EmoPedals (domnro)

Toys? I ain't got none. All my toys were broken and stolen. Although I do have a few momentos remaining in my attic of other objects resembling toy goods and objects left in place of my own toy-like-memorbillia to appear as if they were my own; whom were left there by the thiefs who raided my attic in search of my writings, poems, art, diaries, and journals. What's funny about that is... they either forgot all the writings and art of my own... or were just completely distracted by all of the other amazing and incredible stuff up there that I've collected over the course of my lifetime. I even have a collection of rather large and bulky paintings worth millions of dollars (if not billions each) which are a rarity and belong preserved and/or rented to a museum or museums.

I'm not here for your suggestion about which words I should use in my writings in place of my own.
I'm here for your honest thoughts regarding what you've read - excluding your suggestions of which words sound better where and why.
As I've noted above.
Olso: I'd like some honest criticism. Honest criticism is not telling me which words sound better or where you want me to put your words. That's not criticism. That's a suggestion. Ok. Thanks. Bye!

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