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Edgar Allen Poe's THE RAVEN

windsong13
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Use these key words to write something about THE RAVEN
Hi am new and I want to post this challenge. Here is a list of key words to use in your poem use all of them if you have any questions just pm me and only one poem per person so have fun and lets see what you do with THE RAVEN
1.SILKEN
2.PURPLE
3.SHADES
4.SUNSETS
5.MORTAL
6.WORLD
7.SPOKEN
8.TONGUES
9.NEVERMORE
10.EBONY
11.DEMONS
12.DREAMING
13.MURMURED
14.SOULS
15.BURNING
16.ECHO'S
17.WHISPERED
18.WORDS
19.CHAMBER
20.DOOR
21.WROUGHT
22.GHOST
23.FLOOR
LENORE
25.VOLUME
26.FORGOTTEN
27.WEAK
28.DYING
29.EMBER
30.WEARY
31.NAME
32.NEVERMORE

windsong13
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Lenore's angels
Silken in purple shades,
as the sunsets behind the mortal world
spoken in tongues of Nevermore.

Ebony demons dreaming
as murmured souls are burning
in a self made Hell.

Echo's of whispered words
at my chamber door
wrought ghost upon my floor
named here Lenore in the darkness,
a volume of forgotten Lenore.

A weak and dying ember of a bleak December
weary to the name Nevermore.

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windsong13
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thank you Broom can't wait to read your wonderful poem

poet Anonymous

NEVERMORE

My husband left me for another
These are the things
I will not do for any future man

Cook - nevermore

Clean - nevermore

Iron - nevermore

Be pregnant - nevermore

Give birth - nevermore

Give him my paycheck - nevermore

Look the other way - nevermore

Be kind to my inlaws - nevermore

Move him 6 times in 6 years - nevermore

Put his career before mine - nevermore

If this sounds like I have become a major bitch

You would too....women have expiry dates

My husband took those "best years of my life"

Left me "holding the bag"

Of course if it happened to you - you would not be mad??????


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windsong13
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you can use the words in any  order that you want..Broom i have not chatted there yet but it sounds like a lot of fun

poet Anonymous

A weary ghost of a mortal
By the name of Lenore
Plunked away at the ivory keys
A pianist she was but nevermore
Nor demons or angels can she can progress
Stuck down in the human world
A mere one of the shades, a wanderer
Half alive and half dead
There, yet forgotten
Stuck between night and day
Like the unfinished sunsets of purple
The deep blues not yet fully engulfing
The sky
And the light blues not yet covering with it's
Watercolored whisps
Another one of the group of lost souls
With their murmured silken words spoken
Weak volume unable to reverberate
Against the walls or floor
Unable to open
The shut door
Leading to the end of time
Stuck as a half being
In this chamber, Earth is a ghost's Hell.

Their tongues seem glued
To the roof of their mouth
The disdain way they murmur
Then say the fault must be in the echo's
Tired and weary, they are an ember slowly burning
They have already died, nevermore
Just wish to disappear and have rest
Forevermore.

Cool comp, welcome to DU.
My entry doesn't really make much sense. but it's all right.


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windsong13
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yes i see what you mean

windsong13
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QUEEN OF ANGELS i liked what you wrote it speaks of many things to me

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Purple Shades



Mortal words spun webs
of purple shades
in whispered echos
that murmured Lenore
Ebony eyes weary and dying
in the fading sunset
a forgotten name slipped
from a ghost memory


nevermore to nurture
the souls earthy chamber


Dreaming of a door
that hides her demons
burning tongues that lick
the ember of her world
spoken betrayals
in weak volume
grope her reluctance
wrought and draped
upon a silken floor
of crimson tears


The subconscious stroke
missing its stimulate sting
surreal suffering laughs
through echoing layers
pliant branches tap a song
on the glass of her mind
awakening from the dream
that held her captive


nevermore to nurture
the souls earthy chamber





BothSidesOfPain
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Poe really is an inspiration, to bad nobody can equal even a fraction of his greatness.

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windsong13 said:Hi am new and I want to post this challenge. Here is a list of key words to use in your poem use all of them if you have any questions just pm me and only one poem per person so have fun and lets see what you do with THE RAVEN
1.SILKEN
2.PURPLE
3.SHADES
4.SUNSETS
5.MORTAL
6.WORLD
7.SPOKEN
8.TONGUES
9.NEVERMORE
10.EBONY
11.DEMONS
12.DREAMING
13.MURMURED
14.SOULS
15.BURNING
16.ECHO'S
17.WHISPERED
18.WORDS
19.CHAMBER
20.DOOR
21.WROUGHT
22.GHOST
23.FLOOR
LENORE
25.VOLUME
26.FORGOTTEN
27.WEAK
28.DYING
29.EMBER
30.WEARY
31.NAME
32.NEVERMORE
A little unoriginal...Don't you think?

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