Poetry competition CLOSED 24th March 2016 4:39am
WINNER
Gahddess_Worship (Osomajestuoso)
Gahddess_Worship (Osomajestuoso)
RUNNER-UP:
JohnFeddeler
A HEART OF GOLD
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TRENCH COAT ANGEL
Here's a trench coat angel
with a sweet angel's face,
she's a trench coat angel
who's long fallen from grace.
The sound of her walking
on damp cobblestone
says more than her talking
and moves on alone.
She shines in the night,
all eyes are on her,
and a body, skin-tight
brings out your hunger.
And you know that she will
if you look at the sight
of her movements until
your desires ignite.
And the street is alight
with the gift of her love,
and you hope that she might
give you more than enough.
But more than enough,
being this close to touch
with a creature of whom
you've longed for so much.
Preview piece: This is original mouse-work done on MSPaint, by Jade Pandora, 2016.
©2005-2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
TRENCH COAT ANGEL
Here's a trench coat angel
with a sweet angel's face,
she's a trench coat angel
who's long fallen from grace.
The sound of her walking
on damp cobblestone
says more than her talking
and moves on alone.
She shines in the night,
all eyes are on her,
and a body, skin-tight
brings out your hunger.
And you know that she will
if you look at the sight
of her movements until
your desires ignite.
And the street is alight
with the gift of her love,
and you hope that she might
give you more than enough.
But more than enough,
being this close to touch
with a creature of whom
you've longed for so much.
Preview piece: This is original mouse-work done on MSPaint, by Jade Pandora, 2016.
©2005-2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
Gahddess_Worship said:FIRST TIME
Graduated summa cum laude
newly crowned wunderkind of Wall Street
leased a big flat, bought a new Audi
rubbing shoulders with New York's elite
Sexually harassed then brutally raped
her sleazy boss will do time she vowed
she was fired, he with warning escaped
all doors shut, informants not allowed
Not able to lower her standard of living
she sells her most precious commodities
dignity, body even soul for the bidding
to sate libidinous proclivities
.......
Ah, welcome to the action, Gahddess_Worship, with my thanks for your gift of ink to the competition. --Jade♎️
Graduated summa cum laude
newly crowned wunderkind of Wall Street
leased a big flat, bought a new Audi
rubbing shoulders with New York's elite
Sexually harassed then brutally raped
her sleazy boss will do time she vowed
she was fired, he with warning escaped
all doors shut, informants not allowed
Not able to lower her standard of living
she sells her most precious commodities
dignity, body even soul for the bidding
to sate libidinous proclivities
.......
Ah, welcome to the action, Gahddess_Worship, with my thanks for your gift of ink to the competition. --Jade♎️
Leave Or Be Left
It's that one night I'd never pawn
When I rose to the waking dawn,
With feelings like im using, maybe a little bit used
When there is a choice I should be choosing
That has left me so confused.
The beauty is breathtaking, too bad the day wasn't slow
How can I stay with this person that I don't really know,
I'll make it to the door, a lover on the leave
Last night was dreampt in a dream
When I wake I didn't leave, she left me.
It's that one night I'd never pawn
When I rose to the waking dawn,
With feelings like im using, maybe a little bit used
When there is a choice I should be choosing
That has left me so confused.
The beauty is breathtaking, too bad the day wasn't slow
How can I stay with this person that I don't really know,
I'll make it to the door, a lover on the leave
Last night was dreampt in a dream
When I wake I didn't leave, she left me.
gardenlover said:She Tries to Please
She tried her hardest to please
Her elderly male client
Even getting on her knees
To make his member giant
He liked the feel of her lips
Around his flaccid member
Hoping it would rise to eclipse
The ones he could remember
It had risen the best it could
They tried its insertion
It entered only to the hood
No matter what exertion
.......
Greetings, gardenlover, with my appreciation -- I thank you for sharing your poem in the competition. --Jade💟
She tried her hardest to please
Her elderly male client
Even getting on her knees
To make his member giant
He liked the feel of her lips
Around his flaccid member
Hoping it would rise to eclipse
The ones he could remember
It had risen the best it could
They tried its insertion
It entered only to the hood
No matter what exertion
.......
Greetings, gardenlover, with my appreciation -- I thank you for sharing your poem in the competition. --Jade💟
etroPaL_noveD said:Leave Or Be Left
It's that one night I'd never pawn
When I rose to the waking dawn,
With feelings like im using, maybe a little bit used
When there is a choice I should be choosing
That has left me so confused.
The beauty is breathtaking, too bad the day wasn't slow
How can I stay with this person that I don't really know,
I'll make it to the door, a lover on the leave
Last night was dreampt in a dream
When I wake I didn't leave, she left me.
Welcome, etroPaL_noveD, to Action Central, where I thank you for your contribution of ink to the competition. --Jade
It's that one night I'd never pawn
When I rose to the waking dawn,
With feelings like im using, maybe a little bit used
When there is a choice I should be choosing
That has left me so confused.
The beauty is breathtaking, too bad the day wasn't slow
How can I stay with this person that I don't really know,
I'll make it to the door, a lover on the leave
Last night was dreampt in a dream
When I wake I didn't leave, she left me.
Welcome, etroPaL_noveD, to Action Central, where I thank you for your contribution of ink to the competition. --Jade
Anonymous
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All Needs Catered For
She is a very caring girl
On the game it's true to tell.
