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Burning Bliss
Silky sensual and so wet
sweetest lips mine ever met.
Kisses that taste like rain..
seriously drive me insane.
She showers me with kisses
while granting all silent wishes..
With a mouth so hungry and wet
all other thoughts I soon forget.
A tongue so talented
as it dances with mine..
Each sensual roll and
press in perfect time..
A teasing bite to my lip..
tongues slide and slip.
Her lips' full and tender kiss..
yummy tasty..burning bliss.
Published 4th Sep 2016
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4th Sep 2016 7:01pm
6th Sep 2016 12:37pm
I would like to thank you
for the read and kind words
you have left with me. I am
hoping to cross paths many
more times.
Keith
for the read and kind words
you have left with me. I am
hoping to cross paths many
more times.
Keith
4th Sep 2016 7:09pm
I like how you focus on kisses here. If you can make them this erotic then I look forward to read what you do when things go a bit further. Fine work!
6th Sep 2016 12:40pm
Thank you Sir Crow for the
read and kind words. The kiss
Is one of the most sensual acts...
sometimes we forgot just how
sensual it is. Thank you again...
Keith
read and kind words. The kiss
Is one of the most sensual acts...
sometimes we forgot just how
sensual it is. Thank you again...
Keith
Anonymous
4th Sep 2016 8:07pm
A burning bliss indeed!
Kissing is my most favorite intimate act. It truly doesn't get the focus as much as all the other details.
You captured the sensual beauty of it all. In delicious depth.
Well written, my friend. 💓
Kissing is my most favorite intimate act. It truly doesn't get the focus as much as all the other details.
You captured the sensual beauty of it all. In delicious depth.
Well written, my friend. 💓
6th Sep 2016 12:45pm
Beautiful and Dear Heart,
I am in full agreement with
you on the subject of kissing.
It is the door opener and kindling
that helps to ignite the fire. Thanking you for your kind words as always.
Keith
I am in full agreement with
you on the subject of kissing.
It is the door opener and kindling
that helps to ignite the fire. Thanking you for your kind words as always.
Keith
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
5th Sep 2016 1:23am
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6th Sep 2016 12:47pm
Tim,
I would like to thank you
for the read and comment.
What would the world
be without the kiss?
Thanks again,
Keith
I would like to thank you
for the read and comment.
What would the world
be without the kiss?
Thanks again,
Keith
5th Sep 2016 9:17am
7th Sep 2016 2:42am
I am so sure that this is our first meeting so I would like to thank
you for the read and comment.
Looking forward to the opportunity to read you.
Keith
you for the read and comment.
Looking forward to the opportunity to read you.
Keith
Anonymous
5th Sep 2016 9:29am
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7th Sep 2016 2:44am
Thank you for stopping
and saying hello. I truly
appreciate the read and
comment.
Keith
and saying hello. I truly
appreciate the read and
comment.
Keith
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Nov 2016 5:03am
21st Sep 2016 2:47am
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