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Paulina Dionne
Forum Posts: 1141
Paulina Dionne
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 9th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 1141
Preacher man (we take no more)
Push aside your point of view
talk in confusion
hear him laugh at you
war,crime and radiation
let it crawl while the city sleeps
let them creep
and now he searches for his prey
now you're melting on your burning feet
but still people choose their way
and do nothing
...stop!
he talks- connected scars reopen
a thousand fingers reach out to you
we don't feel no contamination
keep talking- you're the hunter , im the prey
keep talking- im the preacher, you're the fool
we rebel but no words are spoken
we won't be broken , Mr.preacher man
we need no teacher
kill the preacher
death to the preacher man!
Push aside your point of view
talk in confusion
hear him laugh at you
war,crime and radiation
let it crawl while the city sleeps
let them creep
and now he searches for his prey
now you're melting on your burning feet
but still people choose their way
and do nothing
...stop!
he talks- connected scars reopen
a thousand fingers reach out to you
we don't feel no contamination
keep talking- you're the hunter , im the prey
keep talking- im the preacher, you're the fool
we rebel but no words are spoken
we won't be broken , Mr.preacher man
we need no teacher
kill the preacher
death to the preacher man!
mjs211
MikeTheEngineer
Forum Posts: 1572
MikeTheEngineer
Dangerous Mind
20
Joined 22nd Aug 2010Forum Posts: 1572
Anthem for Doomed Youth
(a collaboration between Jack Heslop and I)
Open her up like an iron maiden,
the hinges down one arm squealing.
There aren't even nails inside.
Close her front half behind you.
You now know everything she knows,
the cold walls and the viewing slot.
Walk a mile in her shoes?
The maiden goes nowhere, life as static
as a beige wallpaper stripe
or a dusty painting in the attic.
Faded and forgotten, viewing the world,
a rusting statue in her own home.
Dust particles fall like feathers from
a pigeon shot out of the sky.
There was no message in its talons.
Soup cans, lipstick, wayward eyes.
She's as garish as Pop Art,
and just as meaningless.
Overlooked by the schoolkids - nothing to ridicule.
Unnoticed by the media - no uplifting story.
Her life a neglected page fallen from history,
her heartbeat but a lost footnote.
Untouched as an eighteenth-century compendium
left to dry-rot on an invalid’s cobwebbed shelf.
This is the secret of the youth
and the light, poured through the prism
of our modern age. Cold as stone,
empty as a wine bottle once the revellers
have left, there is music, there are words,
but only to prove how trendy we are.
No rainbows refract from a cast-iron cage.
Just dead white, illuminating the visage
of the youth, pale, suffocated in her own body.
Rock is dead, chivalry is dead,
marriage and morals lie maggoty together...
The youth is dead. All hail the youth. The youth is dead.
(a collaboration between Jack Heslop and I)
Open her up like an iron maiden,
the hinges down one arm squealing.
There aren't even nails inside.
Close her front half behind you.
You now know everything she knows,
the cold walls and the viewing slot.
Walk a mile in her shoes?
The maiden goes nowhere, life as static
as a beige wallpaper stripe
or a dusty painting in the attic.
Faded and forgotten, viewing the world,
a rusting statue in her own home.
Dust particles fall like feathers from
a pigeon shot out of the sky.
There was no message in its talons.
Soup cans, lipstick, wayward eyes.
She's as garish as Pop Art,
and just as meaningless.
Overlooked by the schoolkids - nothing to ridicule.
Unnoticed by the media - no uplifting story.
Her life a neglected page fallen from history,
her heartbeat but a lost footnote.
Untouched as an eighteenth-century compendium
left to dry-rot on an invalid’s cobwebbed shelf.
This is the secret of the youth
and the light, poured through the prism
of our modern age. Cold as stone,
empty as a wine bottle once the revellers
have left, there is music, there are words,
but only to prove how trendy we are.
No rainbows refract from a cast-iron cage.
Just dead white, illuminating the visage
of the youth, pale, suffocated in her own body.
Rock is dead, chivalry is dead,
marriage and morals lie maggoty together...
The youth is dead. All hail the youth. The youth is dead.
