Love the poem

TriTaoWisp
Lost Thinker
United Kingdom
Joined 23rd Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 15

Wardrobe.
I can see how this is the winner, brings about such a deep place in the soul.  

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