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My Words Begin To Fall
Around him my words are weak
A soft touch from his pulsing hand
Sends shivers up my spine
The way his lips curl when he
Pulls me close to hold me tight
My words are weak
Dark eyes full of luscious romance
Melt into my very core
I can feel my beating heart upon
His broad chest
Still my words are weak
Deep within my blood stirs
Thrilling me like never before
He leaves his kiss upon my lips
And my words begin to fall
A soft touch from his pulsing hand
Sends shivers up my spine
The way his lips curl when he
Pulls me close to hold me tight
My words are weak
Dark eyes full of luscious romance
Melt into my very core
I can feel my beating heart upon
His broad chest
Still my words are weak
Deep within my blood stirs
Thrilling me like never before
He leaves his kiss upon my lips
And my words begin to fall
Published 23rd Jul 2014
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23rd Jul 2014 1:17am
23rd Jul 2014 1:28am
23rd Jul 2014 6:39am
Sometimes there is no defense when we're in the presence of that special someone ... Even when I'm mad with mi brujita I eventually crumble and so do my words ...
Great write Tommie.
Great write Tommie.
23rd Jul 2014 6:29pm
23rd Jul 2014 7:51am
I love the pic. Your weak words are strong in this piece. It's very romantic to willingly, submit to the touch of another. Beautiful, Tommie.
23rd Jul 2014 6:30pm
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23rd Jul 2014 9:53am
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23rd Jul 2014 6:31pm
23rd Jul 2014 5:32pm
He is your Kryptonite. He takes your strength, and breath way with a simple touch or look. Deep sentiments Tommie. Enjoyed.
23rd Jul 2014 6:32pm
Exactly xmar82! He definitely does.
Thank you for your wonderful comment. :)
Thank you for your wonderful comment. :)
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2014 9:04pm
Tommie Lynn,
That point where words fail and everything else begins, that's where we strive to be. You are there and everyone else is trying to catch up! ; ) Beautiful write!
tornado
That point where words fail and everything else begins, that's where we strive to be. You are there and everyone else is trying to catch up! ; ) Beautiful write!
tornado
23rd Jul 2014 10:15pm
