Poetry competition CLOSED 24th July 2012 9:30am
WINNER
fleshofdanny
fleshofdanny
LIE TO ME...
Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear
FishCake said:[quote-113599-Myheartdiesforyou]Skin them alive
And make them rare
Cut open their chests.
I want to see if their hearts
Really turned black
When they lied.
go aheah
let me see
if blood
can really turn red
oh wait
i should know
my blood is black
indeed[/quote]
Really?!? That id interesting.
I want to see if they can still scream,
Dont you?
And make them rare
Cut open their chests.
I want to see if their hearts
Really turned black
When they lied.
go aheah
let me see
if blood
can really turn red
oh wait
i should know
my blood is black
indeed[/quote]
Really?!? That id interesting.
I want to see if they can still scream,
Dont you?
Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113597-FishCake]telling lies
then making them die
this is you
and this is I
we could get along
very well
dont you think?
Why yes, i do.
I think if we tried
Just a little bit harder
We could create
A masterpiece
Together.
Filled with pleasure or pain?
You can decide.[/quote]
oh
why thanks
i think
plessure
for us
while pain for them
because in the end
i still like
to be comfortable
while watching those liars
go dead
then making them die
this is you
and this is I
we could get along
very well
dont you think?
Why yes, i do.
I think if we tried
Just a little bit harder
We could create
A masterpiece
Together.
Filled with pleasure or pain?
You can decide.[/quote]
oh
why thanks
i think
plessure
for us
while pain for them
because in the end
i still like
to be comfortable
while watching those liars
go dead
FishCake said:[quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.
Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113602-FishCake][quote-113599-Myheartdiesforyou]Skin them alive
And make them rare
Cut open their chests.
I want to see if their hearts
Really turned black
When they lied.
go aheah
let me see
if blood
can really turn red
oh wait
i should know
my blood is black
indeed[/quote]
Really?!? That id interesting.
I want to see if they can still scream,
Dont you?[/quote]
yes, yes
i do
and im sure you do
lets do this too
And make them rare
Cut open their chests.
I want to see if their hearts
Really turned black
When they lied.
go aheah
let me see
if blood
can really turn red
oh wait
i should know
my blood is black
indeed[/quote]
Really?!? That id interesting.
I want to see if they can still scream,
Dont you?[/quote]
yes, yes
i do
and im sure you do
lets do this too
Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius
Abramson said:Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem 
Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure
you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot
Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure
you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot
FishCake said:[quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.
Myheartdiesforyou said:[quote-113610-FishCake][quote-113607-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113604-FishCake][quote-113601-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113598-FishCake][quote-113596-Myheartdiesforyou][quote-113594-FishCake]burning
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]
yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
im sorry to say
but in way
im glad
its done
is harsh
staking
maybe too much
why not
just murder
them
cold blood?
Because cold blood is nice
But doesnt have the same ring to it
If they cant feel the pain
From my acid rain.[/quote]
Oh yes thatll be quite fun
But my knives have gone dull
And ashes are blowing
You wouldnt happen to have
Steel chains and hooks would you?
I have the lovliest idea.
acid rain?
that sounds fun
can i join in
lets watch those
liars burn
scream in pain
and agony[/quote][/quote]
oops maybe you made a mistake
_____________________________
chains yes
hooks check
what is your idea
id love to hear[/quote]
Well we could pull them apart
By every joint
Starting with fingers
And toes.[/quote]
its grusome
its bloody
quite goory
i love it
your a genius[/quote]
Oh you should my others
These really dont compare
To the bloody detail
Of the ones written in there.[/quote]
yes, yes
i shall, i shall
but you see
right now
im running
out of ideas
you keep going
while im struggling
to keep up
im sorry to say
but in way
im glad
its done
FishCake said:[quote-110939-Abramson]Recent or past events. Show me how you feel, if you like it, if it hurts, the consequences, if you need to lie or have to lie. Why would you lie to your parents, to a friend, to your partner...? To anyone! I'm not saying you're a liar, if you don't like lying, just use your imagination and make a poem
Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure
you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?
Rules:
New and old submissions allowed
No entry limit
No rules of structure
you said no limit
and then 2 people
created atleast 4
pages, thats quite
alot[/quote]
Well thats alot
I would say
four pages i think we deserve
A prize
Just for our ability
To speak only
In poetry
For that long.
Dont you agree?
