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Fire of Insight
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Joined 12th Dec 2020 Forum Posts: 89
Poetry Contest Description
Be passionate about your art, of extreme force, degree, or strength. This comp will demand intense concentration. Give me your most intense poems, any genre excluding erotica. Maximum words 200, old and new..
Rew
Forum Posts: 593
Fire of Insight
18
Joined 30th Sep 2022 Forum Posts: 593
That sly Faux news.
trump the Dem's help to stem those waged, abused,
shout down " foster trust not negativity "
with disturbing muddles of sly faux news
Forge top-dollar truths to lies to help screw
a few more pennies from proles, just like me,
trump the Dem's help to stem those waged, abused,
Suggest threats against those with unliked views
enslave folk with debt then tell them they're free
with disturbing muddles of sly faux news,
Encourage votes for folk who should be in zoos
by damning decency and that's their key,
to trump Dem's help to stem those waged, abused
Insist medical costs can't be reduced
use sleight of words to bring truth to its knees
with disturbing muddles of, sly faux news.
Lying to death trumps untutored, yes you
Allege the bill of rights grants lying sprees,
With your disturbed muddle of sly faux news
To trump Dem's help, to stem those waged, abused...
shout down " foster trust not negativity "
with disturbing muddles of sly faux news
Forge top-dollar truths to lies to help screw
a few more pennies from proles, just like me,
trump the Dem's help to stem those waged, abused,
Suggest threats against those with unliked views
enslave folk with debt then tell them they're free
with disturbing muddles of sly faux news,
Encourage votes for folk who should be in zoos
by damning decency and that's their key,
to trump Dem's help to stem those waged, abused
Insist medical costs can't be reduced
use sleight of words to bring truth to its knees
with disturbing muddles of, sly faux news.
Lying to death trumps untutored, yes you
Allege the bill of rights grants lying sprees,
With your disturbed muddle of sly faux news
To trump Dem's help, to stem those waged, abused...
Written by Rew
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ajay
Forum Posts: 2186
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 21st Mar 2023 Forum Posts: 2186
The Shepherd’s Reply To The Nymph (The Conversation Continues)
Christopher Marlowe:
The Passionate Shepherd To His Love.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44675/the-passionate-shepherd-to-his-love
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Sir Walter Raleigh:
The Nymph’s Reply To The Shepherd
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44939/the-nymphs-reply-to-the-shepherd
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Alexander Jones: (Me 🙃)
The Shepherd’s Reply To The Nymph
Well, fuck off, then, you rotten cow,
I wouldn't want to have you now.
If you'd prefer a richer man,
go find the sucker – if you can!
You're fucking ugly, just a dog,
your breath stinks like a fetid bog.
your teeth are yellow, black and green –
your gob's the worst I've ever seen!
You've legs just like two skinny twigs,
your nose reminds me of a pig's ,
and under it's a fine moustache!
It's hard to tell if you're a lass!
Your eyes resemble pools of piss,
your voice is like a viper's hiss,
so listen here, and this is true:
I'd sooner shag my sheep than you!
No doubt you've blown a thousand cocks,
no doubt your cunt is filled with pox.
If I so much as held you close,
I'd end up with a nasty dose.
I'd rather be a long time dead
than wake up next to you in bed
and realise for all my life
a bitch like you would be my wife.
🙃
Written by ajay
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EleazarSwan
Forum Posts: 45
Twisted Dreamer
2
Joined 11th Nov 2018Forum Posts: 45
To those long gone
In youth, like truth, the pain is there
When mem’ries come from everywhere
The birds of prey, their sweeping calls
Can spur the grave through mental halls
Have great, how fortunate, we are!
That we are free because of they
Who slay the foes of yesterday
Yet how dreadful, how miserable we are!
That we share not in the glory
Nor the story of those who passed away
O God, how long must good men die
To prove that freedom is worth its weight in blood?
How long, o Lord, must we visit the cross
Of those we love, and those we lost?
How long, O God, must mothers mourn
Their sons and daughters kept for slaughter?
How long, O God, must the battalions of battle
Form their death cries as they rattle?
How long, O God, must two men who worship you
Kill each other in the name of earthly kings
Who neither know you, nor seek your face
Who’s palace and place of pleasure are far from thee?
How long, O Lord my God, will the graves of good men
And the names of no men
Be delayed the justice that you hold so dear
Be delayed the vengeance you hold so near?
