Poetry competition CLOSED 29th February 2012 7:31pm
WINNER
EternalSnow (Snow)
EternalSnow (Snow)
RUNNER-UP:
Firebyrd
What makes you mad?
Anonymous
so you don't want us to make a poem but just to say what makes us mad?
Anonymous
what makes me mad is to see i have over 300 reads on a poem and only 1 or c2 comments
Anonymous
IT IS LISTED AS A POETRY COMPETITION....maybe it should have been under CHAT??????????????????
So what do you want
from me ,
you got each eye
so that I can't see ,
I try to look
kind of jolly , happy
I'm blind and I'm struck
by impossibility ,
the kind bestowed
upon , unwantedly ,
my ride you towed
the one you rode
for free ,
now I'm alone
for your hilarity ,
the break
of my bones
a responsibility ,
to take but you don't ,
though my soul
you squeeze ,
such audacity
is attoned with ease ,
a flea's mentality
is at home , with you it seems .
An ignoramous ,
a blood swigger
you're so shameless ,
a truth rigger ,
your totally blameless
so how do you then figure this
a little miss painless ,
a gold digger
who makes no sense .
Reality devoid ,
depravity you employ ,
internally
you're a cavity ,
who strips me of all joy .
Self obsessed
and mercenary ,
your husband , a press
for the money you bleed
you're a self centered mess ,
you think that you're the best
but I know
as I don't guess
you've got it coming , from me .
from me ,
you got each eye
so that I can't see ,
I try to look
kind of jolly , happy
I'm blind and I'm struck
by impossibility ,
the kind bestowed
upon , unwantedly ,
my ride you towed
the one you rode
for free ,
now I'm alone
for your hilarity ,
the break
of my bones
a responsibility ,
to take but you don't ,
though my soul
you squeeze ,
such audacity
is attoned with ease ,
a flea's mentality
is at home , with you it seems .
An ignoramous ,
a blood swigger
you're so shameless ,
a truth rigger ,
your totally blameless
so how do you then figure this
a little miss painless ,
a gold digger
who makes no sense .
Reality devoid ,
depravity you employ ,
internally
you're a cavity ,
who strips me of all joy .
Self obsessed
and mercenary ,
your husband , a press
for the money you bleed
you're a self centered mess ,
you think that you're the best
but I know
as I don't guess
you've got it coming , from me .
Anonymous
yea am a bit confused as to what to do
Anonymous
Broken Into Whispers
I know it will happen
when I am asleep
in dreams of you
Unconscious and prone
I will be a ripe fruit
for a defiled mind
He'll strike
and I will be forced away
from my motionless body
Detached from the pain
I'll feel nothing
until it is done
When the coldness bites
my blanket will disappear
and I'll be naked in the darkness
Alone, in tears I'll search for you
to hold me
to reconstitue me
For I'll be broken into whispers
as I have been time and time again
by his vow
Yet, I will remain loyal to you
my savior, my sanctification
please forgive me
I know it will happen
when I am asleep
in dreams of you
Unconscious and prone
I will be a ripe fruit
for a defiled mind
He'll strike
and I will be forced away
from my motionless body
Detached from the pain
I'll feel nothing
until it is done
When the coldness bites
my blanket will disappear
and I'll be naked in the darkness
Alone, in tears I'll search for you
to hold me
to reconstitue me
For I'll be broken into whispers
as I have been time and time again
by his vow
Yet, I will remain loyal to you
my savior, my sanctification
please forgive me
