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Narcisstic notes#1 from a webcam girl
The soft lens so kindly reflecting
my aging beauty.
Doe eyes, luscious lips, perfect tits
my snow white skin.
Finger in my mouth, dicks rise to
my devilish smile.
Warmth and blood move to my clit and
my cunt's juice presents.
My hands caress my neck, moving down to
my breasts.
Over tight lace my fingers graze
my hardened nipples.
I'm ready for the show, to share
my sweet wet sex.
my aging beauty.
Doe eyes, luscious lips, perfect tits
my snow white skin.
Finger in my mouth, dicks rise to
my devilish smile.
Warmth and blood move to my clit and
my cunt's juice presents.
My hands caress my neck, moving down to
my breasts.
Over tight lace my fingers graze
my hardened nipples.
I'm ready for the show, to share
my sweet wet sex.
Published 9th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2012 9:57pm
StellaStone,
Nice write and welcome to DU. Now like they say, on with the show!
tornado
Nice write and welcome to DU. Now like they say, on with the show!
tornado
10th Mar 2012 2:15am
G'damn ma'am. Sign me up. The poem... maybe a lens is projecting rather than reflecting. "Cunt's juice presents" is a little awkward to read and I'm not so sure about the wording. "Over tight" I might think about changing that to that to "Through the tight." Some minor tweaks you might want. By the way, if your poem contains extreme content, then putting up the warning flag actually seems to draw people into your work on this site. That's how I hooked you into a read.