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Forum Posts: 14578
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14578
God's gift
The man's a fool
bleeding tears upon rosary beads
in a blacked out room
frightened to death of life
and all its living
"There's never a plague when you need one"
he mumbled while eyeing a young girl
through a hole in his curtain
"the whore" he spat
The man's a fool
bleeding tears upon rosary beads
in a blacked out room
frightened to death of life
and all its living
"There's never a plague when you need one"
he mumbled while eyeing a young girl
through a hole in his curtain
"the whore" he spat
Anonymous
Deviant Love (Part 2)
And it continues still, touching soft virgin
skin, to the heart of the bones marrow,
searching for the pulse, for the drum roll
sounds of dark-red-blood-pumping through
veins of inexperienced vaults of being,
just human, yet immature and oh so young.
And we cry, cry for your recovery, cry for your
valediction and promotion to adult life.
And we try to protect you, yes we do,
attempting to provide as is our duty –
duty to god, duty to you. Yet still you defy us.
What are we to do?
In late night meetings we question the merits,
of belts-of-chastity and restraints-of-movement.
our parental instinct sets the tone, and we realise
perhaps we should – Leash-our-spawn.
Save you from over rated opinion and an
inflated self worth at the tender-nineteenth.
Save you from your lost virginity at the
ripe thirteen. Save you from the self inflicted
melancholy and financial stupidity of
the dealer at your fifteenth. Save you from
the criminal plans, hours past your sweet
sixteen.
And we pledge to attempt-to-save-you, even
if it means you are bound & restrained.
And you know...it will continue.
And it continues still, touching soft virgin
skin, to the heart of the bones marrow,
searching for the pulse, for the drum roll
sounds of dark-red-blood-pumping through
veins of inexperienced vaults of being,
just human, yet immature and oh so young.
And we cry, cry for your recovery, cry for your
valediction and promotion to adult life.
And we try to protect you, yes we do,
attempting to provide as is our duty –
duty to god, duty to you. Yet still you defy us.
What are we to do?
In late night meetings we question the merits,
of belts-of-chastity and restraints-of-movement.
our parental instinct sets the tone, and we realise
perhaps we should – Leash-our-spawn.
Save you from over rated opinion and an
inflated self worth at the tender-nineteenth.
Save you from your lost virginity at the
ripe thirteen. Save you from the self inflicted
melancholy and financial stupidity of
the dealer at your fifteenth. Save you from
the criminal plans, hours past your sweet
sixteen.
And we pledge to attempt-to-save-you, even
if it means you are bound & restrained.
And you know...it will continue.
mikeswan94
Mike
Joined 27th June 2011
Forum Posts: 2
Mike
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 2
"The Architect"
Watch the architect as he builds these walls.
Keeping out everything that has a possible chance to hurt him.
Building this fortress he shields himself from all.
All because of a shattered heart, his only reason.
Brick by brick, memory by memory he isolates himself.
He doesn’t want any connection or relation.
He’s been hurt before but with his kingdom of stone, never again.
Seclusion is the only way he knows.
As he sits in the world he created, the tears start to fall.
Recollections of the friends he had and the ones he loved fill his thoughts.
He waited to long, the mortar has set.
He is accompanied by memories and his shadow.
Only through cracks does he see the life he could have.
The life he is never to live again.
Watch the architect as he builds these walls.
Watch as he tries to tear them down.
Watch the architect as he builds these walls.
Keeping out everything that has a possible chance to hurt him.
Building this fortress he shields himself from all.
All because of a shattered heart, his only reason.
Brick by brick, memory by memory he isolates himself.
He doesn’t want any connection or relation.
He’s been hurt before but with his kingdom of stone, never again.
Seclusion is the only way he knows.
As he sits in the world he created, the tears start to fall.
Recollections of the friends he had and the ones he loved fill his thoughts.
He waited to long, the mortar has set.
He is accompanied by memories and his shadow.
Only through cracks does he see the life he could have.
The life he is never to live again.
Watch the architect as he builds these walls.
Watch as he tries to tear them down.
Whitewand6
Forum Posts: 2251
Dangerous Mind
16
Joined 1st Nov 2011 Forum Posts: 2251
This competition ended on the 11th of November
and still does not have a winner?
Another one?
and still does not have a winner?
Another one?
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1704
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1704
This is why as you probably know that I started that other competition as this is commonplace it seems
Karrabear
Question
Forum Posts: 416
Question
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 29th Aug 2009Forum Posts: 416
so is the competition still on?
Whitewand6
Forum Posts: 2251
Dangerous Mind
16
Joined 1st Nov 2011 Forum Posts: 2251
s i g h.