Poetry competition CLOSED 24th March 2022 6:43pm
WINNER
javalini
javalini
RUNNERS-UP:
RevolutionAL
and fallntarot
Pick & Mix Poetry
Anonymous
"Hey alice how is wonderland?"
For years you doubted me and said I was making it all up,
but now that you've fallen down this depression hole too;
you apoligize and expect me to believe you.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
Every where you look you see bottles tempting you to drink,
and every where you turn you find strange creatures and feelings that make you stop and think.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
You discover substances and try them attempting to numb the pain,
Now you cry so much it's like drowning in the rain.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
Your demons are very real but when you try to explain they turn invisible,
How could so much evil and pain be so easily disguisable?
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
In attempt to recieve help you tell someone and they call you mad as a hatter,
Like you did to me they made you feel like you don't even matter.
"So, hey alice do you believe me about wonderland now?"
but now that you've fallen down this depression hole too;
you apoligize and expect me to believe you.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
Every where you look you see bottles tempting you to drink,
and every where you turn you find strange creatures and feelings that make you stop and think.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
You discover substances and try them attempting to numb the pain,
Now you cry so much it's like drowning in the rain.
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
Your demons are very real but when you try to explain they turn invisible,
How could so much evil and pain be so easily disguisable?
"So, hey alice how is wonderland?"
In attempt to recieve help you tell someone and they call you mad as a hatter,
Like you did to me they made you feel like you don't even matter.
"So, hey alice do you believe me about wonderland now?"
Written by TrueLover
(Meganne)
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TrueLover said:
Hello, I’m afraid this isn’t a valid entry as it’s an old write and doesn’t use any of the words required. If you would like to write a new entry that meets the criteria, you are most welcome.
Hello, I’m afraid this isn’t a valid entry as it’s an old write and doesn’t use any of the words required. If you would like to write a new entry that meets the criteria, you are most welcome.
Anonymous
Many thanks for your stellar entries.
Congrats to Javalini who really took the brief and ran with it. I found this to be the most touching and explorative.
Runners up going to fallntarot who’s imagery was phenomenal and created a piece rich in its message and RevolutionAL who used a huge amount of emotion to produce a write wholly worthy of the brief.
Many congrats to you all, and thank you for a great contest 😄
Congrats to Javalini who really took the brief and ran with it. I found this to be the most touching and explorative.
Runners up going to fallntarot who’s imagery was phenomenal and created a piece rich in its message and RevolutionAL who used a huge amount of emotion to produce a write wholly worthy of the brief.
Many congrats to you all, and thank you for a great contest 😄
Northern_Soul said:Many thanks for your stellar entries.
Congrats to Javalini who really took the brief and ran with it. I found this to be the most touching and explorative.
Runners up going to fallntarot who’s imagery was phenomenal and created a piece rich in its message and RevolutionAL who used a huge amount of emotion to produce a write wholly worthy of the brief.
Many congrats to you all, and thank you for a great contest 😄
Aaah! Congrats to Javalini on a most deserving win!
I smiled when I saw fallintarot as runner up. That's a fantastic piece.
Thank you Missy for a decent brief and well run comp. Enjoyed this one!
Blue Skies at ALL who entered and were involved!
Al
Congrats to Javalini who really took the brief and ran with it. I found this to be the most touching and explorative.
Runners up going to fallntarot who’s imagery was phenomenal and created a piece rich in its message and RevolutionAL who used a huge amount of emotion to produce a write wholly worthy of the brief.
Many congrats to you all, and thank you for a great contest 😄
Aaah! Congrats to Javalini on a most deserving win!
I smiled when I saw fallintarot as runner up. That's a fantastic piece.
Thank you Missy for a decent brief and well run comp. Enjoyed this one!
Blue Skies at ALL who entered and were involved!
Al