She likes to please her clients
Their requests, her compliance
The young see her for instruction
Others for erotic seduction
Older men whose libido's faded
Need their climax to be aided.
She is a very caring girl
On the game it's true to tell.
She likes to please her clients
Their requests, her compliance
The young see her for instruction
Others for erotic seduction
Older men whose libido's faded
Need their climax to be aided.
http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a450/geoff_collins2/morning%20angel_zpsfwxiekkl.png
Senryu Renga: BAR ANGEL
1
coming to
a place of no recognition
is that coffee?
2
girl from the bar
always makes new friends
it’s a living
3
smiling, hair up
lying on her couch, I see
we didn't, did we?
4
she hands me coffee
“you were really drunk, really”
angel wings flapping
5
took me in
spewing like a sewer pipe
big lunch?
6
clean clothes folded
I stand dressing, unbalanced
washed my vomit necktie
7
she sees my question
“you were always nice to me”
something's in my eyes
8
when she’s in my bar
I always smile more, remembering
first drink’s on me
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Senryu Renga: BAR ANGEL
1
coming to
a place of no recognition
is that coffee?
2
girl from the bar
always makes new friends
it’s a living
3
smiling, hair up
lying on her couch, I see
we didn't, did we?
4
she hands me coffee
“you were really drunk, really”
angel wings flapping
5
took me in
spewing like a sewer pipe
big lunch?
6
clean clothes folded
I stand dressing, unbalanced
washed my vomit necktie
7
she sees my question
“you were always nice to me”
something's in my eyes
8
when she’s in my bar
I always smile more, remembering
first drink’s on me
Image Credit: unknown from tumbler
gardenlover said:All Needs Catered For
She is a very caring girl
On the game it's true to tell.
She likes to please her clients
Their requests, her compliance
The young see her for instruction
Others for erotic seduction
Older men whose libido's faded
Need their climax to be aided.
Dear gardenlover, thank you so much for entering and sharing your second ink in the competition, yaay. --Jade💟
She is a very caring girl
On the game it's true to tell.
She likes to please her clients
Their requests, her compliance
The young see her for instruction
Others for erotic seduction
Older men whose libido's faded
Need their climax to be aided.
Dear gardenlover, thank you so much for entering and sharing your second ink in the competition, yaay. --Jade💟
Hepcat61 said:http://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a450/geoff_collins2/morning%20angel_zpsfwxiekkl.png
Senryu Renga: BAR ANGEL
1
coming to
a place of no recognition
is that coffee?
2
girl from the bar
always makes new friends
it’s a living
3
smiling, hair up
lying on her couch, I see
we didn't, did we?
4
she hands me coffee
“you were really drunk, really”
angel wings flapping
.......
Thank you so much, Hepcat Geoff, for contributing your entry ink to the competition. --Jade♎️
Senryu Renga: BAR ANGEL
1
coming to
a place of no recognition
is that coffee?
2
girl from the bar
always makes new friends
it’s a living
3
smiling, hair up
lying on her couch, I see
we didn't, did we?
4
she hands me coffee
“you were really drunk, really”
angel wings flapping
.......
Thank you so much, Hepcat Geoff, for contributing your entry ink to the competition. --Jade♎️
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THROUGH THE BARRICADES
Mother doesn't know where love has gone.
She says it must be youth that keeps us feeling strong.
See it in her face that's turned to ice,
And when she smiles she shows the lines of sacrifice.
And now I know what they're saying as our sun begins to fade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Father made my history.
He fought for what he thought would set us somehow free.
They taught me what to say in school,
I learned it off by heart but now that's torn in two.
And now I know what they're saying in the music of the parade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Born on different sides of life,
But we feel the same and feel all of this strife,
So come to me when I'm asleep and we'll cross the line and dance upon the streets.
And now I know what they're saying as the drums begin to fade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Oh, turn around and I'll be there,
Well there's a scar right through my heart but I'll bare it again.
Oh, I thought we were the human race but we were just another borderline case,
And the stars reach down and tell us that there's always one escape.
Oh, I don't know where love has gone,
And in this troubled land desperation keeps us strong.
Friday's child is full of soul,
With nothing left to lose there's everything to go.
And now I know what they're saying,
It's a terrible beauty we've made,
So we make our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Spandau Ballet -Through The Barricades
THROUGH THE BARRICADES
Mother doesn't know where love has gone.
She says it must be youth that keeps us feeling strong.
See it in her face that's turned to ice,
And when she smiles she shows the lines of sacrifice.
And now I know what they're saying as our sun begins to fade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Father made my history.
He fought for what he thought would set us somehow free.
They taught me what to say in school,
I learned it off by heart but now that's torn in two.
And now I know what they're saying in the music of the parade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Born on different sides of life,
But we feel the same and feel all of this strife,
So come to me when I'm asleep and we'll cross the line and dance upon the streets.
And now I know what they're saying as the drums begin to fade,
And we made our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Oh, turn around and I'll be there,
Well there's a scar right through my heart but I'll bare it again.
Oh, I thought we were the human race but we were just another borderline case,
And the stars reach down and tell us that there's always one escape.
Oh, I don't know where love has gone,
And in this troubled land desperation keeps us strong.
Friday's child is full of soul,
With nothing left to lose there's everything to go.
And now I know what they're saying,
It's a terrible beauty we've made,
So we make our love on wasteland and through the barricades.
Spandau Ballet -Through The Barricades