Slaughter the slaughterer O God
Bring justice to the crimes of tyrants
For you are not slow to anger, but rejoice in the truth
Let truth reign down like fire from heaven
Let the light of glory blind the enemies of the Almighty Yahweh
Fill their coffers with moths and rust
Let their enemies mock them and their allies desert them
Let their kings be locked in the prisons they have built for their enemies
And let their friends be those who shackle their feet
Bring down the whole fire from the bowl of prayers
And let the incense of heaven scorch the fields of the wicked
Let the nation that has dipped their robes in the blood of their own men
Drown in the depths of sacred depravity
Let seventy seven times seven years pass by them in anguish
And let none arise who will help them
For they have burned the homes of those who love You
And have pillaged the goods of those who serve You
They have cut off your children from the land of the living
And have given their minds to the wiles of the wicked
With injustice they have claimed themselves superior
And with letters of violence they have chosen the route of evil
So they will burn their increase and multiply their losses
They will shatter the soil and yield nothing
Their ground is accursed, and nothing will ever grow there
The earth will never yield its bounty as long as the Lord lives
And peace will never again visit the land of the wicked
When mem’ries come from everywhere
The birds of prey, their sweeping calls
Can spur the grave through mental halls
Have great, how fortunate, we are!
That we are free because of they
Who slay the foes of yesterday
Yet how dreadful, how miserable we are!
That we share not in the glory
Nor the story of those who passed away
O God, how long must good men die
To prove that freedom is worth its weight in blood?
How long, o Lord, must we visit the cross
Of those we love, and those we lost?
How long, O God, must mothers mourn
Their sons and daughters kept for slaughter?
How long, O God, must the battalions of battle
Form their death cries as they rattle?
How long, O God, must two men who worship you
Kill each other in the name of earthly kings
Who neither know you, nor seek your face
Who’s palace and place of pleasure are far from thee?
How long, O Lord my God, will the graves of good men
And the names of no men
Be delayed the justice that you hold so dear
Be delayed the vengeance you hold so near?
Slaughter the slaughterer O God
Bring justice to the crimes of tyrants
For you are not slow to anger, but rejoice in the truth
Let truth reign down like fire from heaven
Let the light of glory blind the enemies of the Almighty Yahweh
Fill their coffers with moths and rust
Let their enemies mock them and their allies desert them
Let their kings be locked in the prisons they have built for their enemies
And let their friends be those who shackle their feet
Bring down the whole fire from the bowl of prayers
And let the incense of heaven scorch the fields of the wicked
Let the nation that has dipped their robes in the blood of their own men
Drown in the depths of sacred depravity
Let seventy seven times seven years pass by them in anguish
And let none arise who will help them
For they have burned the homes of those who love You
And have pillaged the goods of those who serve You
They have cut off your children from the land of the living
And have given their minds to the wiles of the wicked
With injustice they have claimed themselves superior
And with letters of violence they have chosen the route of evil
So they will burn their increase and multiply their losses
They will shatter the soil and yield nothing
Their ground is accursed, and nothing will ever grow there
The earth will never yield its bounty as long as the Lord lives
And peace will never again visit the land of the wicked
Written by EleazarSwan
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Mstrmnd1923
Forum Posts: 202
Thought Provoker
4
Joined 2nd Feb 2024Forum Posts: 202
Intense
They used to live in tents
Under the sky's expanse
With earth beneath their feet
In freedoms sacred dance
In harmony they thrived
With natures gentle hand
But shadows crept upon them
And darkness claimed their lands
The whispers of the wind
Once filled with ancient lore
Now carry cries of sorrow
For peace that is no more
The rivers song of life
Now tainted with regret
Their sacred grounds defiled
A loss they can't forget
The forests once their refuge
And shelter for their kin
Now echo with the silence
Of battles they couldn't win
The mountains once their guardians
Now standing in solemn grace
As they watch the heartache
Etched on every elders face
From prairies vast to valleys deep
Their footsteps marked the way
But greed and broken promises
Have cast their dreams astray
Their ancestors spirits weep
