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Modern day witches
Ah but I too, have slipped beyond this Earth
and formed those things that reason brings
onward I've typed and joined a tumbling mirth
of cascading codes -- and made a hundred things
you have not dreamed of -- revealed and stored and strung
ever on this black screen. Typing here,
I've raced my thoughts along, and flung
my heart at goals where others pier
of birth, these children of some coded .bat
who, if they could, would laugh and say:
"Well thanks but isn't it funny that
man his maths where God has clay"
-fleamailman-
(based of "high flight")
and formed those things that reason brings
onward I've typed and joined a tumbling mirth
of cascading codes -- and made a hundred things
you have not dreamed of -- revealed and stored and strung
ever on this black screen. Typing here,
I've raced my thoughts along, and flung
my heart at goals where others pier
of birth, these children of some coded .bat
who, if they could, would laugh and say:
"Well thanks but isn't it funny that
man his maths where God has clay"
-fleamailman-
(based of "high flight")
Published 22nd May 2015
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4th Jun 2015 1:25am
On the second line,
"Well thanks but isn't it funny that
man his maths where God has clay"
do you mean to say:
man has maths instead of his?
(Just a piece of advise: If I were you, I would concentrate on writing and posting more poems. Also try to read and make comments on others as well. Don't expect someone to reciprocate right away, eventually if your piece caught someone's attention, then others will follow.)
@EngrVV
"Well thanks but isn't it funny that
man his maths where God has clay"
do you mean to say:
man has maths instead of his?
(Just a piece of advise: If I were you, I would concentrate on writing and posting more poems. Also try to read and make comments on others as well. Don't expect someone to reciprocate right away, eventually if your piece caught someone's attention, then others will follow.)
@EngrVV
