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Beautiful Demise
Jagged in the creases
Blood is running deeper
It trickles down the chambers
Of a Seldom beating heart
On the bright white walls of freedom
The canvas which has freed it
What was once a source of living
Is now a work of art
Blood is running deeper
It trickles down the chambers
Of a Seldom beating heart
On the bright white walls of freedom
The canvas which has freed it
What was once a source of living
Is now a work of art
Published 12th Mar 2011
| Edited 24th Oct 2013
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12th Mar 2011 5:46am
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12th Mar 2011 6:02am
from being in a dark place alot lately, i deffinately can relate to this poem and the depth of pain behind it.
you've put dark pain so beautifully, its amazing
Keep it up sweety ~Riyah xo
you've put dark pain so beautifully, its amazing
Keep it up sweety ~Riyah xo
12th Mar 2011 6:12am
Thanks Riyah, that means alot coming from you, and yeah I have been going through alot, and this is the one good thing that came out of it:)xx
12th Mar 2011 12:54pm
12th Mar 2011 8:52pm
This is an amazingly beautiful poem ..... I love it.... inspirational and all self explanatory ....
12th Mar 2011 8:55pm
This is an amazingly beautiful poem ..... I love it.... inspirational and all self explanatory ....
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