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love vs. lies

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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Aw this is gonna be an unbelievably tight comp. f
for me to pick winner(s) .. when such great poetics flow the flow.. each one shines a star a sun a supersun .. & more.. in depths & touch.

thanks to you Johnny Silver, James knight, dimpy Lepz, Grace..  
only one thing may I add- @Silvia Rosario- could you shorten the length of entry & use prompt words - as per comp. rules pls.

Let this evenmore flow in infinite diggings.. from your all soulful pen du’zz .. write on ✍️♥️🙏👍

Vision_of_insanity
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 22nd Jan 2024
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A typical Sunday morning

As I looked into her blackhole,
I knew she needed to use the porcelain thrown  
As I waited, I began working on my origami birds
20 minutes later, I heard a swishing, whirlpool like sound coming from the bathroom    
She was like, "I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs"!
"Ok, Let's eat!"
                                                      
                                                                            
  
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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olliec
Oliver Cocks
Lost Thinker
Joined 15th Oct 2023
Forum Posts: 17

Of Star and Shadow

Your eyes are the only lights,
 
but in lieu of a kiss,
of a renewing smooch,
 
I find only the shadow
of you being here,
 
only the infinite blackhole
left by your paramount star.
Written by olliec (Oliver Cocks)
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Rachelleundrgrd
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 17th Feb 2018
Forum Posts: 83

Time: Love’s Lie

Time  
         traces imperceptible lines  
porcelain ducks  
frozen in glacial melt  
 
         devours everything  
silently stealthily  
advancing or circling  
origami swans whirlpooling in air  
 
            Is it love or a lie  
dawdling here in the blackhole  
of time tick-tocking away  
 
at least that is what the cuckoo  
clock would have us believe.  
 
R.  
 
Written by Rachelleundrgrd
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the_msrobertson
e.obsessions
Strange Creature
Ghana
Joined 6th Feb 2025
Forum Posts: 1

Grateful Steps

 


Love once knocked upon my door,

Soft and sweet, I craved no more.

Dreams were spun in golden thread,

Promises whispered, hopes widespread.



One taught love—a gentle flame,

A warmth that never stayed the same.

One taught loss—a sudden chill,

A silence echoing, deep and still.



One taught patience, one taught pain,

Each a lesson, not in vain.

Through the sorrow, through the ache,

I found strength I feared would break.



Tears that fell like summer rain,

Watered roots that would remain.

From the ashes, new blooms grew,

A heart once shattered, born anew.



No anger lingers, no regret,

Only love and lessons met.

Each farewell, a guiding light,

Leading me to clearer sight.



Now I walk a path untold,

No need for hands I used to hold.

With love for self, I stand, reflect—

Thank you all, but now—what’s next?
Written by the_msrobertson (e.obsessions)
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Cyndi_Moone
Thought Provoker
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Joined 13th Dec 2016
Forum Posts: 193

LOVE VS. LIE

Love – so fragile and yet so strong  
Limitless ways expressed in poetry or song,  
To describe such a word as powerful as love.  
Words fall short – even in heaven above
To remotely begin to condense the intensity  
Of an emotion with such profound density.  
 
Descriptions fold into adjacent-angles of geometry  
As one who paper-folds to create origami  
A swirling whirlpool of descriptive adjectives  
In agreement and subjective additives  
Cannot ever describe the strongest element  
As fragile as porcelain and as sheer relevant  
As the keen-eye of a cuckoo bird  
 
Unlimited artists and lovers at a loss for words  
To describe the essence of “love” – it’s absurd  
Yet, all fall short and at a loss  
As their minds boggle and toss  
Back and forth – to and fro .
Is such a search necessary or should we just let go  
Just saying, “I love you” and set it free  
With our mere actions for proof…and let it be…?  
 
So strong, so brave, so tall, so elegant  
So fragile, so sensitive, so kind, so relevant  
So tender, so gentle and so humble  
Love’s only blackhole stumble  
Is In the presence of a single lie….  
Because love is 100% true reality….  
A lie is love's fatality….
Written by Cyndi_Moone
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Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 3276

hanging cranes

You fold me into origami
glaze me over, heat me up
call me porcelain art
hang me from the ceiling
and watch me spin
in this whirlpool of love

Your heart is a blackhole
and I mistook you
for something beautiful
when you were just a cuckoo
masquerading
as something wholesome
Written by Indie (Miss Indie)
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