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Promise, Mother
Streaming Her lifeforce
I stood atop rocky banks
with a breeze to coax me in
wildflower smiles blush burgundy
yellows crave sympathy
and deer snort
unexpectedly surprised
Rocks hug the overflow
creating staircase falls
nestled in hills cradle
arteries spill into creeks
as leaves orange and green
canoe times passage
through natures by-way
Box turtles bask lazily
soaking golden
in outstretched plea
whispering archaic phrases
as hints to the everlast
could hold true
despite fast rushing waters
I stood atop rocky banks
with a breeze to coax me in
wildflower smiles blush burgundy
yellows crave sympathy
and deer snort
unexpectedly surprised
Rocks hug the overflow
creating staircase falls
nestled in hills cradle
arteries spill into creeks
as leaves orange and green
canoe times passage
through natures by-way
Box turtles bask lazily
soaking golden
in outstretched plea
whispering archaic phrases
as hints to the everlast
could hold true
despite fast rushing waters
Published 14th Sep 2013
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14th Sep 2013 4:11am
Beautiful depiction of nature and its cycle. The imagery is brilliant. Enjoyed the read, Soul. The countryside walk is always an enjoyable treat.
14th Sep 2013 4:31am
14th Sep 2013 7:28am
15th Sep 2013 1:47am
Thank You Dear Magdalena...this was captured at a place I hadn't been to since I was a hellraising teen...and still it is untouched :)))
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 11:07am
visuals are stunning, a great read..perfect flow-meter..so serene! write on, soula!!
15th Sep 2013 2:02am
Thanks Miki:)))
I'm glad You dug it...as for the meter...had to keep it fitting for the scenery eh?
I'm glad You dug it...as for the meter...had to keep it fitting for the scenery eh?
14th Sep 2013 3:50pm
To sit back on a rock, or log and admire nature at her finest, beautiful soul.
15th Sep 2013 2:03am
14th Sep 2013 11:54pm
Another great one Soul! Beautiful seamless lines. :)
The picture is.............?
The picture is.............?
15th Sep 2013 2:05am
Thank You Dear Rain:)))
:D the picture is a close up (too close up) of water spilling (in a creek) over a rock with a couple leaves about to tumble over....hey now...be thankful there isn't a shadowy thumb in that pic :D
:D the picture is a close up (too close up) of water spilling (in a creek) over a rock with a couple leaves about to tumble over....hey now...be thankful there isn't a shadowy thumb in that pic :D
15th Sep 2013 5:26am
Visually written,
Soul you have the knack to take the reader where they want to go.
Great enhancing poem
KG
Soul you have the knack to take the reader where they want to go.
Great enhancing poem
KG
20th Sep 2013 9:27pm
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 9:09am
Such great lines,Soul, this poem is exactly how it can be here where I live, the wild running stream outside whispering at night and silence in the air. The sound of the running water is so utterly soothing!
(its quite some sounds through week days though)
(its quite some sounds through week days though)
20th Sep 2013 9:31pm
Indeed-Mirror mirror :) I still set quite often by the streams...and when it rains and they gush so...i'm in heaven!!!
Thank You always for Your Kindness and sharing Dear Queen!!!
Thank You always for Your Kindness and sharing Dear Queen!!!
15th Sep 2013 2:29pm
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