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a man’s world

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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th Mar 2013
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alright that’s a bit better

javalini
Fire of Insight
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JESSE'S SOLILOQUY

play
pretend
'til you believe
and god knows
ain't but some of it
real
and our truths
are tender just
under
the skin
where all what's meek
or mild
is kept
secret

'cause we learn
quick
that a man's a man,
strong
and swaggered,
hard clenched
and bound
to walk off his pain
and be the keeper
of all what's his

so, goddamn, baby,
let me be the keeper
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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thank you jav I

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 90awards
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Sister

 


So you didn’t grasp it, the
first time, you became
a statistic at the end of his fist

…and…

went back for another round?

(Yes, he was STILL not only the asshole,
but also the hair around it.)

His balls belong in a meat grinder.

It looks like YOU might’ve grown a pair, though
(or started to)
because you left him (again)
hopefully for good (this time).

I love you, Sis, but
I really want to shake women like you
by the shoulders
and scream into your face, while
watching your head, bobble
back and forth:

“You don’t need anti-depressants
because you don’t have a boyfriend!!!”


Christ, Almighty—
what does it take
to not define yourself
based on your relationship status?
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runaway-mindtrain
Dangerous Mind
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Such a foolish heart

 
We wandered in the selfless mist  
Holding each other intensely tender  
Prevailing love till the lovelorn sits  
Born dreams, never deserved splendor,  

Such as a bitter unaquit taste  
As tears shower down my face  
Our most beautiful ardent embrace  
My sacrificed heart aches,  
 
Matching woman, I will never find  
This bereft soul tells me to undo  
The perfect crush angel in my mind  
As I breathe her essence still soon,  
 
Never an end, to cache her airy  
With a hollow unstinting spot  
In my universe set upon faery  
The width willing a tottering heart,  
 
So this sun sets unto a fallen night  
No beloved to ever come close  
Her moon to never again see rise  
My soul cry, forever tarry host  
 
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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thank you missy x

TimWombles
Thought Provoker
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I Gotta Good One

I can't write about how women always want to change you, rearrange you, chain you
No, I'll never say a bad word about the drama, the “I can't stand your mama”, and the trauma it causes  
You'll not hear me complain about the spending, or the bills never ending  
I'll never complain about her getting ready for hours, and the “why don't you buy me flowers”  
Nope, not gonna talk about the “pay attention to me”, instead of the AFC, or the WWE  
My lips will never mouth the “Why don't you take me out”, or mock the way she pouts.  
Nope, and you know why?  
Cause I found a girl who doesn't want to fight  
And why?  
Because I treat her right  
Women only want to change you cause you're shit to begin with  
So buck it up, Buttercup, and be a man  
  
She's never tried to change me, cause she likes who I am, what would she change me into?  
She hates drama even more than I do  
She's frugal to a fault, and she never spends money on a whim  
She's ready before I am, and I buy her flowers because she deserves them  
If I'm watching sports she's right beside me  
And about the only place I can talk her into going is the beach  
And you want me to complain?  
Not a chance  
And why?  
Because she treats me right  
Men only complain about women cause they're full of shit  
So buck it up, Buttercup, and be a man
Written by TimWombles
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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cheers tim

Peanut
Lost Thinker
Joined 11th Sep 2019
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work In progress

sweat drips
like piss  
flowing from that concrete  
statue  
no one knows  
what it's called;  
but it happens to fill  
as a water feature  
anywhere  
a guy  
with an idea and  
a bucket of grout  
to fill the cracks in the  
tiles  
finds a nine by nine space  
in a park  
 
that musky smell from  
work boots  
having spent a day  
laboring  
in a cold steel factory  
which exists  
because  
damn, we have to make something  
-anything  
no one actually gives a shit  
what it is  
as long as it is made  
 
oil and grease  
cologne the body like the  
black  
the black  
that is ingrown  
in the  
rough  
callused skin  
we wear  
as a permanent raincoat;  
along with the residue  
of the V6 head gasket  
stripped across the bedroom  
floor  
like the  
Ducati  
modeled on the kitchen  
counter  
 
really  
don't have time for tea  
but a hat tip  
and "gooday gorgeous"  
-well that you can have  
for free  
 
 
 
 
 
Written by Peanut
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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thanks peanut x

the quality is picking up i'm very pleased now

poet Anonymous

anna_grin said:thanks peanut x

the quality is picking up i'm very pleased now


That's because mine was the first.

anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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JohnnyBlaze said:

That's because mine was the first.


ah man no i didnt mean to hurt your feelings im v. appreciative for you kicking it off

some of the earlier entries were... questionable imo

anyway full steam ahead

SweetKittyCat5
Tyrant of Words
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This Is A Man’s world (Remastered)

SweetKittyCat5
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Poem Inspired From The Title of James Brown  

This is a Man’s world      
B.C, before his plans, his dreams, his naked genuineness unfurled        
Ingenuity of the presence of domination, his stance in A.D reality        
The first man of this realm, a loyal devoted trustee        
Autonomous of this world’s essence        
His lab formulated pestilence        
Cries ringing out, western civilization, bullets spraying from his manmade weapons          
       
This is a Man’s world      
His passion, his sphere as he roams, his pearl        
Summit of intellectual minds        
Yet, peace so disquiet to unify in this perilous day and time        
His wondrous deeds, his powerful drive to rule, his downtrodden greed        
The right hand of God’s biblical creed        
Fruitful of his loins as he spills forth his sacred seeds        
       
This is a Man’s world    
Artificial Intelligence he secretly creates        
Cloning the new superior being due to one day populate        
The New World Order in clusters of allegiance          
Wonders, Gifts, Power, Fame, bow unto the horned goat, offerings of pain without bodily wince        
The downfall of man and his wicked toys          
Branded by his patents, deemed to destroy the fertile brain cells of unexpected girls and boys        
       
This is a Man’s world      
Comforting his pockets, gold, conflict diamonds, the minerals of earth he has on lock        
Pharmaceutical companies, escalating portfolio stocks        
Mass hysteria outbreaks, panic he brings, counting dollars, those die without those mandated ill-fated shots    
Hands that created the ticking clock      
The suited man who governs the Armageddon code when the bombs drop          
           
This is a Man’s world      
Man preaches from divinity’s scrolls from which he stands        
Holy book closed, secrets of the sins his mind, body carnally demands        
His forefather’s blood, rage, seeps from the untilled lands  

This is a Man’s world      
Wars, famine, hunger, turning blind eyes, suffering unto the children without reprimands        
The gem of his family jewels, may he bear good fruit society can comprehend, withstand          
Knowledge and wisdom, found within the mind to doth good of the hands        
       
This is a Man’s world      
A wandering whoremonger with several mouths to feed, absence to provide the feast          
Unknown colonizing from not wearing a barrier suit in his heated sexual meet        
Left in anguish uprising generations, the softer gender we must bear        
Another family name he gives unto, not even batting  an eye, or raising a hair        
No concern, no cares        
More love for one, and none for the other to spare        
       
This is a Man’s world        
But yet it’s nothing without a woman or a girl
   

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