At night a haunting cry
For lands that once were theirs
Where freedom used to lie
The drum beats of their hearts
Now faint, a mournful song
For the heritage that's faded
For the rights that turned so wrong
Yet in their eyes a fire
A strength that won't relent
An intense and enduring spirit
Of hope they represent
So let us honor those who lost
Who bore the deepest scars
The struggle for their homeland
Beneath the distant stars
With every breath remember
The history we can't erase
The intense enduring spirit
Of a proud resilient race
Under the sky's expanse
With earth beneath their feet
In freedoms sacred dance
In harmony they thrived
With natures gentle hand
But shadows crept upon them
And darkness claimed their lands
The whispers of the wind
Once filled with ancient lore
Now carry cries of sorrow
For peace that is no more
The rivers song of life
Now tainted with regret
Their sacred grounds defiled
A loss they can't forget
The forests once their refuge
And shelter for their kin
Now echo with the silence
Of battles they couldn't win
The mountains once their guardians
Now standing in solemn grace
As they watch the heartache
Etched on every elders face
From prairies vast to valleys deep
Their footsteps marked the way
But greed and broken promises
Have cast their dreams astray
Their ancestors spirits weep
At night a haunting cry
For lands that once were theirs
Where freedom used to lie
The drum beats of their hearts
Now faint, a mournful song
For the heritage that's faded
For the rights that turned so wrong
Yet in their eyes a fire
A strength that won't relent
An intense and enduring spirit
Of hope they represent
So let us honor those who lost
Who bore the deepest scars
The struggle for their homeland
Beneath the distant stars
With every breath remember
The history we can't erase
The intense enduring spirit
Of a proud resilient race
Written by Mstrmnd1923
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Anne-Ri999
Forum Posts: 270
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 16th Aug 2023 Forum Posts: 270
He
his was
an empty verse
brought by a solitary
meaning
it was you
broken one
shining one
who showed me
my given face
returns to me
child
your sight is fading
I hold on to
each vaporizing
tone
knowing
yours is a world far brighter
deeper than all truths
now shake cosmic
snowflakes from
ardent crust
nameless one
once more lend me
this vigil shade
shake tears
from these eardrums
on this pier
I stand avian
do not mourn night
beloved dawn
winds weep
haunted hunting
swan song
kindred fire
holds no flame
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an empty verse
brought by a solitary
meaning
it was you
broken one
shining one
who showed me
my given face
returns to me
child
your sight is fading
I hold on to
each vaporizing
tone
knowing
yours is a world far brighter
deeper than all truths
now shake cosmic
snowflakes from
ardent crust
nameless one
once more lend me
this vigil shade
shake tears
from these eardrums
on this pier
I stand avian
do not mourn night
beloved dawn
winds weep
haunted hunting
swan song
kindred fire
holds no flame
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Written by Anne-Ri999
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PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Forum Posts: 344
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
22
Joined 26th May 2022Forum Posts: 344
Others' poetry
Isn't it exhilarating
how someone's poetry
can ignite a fire within us?
When their words resonate
so deeply, it's like they unlock
hidden chambers in our own hearts,
revealing emotions and thoughts
we hadn't fully realized were there.
Crafting your own verses
becomes more than just writing
it's a dialogue between your soul and theirs,
a harmonious exchange
across the canvas of creativity.
I've always found
that immersing myself
in powerful poetry
not only inspires me
but also challenges me
to delve deeper into my own
perspectives and feelings.
It's fascinating how the cadence
of their lines, the imagery they conjure
and the emotions they evoke
can influence the way we express ourselves.
how someone's poetry
can ignite a fire within us?
When their words resonate
so deeply, it's like they unlock
hidden chambers in our own hearts,
revealing emotions and thoughts
we hadn't fully realized were there.
Crafting your own verses
becomes more than just writing
it's a dialogue between your soul and theirs,
a harmonious exchange
across the canvas of creativity.
I've always found
that immersing myself
in powerful poetry
not only inspires me
but also challenges me
to delve deeper into my own
perspectives and feelings.
It's fascinating how the cadence
of their lines, the imagery they conjure
and the emotions they evoke
can influence the way we express ourselves.
