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Poetry competition CLOSED 19th February 2018 6:22pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
Gahddess_Worship
and Jade-Pandora
Night Bluebird
David_Macleod
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 5th Nov 2014Forum Posts: 2983
Poetry Contest Description
a new poem format for those that like a challenge
Authors Note: I have just invented a new poem form - It's called a Night Bluebird - it has strict rules:
The end rhyme must remain constant
The poem must be exactly 20 lines long
Each line must only contain exactly 5 syllables
Any subject matter or genre
Good luck to anyone that likes a challenge
here's my example:
You Shine - - - Dedicated to Nightbirdblue
I don't mean to whine
It's hard to define
I cannot confine
It's nothing benign
maturing like wine
yet not by design
I must redefine
I feel more than fine
I cannot decline
I call your hot line
I build you a shrine
On my heart I sign
that you will be mine
and I will be thine
our hearts now entwine
as I realign
to you I incline
I feel your love shine
The end rhyme must remain constant
The poem must be exactly 20 lines long
Each line must only contain exactly 5 syllables
Any subject matter or genre
Good luck to anyone that likes a challenge
here's my example:
You Shine - - - Dedicated to Nightbirdblue
I don't mean to whine
It's hard to define
I cannot confine
It's nothing benign
maturing like wine
yet not by design
I must redefine
I feel more than fine
I cannot decline
I call your hot line
I build you a shrine
On my heart I sign
that you will be mine
and I will be thine
our hearts now entwine
as I realign
to you I incline
I feel your love shine
Anonymous
Nature's Gung Ho Gong Show
She sings songs unsung
breath dancing from lung
romancing her tongue
and two lips among
tulips having sprung
in Springtime's long strung
out days. Pollen flung
by bees on knees stung
as hollandaise clung
to picnicked ants, dung
beetles, circus swung
fleas on trapeze hung
upside down. Moths, young
fuzzy, on ladder rung
ask, tasking Carl Jung
"Do butterflys fung
shui with Connie Chung
this way?" Trees sway, tung
and bonzai do Kung
Fu like Ninja slung
Asian ping pong pung
She sings songs unsung
breath dancing from lung
romancing her tongue
and two lips among
tulips having sprung
in Springtime's long strung
out days. Pollen flung
by bees on knees stung
as hollandaise clung
to picnicked ants, dung
beetles, circus swung
fleas on trapeze hung
upside down. Moths, young
fuzzy, on ladder rung
ask, tasking Carl Jung
"Do butterflys fung
shui with Connie Chung
this way?" Trees sway, tung
and bonzai do Kung
Fu like Ninja slung
Asian ping pong pung
rockyriver
Joined 22nd Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 10
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 10
MEDITATION: THE PASSION
Speak, Truth, Credible
Tell, Hear, Parable
Words, Right, Tenable
Read, Write, Effable
Bread, Wine, Cenacle
Fear, Doubt, Skeptical
Slip, Fall, Peccable
Greed, Hate, Temptable
Reach, Grasp, Tentacle
Bend, Meet, Flexible
Clear, Cut, Legible
Judge, Fair, Equable
Thirst, Sigh, Quenchable
God, Cry, Crepuscule
Guard, Watch, Sentinel
Son, Rise, Epochal
Light, Hope, Retinal
Give, Life, Requital
Faith, Love, Plentiful
Kneel, Cross, Retable
Tell, Hear, Parable
Words, Right, Tenable
Read, Write, Effable
Bread, Wine, Cenacle
Fear, Doubt, Skeptical
Slip, Fall, Peccable
Greed, Hate, Temptable
Reach, Grasp, Tentacle
Bend, Meet, Flexible
Clear, Cut, Legible
Judge, Fair, Equable
Thirst, Sigh, Quenchable
God, Cry, Crepuscule
Guard, Watch, Sentinel
Son, Rise, Epochal
Light, Hope, Retinal
Give, Life, Requital
Faith, Love, Plentiful
Kneel, Cross, Retable
Written by rockyriver
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eswaller
Forum Posts: 764
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 764
Within Those Eyes - Night Bluebird Format
She wants clear skies
And wants to be wise.
I know she will rise
Above all the lies.
All of the bad guys
Will always despise
Her for having highs.
She will not downsize
Them. Under the guise
That you are allies
She will make those tries
To show you what dries
Up. A bird that flies
Among the sunrise
As every weed dies.
She is the surprise
And has won the prize.
And wants to be wise.
I know she will rise
Above all the lies.
All of the bad guys
Will always despise
Her for having highs.
She will not downsize
Them. Under the guise
That you are allies
She will make those tries
To show you what dries
Up. A bird that flies
Among the sunrise
As every weed dies.
She is the surprise
And has won the prize.
Written by eswaller
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David_Macleod
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 5th Nov 2014Forum Posts: 2983
thank you so much JohnnyBlaze, rockyriver and eswaller for three excellent entries :-))))))))))))
Anonymous
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berea440oh
Forum Posts: 3208
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th June 2015Forum Posts: 3208
She sat fully nude
and saw her love dude
not being too rude
about exposing
himself in being
ready for sucking
her tits before she
had made herself be
able to foresee
that my cock was big
like a semi rig
and ready to dig
deep into her hole
just like a long pole
inside a keyhole
and keep that scene up
until that one cup
is filled with syrup
from that long, hard cock
until aftershock.
and saw her love dude
not being too rude
about exposing
himself in being
ready for sucking
her tits before she
had made herself be
able to foresee
that my cock was big
like a semi rig
and ready to dig
deep into her hole
just like a long pole
inside a keyhole
and keep that scene up
until that one cup
is filled with syrup
from that long, hard cock
until aftershock.
Anonymous
rockyriver
Joined 22nd Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 10
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 10
How do I make my photo show up on my entry?
Anonymous
If you want to just add a photo to the top like a banner just add multimedia at the bottom of the poem Rocky. For a visual poem it’s slightly different!
Anonymous
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David_Macleod
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thank you ghostpoet_369, berea440oh and StarliteStarfright for your excellent entries :-)))))))))))))))
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Thanks David R, much appreciated :-)