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...THE RAIN DIES
Fog descent and the light wanes
In my head, lucid dream fades
Feel me
The whole of me
Don't breathe
Beating slows, stains the grass bed
My love grows, paint my flesh red
Lie down
Below the sound
We drown
Eyes reflect, filtered moonrise
Nothing left when the rain dies
My crime
They'll never find
You're mine
Published 29th Jul 2017
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29th Jul 2017 1:56pm
Anonymous
29th Jul 2017 2:08pm
This one made me a bit breathless.
31st Jul 2017 3:46am
This is really unique and sublime, it has a mystery, and flows really well, I like it...
4th Aug 2017 3:11pm
splendid imagery turned here in this piece.
the opening line hooks well
"Fog descent and the light wanes
In my head, lucid dream fades ".
keep'em coming.
the opening line hooks well
"Fog descent and the light wanes
In my head, lucid dream fades ".
keep'em coming.