Written by PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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LunaDahlia
Joined 16th Aug 2024
Forum Posts: 6
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 6
The Mental Bride
Blue grows the tulip
White grows the Rose
I am writing a letter
To whom no one knows
Light falls the feather
Bright grows the fire
The irony of love
I will never tire
Green grows the grass
Heavy is the dew
All of this beauty
Is in tribute to you
A child to a mother
A moth to a flame
As timeless as tears
I will never be the same
A minute to an hour
A day to a year
A dark spirit’s voice
Is the only one I hear
Soft moonbeams
And silvery stones
Drifting lifeless in the water
Completely alone
Piercing rays
And shimmering skies
When the battle commences
Everyone dies
Dark grey ashes
And smoldering death
The world has fallen
I am the only one left
Demons rise
To plague the earth
Awaiting their master’s
Shadowed rebirth
I run and I hide
My face drawn and pale
An unwilling Queen
To finish the tale
I am given to him
A soul-bound slave
I am his possession
My love he will crave
I will not let him have it
So, I relinquish my breath
I know that the only way out
Is my death
I bury my blade
Into the depths of my heart.
After all, it’s my fault that
The world fell apart.
I fall to the ground with
A sigh of relief
The Goddess accepts me
My soul is released
Now I have peace
My depression is gone
The padded room opens
In tandem with dawn
My expression of joy
I am finally free
I will be fine
And the voices agree.
White grows the Rose
I am writing a letter
To whom no one knows
Light falls the feather
Bright grows the fire
The irony of love
I will never tire
Green grows the grass
Heavy is the dew
All of this beauty
Is in tribute to you
A child to a mother
A moth to a flame
As timeless as tears
I will never be the same
A minute to an hour
A day to a year
A dark spirit’s voice
Is the only one I hear
Soft moonbeams
And silvery stones
Drifting lifeless in the water
Completely alone
Piercing rays
And shimmering skies
When the battle commences
Everyone dies
Dark grey ashes
And smoldering death
The world has fallen
I am the only one left
Demons rise
To plague the earth
Awaiting their master’s
Shadowed rebirth
I run and I hide
My face drawn and pale
An unwilling Queen
To finish the tale
I am given to him
A soul-bound slave
I am his possession
My love he will crave
I will not let him have it
So, I relinquish my breath
I know that the only way out
Is my death
I bury my blade
Into the depths of my heart.
After all, it’s my fault that
The world fell apart.
I fall to the ground with
A sigh of relief
The Goddess accepts me
My soul is released
Now I have peace
My depression is gone
The padded room opens
In tandem with dawn
My expression of joy
I am finally free
I will be fine
And the voices agree.
Written by LunaDahlia
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LunaDahlia
Joined 16th Aug 2024
Forum Posts: 6
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 6
Black Widow’s Bluff
A marsh full of mist
And mysterious fruits
A thicket of brambles
Serve as my roots.
My branches are bare
Ancient and prone
I cannot bear children
They would be stone.
I find friendship, however
From the village beyond
I saw her the day that
She washed in the pond.
With wails of a wraith
And blood on her thighs
My old heart cannot handle
The way that she cries.
I am shocked that she sensed me
Perhaps she is too
She approaches, unafraid
But unsure what to do.
Extending my branch
Though the comfort is cold
She accepts it with thanks
Unlike many, I’m told.
A silvery flash
The slowing of time
If I do not stop her
The crime will be mine.
Felling a branch
On her poor little head
I take the knife from her hand
And swallow my dread.
Wrapping my branches
Over her limbs
I keep her asleep
Until the gloaming is dimmed.
She awakes with a gasp
She is starting to fight
Until my voice serene
Manifests in the night.
“Young woman, you’ve suffered
More than enough
Lure your abuser
To Black Widow’s Bluff.”
“Then run through the trees
And return to your home
Under your house
There’s a porcelain comb.”
“Lay the fine comb atop
The dirt of my grave
It will protect you
Your mind it will save.”
“But how do you know this?”
She asks with a frown
The question recedes as
She looks at the ground.
The horror she witnessed
The terror I am
“Whoever has done this
Will be certainly damned.”
“You know who has done this”
Came my angry reply
“NOW DO AS I SAY
SO WE MAY TARNISH HIS LIES!”
My voice fills the marsh
As she sets to her task
When she returns I see naught
But a giggling mask.
The porcelain comb
She drops at my feet
Eyes rolling madly
Her lips will not meet.
“I cannot, in good conscience
Use this in your stead
You needed it more
And now, you are dead.”
“I can not go on
I have to give in
He’ll be dead before me
This is my win.”
“I have a better idea
I want be friends
Make some room, will you?
For when my life ends?”
I giggle with a madness
Cultivated for years
Gone is the loneliest
Deluge of tears.
I rip my corpse from the branches
Making some room
As soon as she sleeps
I visit her groom.
