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Walking Through the Earth
I’m walking through the earth,
touching waterfalls that
regard my silhouetted as a path,
hidden in places that eyes never see,
There are whispers all around me,
looking at the walls, and how
the light's spilling over the seams ―
elements synthesized by nuclear burning,
I’m walking through the earth,
from under the ages, unafraid,
shuffling through the leaves,
moving toward a gate that was left open,
touching waterfalls that
regard my silhouetted as a path,
hidden in places that eyes never see,
There are whispers all around me,
looking at the walls, and how
the light's spilling over the seams ―
elements synthesized by nuclear burning,
I’m walking through the earth,
from under the ages, unafraid,
shuffling through the leaves,
moving toward a gate that was left open,
Published 23rd Oct 2014
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23rd Oct 2014 6:23pm
The path has always been there. Most cannot see the ancient footsteps to follow. Love, love, love this one!
23rd Oct 2014 8:16pm
23rd Oct 2014 9:37pm
For the love of fortuitous wandering, as I am reminded of the wonder in beauties old and new in the poets of poetry, "Oh bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art" and I wonder more; how do these things happen to you as they've happened upon me. Yes, the gate, I've closed it. Now I rest assuredly that the mealybugs on my lilacs will not escape; if it were that they're there. Regardless - Its a great story how that came to be.. I'll tell you later of the earth, almost as if you're as clueless as me, and I'll throw in the sea for free. I could go one and on.... and so I will, in all probability. :)
23rd Oct 2014 10:46pm
I like gates... garden gates, four
barred gates that open on to
meadows, the gates to heaven
and hell...just show me a gate
and I'll work my way around it...
and not by sitting on the fence,
either..:)
barred gates that open on to
meadows, the gates to heaven
and hell...just show me a gate
and I'll work my way around it...
and not by sitting on the fence,
either..:)
25th Oct 2014 8:38am
24th Oct 2014 1:50pm
This says to me to enjoy the wonders that we have before they disappear. Enjoyed the read.
25th Oct 2014 8:40am
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26th Oct 2014 4:56pm
