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Same Sex
I ache with love
sigh when I speak
Her creamy skin
smooth and sleek
I peck her freckles
with my soft lips
Her hands embrace
my thick hips
My breast against
hers nipples meet
Our tongues lock
happy to greet
Warmth in between
her succulent thighs
Touch me now in
her emerald eyes
Tidal wave of passion
on my tongues tip
She floods me with her
splendour my heart slips
sigh when I speak
Her creamy skin
smooth and sleek
I peck her freckles
with my soft lips
Her hands embrace
my thick hips
My breast against
hers nipples meet
Our tongues lock
happy to greet
Warmth in between
her succulent thighs
Touch me now in
her emerald eyes
Tidal wave of passion
on my tongues tip
She floods me with her
splendour my heart slips
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23rd Jul 2014 12:21pm
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23rd Jul 2014 5:36am
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23rd Jul 2014 12:22pm
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23rd Jul 2014 7:56am
Thank you for painting this lovely romantic, super-erotic portrait of women reveling in one another's bodies. Sensational, Tommie!
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23rd Jul 2014 12:23pm
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23rd Jul 2014 9:39am
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23rd Jul 2014 12:24pm
Re: Same Sex
23rd Jul 2014 11:20am
Tommie this is so beautiful the passion in this is breathless time to my soul. I think you just created your biggest fan.YAAAAAAY TOMMIE You GO GIRL!!!!!!!♥ Passion love Passion You kick ass girl♥
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23rd Jul 2014 12:26pm
Re: Same Sex
23rd Jul 2014 2:01pm
lovely scenery you have created with a back drop of white linens keeping this write innocent. Felt trust and respect and lots of love, all the while at the same time sexy and hot. truly enjoyed
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re: Re: Same Sex
23rd Jul 2014 2:10pm
So glad you could feel the respect and trust in
this! I was hoping someone would. Exactly what
I wanted the reader to feel. Thank you very much Awakenedsoul. :)
this! I was hoping someone would. Exactly what
I wanted the reader to feel. Thank you very much Awakenedsoul. :)
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23rd Jul 2014 3:40pm
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23rd Jul 2014 4:20pm
Re: Same Sex
23rd Jul 2014 5:37pm
I agree with hawkdude! Two women kissing and caressing each other allowing us to watch and take part in. Heavenly write Tommie!
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23rd Jul 2014 6:33pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2014 8:38pm
Tommie Lynn,
Love is love, but you have overflowed the senses with this write! Very Cool!
tornado
Love is love, but you have overflowed the senses with this write! Very Cool!
tornado
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23rd Jul 2014 10:14pm