Laughter in the trees
And fear in his eyes
I whisper his name
As he painfully dies.
I’ll never admit to YOU
What I have done
Imagine him, though
It was amazingly fun!
Returning to the girl
She’s as good as her word
She giggles anyway
She is finally heard!
Ever after, we talk
…rotting, reminiscing forever
Not to mention plotting
Our future endeavor.
Rapists, be warned
We have nothing to fear
With your blood on our faces
Our minds are finally clear.
Sleep well.
And mysterious fruits
A thicket of brambles
Serve as my roots.
My branches are bare
Ancient and prone
I cannot bear children
They would be stone.
I find friendship, however
From the village beyond
I saw her the day that
She washed in the pond.
With wails of a wraith
And blood on her thighs
My old heart cannot handle
The way that she cries.
I am shocked that she sensed me
Perhaps she is too
She approaches, unafraid
But unsure what to do.
Extending my branch
Though the comfort is cold
She accepts it with thanks
Unlike many, I’m told.
A silvery flash
The slowing of time
If I do not stop her
The crime will be mine.
Felling a branch
On her poor little head
I take the knife from her hand
And swallow my dread.
Wrapping my branches
Over her limbs
I keep her asleep
Until the gloaming is dimmed.
She awakes with a gasp
She is starting to fight
Until my voice serene
Manifests in the night.
“Young woman, you’ve suffered
More than enough
Lure your abuser
To Black Widow’s Bluff.”
“Then run through the trees
And return to your home
Under your house
There’s a porcelain comb.”
“Lay the fine comb atop
The dirt of my grave
It will protect you
Your mind it will save.”
“But how do you know this?”
She asks with a frown
The question recedes as
She looks at the ground.
The horror she witnessed
The terror I am
“Whoever has done this
Will be certainly damned.”
“You know who has done this”
Came my angry reply
“NOW DO AS I SAY
SO WE MAY TARNISH HIS LIES!”
My voice fills the marsh
As she sets to her task
When she returns I see naught
But a giggling mask.
The porcelain comb
She drops at my feet
Eyes rolling madly
Her lips will not meet.
“I cannot, in good conscience
Use this in your stead
You needed it more
And now, you are dead.”
“I can not go on
I have to give in
He’ll be dead before me
This is my win.”
“I have a better idea
I want be friends
Make some room, will you?
For when my life ends?”
I giggle with a madness
Cultivated for years
Gone is the loneliest
Deluge of tears.
I rip my corpse from the branches
Making some room
As soon as she sleeps
I visit her groom.
Laughter in the trees
And fear in his eyes
I whisper his name
As he painfully dies.
I’ll never admit to YOU
What I have done
Imagine him, though
It was amazingly fun!
Returning to the girl
She’s as good as her word
She giggles anyway
She is finally heard!
Ever after, we talk
…rotting, reminiscing forever
Not to mention plotting
Our future endeavor.
Rapists, be warned
We have nothing to fear
With your blood on our faces
Our minds are finally clear.
Sleep well.
Written by LunaDahlia
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LunaDahlia
Joined 16th Aug 2024
Forum Posts: 6
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 6
Perpetual Agony
The point of your sword
Rests gently against the hollow base
Of my throat
After an eternity of quarrel and defeat
Domination and submission
Sex and brutality
The cycle is everlasting
Yet somehow you have managed
To discover the heinous act
Of destroying your greatest friend
Your faithful lover
Your compassionate kin
Your worst enemy;
We have gone through all that we did
For a sadistic victory;
One that was never fought for, or won;
But stolen
You cheated Fate
Locked it behind bars
And threw the key into an abyss of despair;
A sea of damned souls bent on vengeance;
Whose destiny is to forevermore guard the one thing
That could set me free
My mirror
No clarity comes from my reflection
For all I can see now is a monster
And however loud I might scream, no one
Will hear me, for the war you have started
Due to my capture, everything that once
Grew in the light, now broods in darkness
I scream and hit my reflection
As the glass breaks, I accept my fate with dignity.
The sword at my throat
Is nothing more than everything I caused.
I thrust the shard of glass in my neck to its breaking point,
Yet I feel no pain.
It would not be so bad, I thought,
Smiling maniacally at the sight of my lifeblood
Pouring through my fingers;
For my perpetual agony has finally ceased
To exist.
Written by LunaDahlia
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