Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 9:06pm
17th Dec 2024 9:06pm
I’ll be Your Hucka Motherf**ka
I have woke up to violence and hate in my heart,
I have had my bowl of Fruit Loops,
My car is full with unleaded,
And my guns is 12 months bullet pregnant. I’m ready for today.
“Every day I walk through the land of the Devil
Sickle in hand with an attitude like bad weather,
“You can call it premeditated exploding thunder,
Because from danger I’m never a runner,
“If you got that heat then motherfucka blast
I have my partner with me also-so motherfucka let’s dance,
“Or we can go Warhammer hand to hand
But...
I have had my bowl of Fruit Loops,
My car is full with unleaded,
And my guns is 12 months bullet pregnant. I’m ready for today.
“Every day I walk through the land of the Devil
Sickle in hand with an attitude like bad weather,
“You can call it premeditated exploding thunder,
Because from danger I’m never a runner,
“If you got that heat then motherfucka blast
I have my partner with me also-so motherfucka let’s dance,
“Or we can go Warhammer hand to hand
But...
#hate
#humankind
90 reads
2 Comments
HadesRising
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 11:33pm
16th Dec 2024 11:33pm
THINE OWN UNAVAILING ENDEAVORS
I have walked this earth
On broken and bleeding feet
Pushed to pull you from the dirt
But with thy eyes you can't see
I speak to deaf ears
I reach to dead flesh
Placating with wasted breath
I taste poisoned air
I smell meat that's dead
Expelling my wasted breath
I bleed for you
But you won't weep for me
Alas, it lasts forever
Thine own unavailing endeavors
I have worked this earth
With broken and bleeding hands
Kicked to lead you from the dirt
But thyself is fucked and damned
I...
On broken and bleeding feet
Pushed to pull you from the dirt
But with thy eyes you can't see
I speak to deaf ears
I reach to dead flesh
Placating with wasted breath
I taste poisoned air
I smell meat that's dead
Expelling my wasted breath
I bleed for you
But you won't weep for me
Alas, it lasts forever
Thine own unavailing endeavors
I have worked this earth
With broken and bleeding hands
Kicked to lead you from the dirt
But thyself is fucked and damned
I...
#anger
#anxiety
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 11:45am
16th Dec 2024 11:45am
Could You Please Knock Before Coming In Here?
"Could you please knock before coming in here?" was
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
#betrayal
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
95 reads
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drone
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 10:44am
16th Dec 2024 10:44am
We is Us
I is you
And you are We
We is Us
We Stand alone
And yet Complete
Down to the Marrow
Of Our Spiritual Bones
And you are We
We is Us
We Stand alone
And yet Complete
Down to the Marrow
Of Our Spiritual Bones
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 4:45am
16th Dec 2024 4:45am
Cowboy Boots
These cowboy boots were made for healing
Walking in your shoes
Innocence shattered
Massage table
Maxwell teaching
Epstein lurking
Dangle a carrot
Of financial assistance
For halls of knowledge
Serpents under the guise
Private plane to New Mexico
In the desert of opulence
Or his own island
Broke the souls of so many
Recruit some of my friends
Pyramid of young girls
Or tea with Prince Andrew
Walking in your shoes
Innocence shattered
Massage table
Maxwell teaching
Epstein lurking
Dangle a carrot
Of financial assistance
For halls of knowledge
Serpents under the guise
Private plane to New Mexico
In the desert of opulence
Or his own island
Broke the souls of so many
Recruit some of my friends
Pyramid of young girls
Or tea with Prince Andrew
#confusion
#dark
#emptiness #shame
#emptiness #shame
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:24am
16th Dec 2024 2:24am
You're Supposed To Be Mine! Not Theirs!
Kate peeked into Adam's bedroom.
She saw him naked with two chicks.
Afterwards, she kicked him out.
She saw him naked with two chicks.
Afterwards, she kicked him out.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#threesome
90 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 1:36am
16th Dec 2024 1:36am
Guilty Of…
Lay down the sentence
Guilty of who I am
Why pry into my daily life
A little flower looked at like poison
So I’m not who you are
Who are you to judge me
Still living in this world
Im not going away better accept me or
Live your life who you are
Why can’t I be just like you
We want the same things
Being loved and greeted
Secure in who I am
Why does that trouble you
Im just a Indian among lost pilgrims
You say patriot I say you’re full of shit
Swim in the swamp...
Guilty of who I am
Why pry into my daily life
A little flower looked at like poison
So I’m not who you are
Who are you to judge me
Still living in this world
Im not going away better accept me or
Live your life who you are
Why can’t I be just like you
We want the same things
Being loved and greeted
Secure in who I am
Why does that trouble you
Im just a Indian among lost pilgrims
You say patriot I say you’re full of shit
Swim in the swamp...
#anger
#lies
#politics
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Onyxceila
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
Captured
Sometimes I close my eyes so I can't see
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
#anger
#anxiety
#frustration #loneliness
#frustration #loneliness
79 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:55am
15th Dec 2024 3:55am
Truth Stands Above
Truth stands above
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
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oldmanG
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 5:22am
14th Dec 2024 5:22am
Cop City
Cop city ( in ATL)
There’s a state of emergency and it’s in cop city
Try and level the land and shoot protesters down
85 acres of beauty trees why would we
Flatten it out for the new world order
Police are the new military
In our community
Smoke bombs and pepper spray they
Gotta put em down
Can’t let the peasants gain the upper ground
Don’t know the heavy hand
is a losing proposition
Would think I’m talking about a far away land
But It’s in our backyard way
Down in Atlanta
Is it really...
There’s a state of emergency and it’s in cop city
Try and level the land and shoot protesters down
85 acres of beauty trees why would we
Flatten it out for the new world order
Police are the new military
In our community
Smoke bombs and pepper spray they
Gotta put em down
Can’t let the peasants gain the upper ground
Don’t know the heavy hand
is a losing proposition
Would think I’m talking about a far away land
But It’s in our backyard way
Down in Atlanta
Is it really...
#anger
#corruption
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drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
The Harvest
It is said
There are People
Who are Like
Factory Mushrooms
Who Like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
That Attracts The Dijnns
Dressed
In the Flesh
With a Mask
That Pleases
Your Mind
There are People
Who are Like
Factory Mushrooms
Who Like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
That Attracts The Dijnns
Dressed
In the Flesh
With a Mask
That Pleases
Your Mind
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 7:47pm
12th Dec 2024 7:47pm
The Honey of Mortal Blessings
Ugly swine, glad your not mine
Spit the apple into your eye
This dirty piggy never made it home
The lords helper, ran for shelter
Couldn't escape the boiling swelter
Pulverize you like the sheep you are
Oh man I could destroy you if i wanted
Murder you with my own two hands
Oh man I'd be so fucking happy
Murder you like a sacrificial lamb
You are nothing but a scared animal
Branded "A Coward" right on your back
A sight so divine, a sight so prime
Numerous ways to skin a cat
All sliced up ...
Spit the apple into your eye
This dirty piggy never made it home
The lords helper, ran for shelter
Couldn't escape the boiling swelter
Pulverize you like the sheep you are
Oh man I could destroy you if i wanted
Murder you with my own two hands
Oh man I'd be so fucking happy
Murder you like a sacrificial lamb
You are nothing but a scared animal
Branded "A Coward" right on your back
A sight so divine, a sight so prime
Numerous ways to skin a cat
All sliced up ...
#anger
#corruption
#hate
#religion
#weakness
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