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Me, Myself and I

Posted: 5th April 2018 10:49pm
Edited: 5th April 2018 10:51pm
LunasChild8
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'Poetryman'

This is a unique way of describing what poetry is. The metaphors you've used allow a clear visual of how you've envisioned poetry. It's very true and also clever to compare poetry to a lone island floating in the vast ocean of the internet, waiting for "explorers" to discover them and experience their work.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:08pm
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'Cloventongue'

Your poem resonates a truth: people often have at least 2 sides to their character. Who they are online can be a complete stranger compared to who they are in public.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:25pm
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'Timeteral'

Wow, your poem certainly complies with the guidelines. It was fascinating reading your life story. I admire your ability of marching on despite the hard start to your life.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:29pm
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'eswaller'

I like the positive tone in your poem. It's wonderful that you love yourself so much, especially when our worst enemy is often ourselves.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:34pm
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'VinnieP'

You're absolutely correct about people changing as they experience life. Even 1 year is enough for a dramatic change to occur.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:37pm
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'runaway'

Very interesting oxymorons. You've brilliantly used them to show how opposites balance each other out and can't exist without the other.

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Posted: 5th April 2018 11:40pm
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'Aemelia'

I enjoyed reading your poem. I've read your comment, but I'm curious if you relate to some aspects of this woman?

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Posted: 7th April 2018 5:52am
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"MrVee"

I enjoyed reading your poem.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 5:56am
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"ulas"

I imagine your "death" allowed the birth of your poetic and spiritual side.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 5:58am
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"summultima"

I enjoyed reading your poem.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 6:02am
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"AtoMikbomb "

Your personality really radiates out from the words. I've certainly learned lots about you.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 6:03am
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"J_J_Jay_Jr"

You've used a clever way to show your heartbreak. I imagine that the black coffee can also represent your bitterness at your loss.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 6:05am
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"drone"

I like that you've incorporated my competition's title in your poem. I hope all parts of you are in harmony.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 6:08am
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SaWal

I absolutely love your poem and the pictures you've created with your great metaphors.  I especially loved this line: "So sometimes you gotta trust the artist more than the art" We're all Interstellars.

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Posted: 7th April 2018 6:09am
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"Hepcat61"

I hope that your situation is much better now than how it's suggested by your poem.

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