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Lust and Redemption
Riding the lust
Already writing the redemption
Things speed up
When you’ve ridden the ghost train before
I’m not sorry
To the contrary .....
Already writing the redemption
Things speed up
When you’ve ridden the ghost train before
I’m not sorry
To the contrary .....
Published 4th May 2020
Author's Note
Fragments become poems
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th May 2020 3:54pm
those first lines remind of the phrase "it's better to ask for forgiveness than permission." which, gets sticky sometimes.
4th May 2020 4:48pm
Agree
Sometimes these poems just write themselves.
I’m just the messenger.....
Sometimes these poems just write themselves.
I’m just the messenger.....
6th May 2020 4:24am
6th May 2020 5:05am
Anonymous
4th May 2020 4:52pm
I love the author's note as much as the poem!
4th May 2020 4:54pm
I’ve always been lucky that way. I’ll just feel the words and then I’ll write it before it flies away ..
Thx W
Thx W
5th May 2020 2:36am
Speak.. as always your pen is sharp.. and filled with truth.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
5th May 2020 4:12am
5th May 2020 5:58am
5th May 2020 11:04am
Kind of a yin yang affair
You always think it will be different this time around but it rarely is
The poem ties the life experience together ....
You always think it will be different this time around but it rarely is
The poem ties the life experience together ....
7th May 2020 5:10pm
Love the wordplay on riding/writing/ridden. It's like you've summarized many emotions in a such a short format.
7th May 2020 5:28pm
I woke up with this poem in my head and wrote it before I forgot it.
Thanks for the RL add too !!
Thanks for the RL add too !!
