Poems About Trees Seeking Honest Critique
#trees
Poems about trees seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Belief, that nature will promote
The forest floor, part shade it lay
sunlight, its glint was, obscured day
alone I stood in wonders gasp
like an ant, I was dwarfed by mass
The monolith that stood before
its breadth and span that rendered awe
and questions came to Google it?
that magesty from just a pip!
For centuries its growth upright
forest fires, its progress could not blight
natives honoured ancient truthes
spirits good, traped within its roots
As its altars towered high
the forever saquoia, sanctifies
a feeling, God...
sunlight, its glint was, obscured day
alone I stood in wonders gasp
like an ant, I was dwarfed by mass
The monolith that stood before
its breadth and span that rendered awe
and questions came to Google it?
that magesty from just a pip!
For centuries its growth upright
forest fires, its progress could not blight
natives honoured ancient truthes
spirits good, traped within its roots
As its altars towered high
the forever saquoia, sanctifies
a feeling, God...
#trees
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Forever Sequoia
A witness to Earth's history.
Fire and storm resistant
and caring for the life that inhabits her.
Silent is a wise Sequoia
the oldest tree in the world.
And shares natural wisdom
with whoever listens.
Symbol of immortality and hope
and I say to those who wonder:
forever Sequoia.
Triumphant wood of life
and box of the essence of the world...
blood-sap running red!
A tree forever!
A vision of eternal beauty!
Forever Sequoia!
Fire and storm resistant
and caring for the life that inhabits her.
Silent is a wise Sequoia
the oldest tree in the world.
And shares natural wisdom
with whoever listens.
Symbol of immortality and hope
and I say to those who wonder:
forever Sequoia.
Triumphant wood of life
and box of the essence of the world...
blood-sap running red!
A tree forever!
A vision of eternal beauty!
Forever Sequoia!
#happiness
#forest
#trees
#nature
#spiritual
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Winter awaits her love
Cold, gray skies
trees leafless, not ready to die
gentle breeze rustles limbs
reminding us of summer's whims.
Nothing has ended
snow has only blended
the gray hues together
to form a beautiful nature sweater
to adorn the world in it's mourning
only waiting for spring's lovely morning
to awaken what was asleep
and to finally grant us peace to keep.
trees leafless, not ready to die
gentle breeze rustles limbs
reminding us of summer's whims.
Nothing has ended
snow has only blended
the gray hues together
to form a beautiful nature sweater
to adorn the world in it's mourning
only waiting for spring's lovely morning
to awaken what was asleep
and to finally grant us peace to keep.
#trees
#winter
#nature
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One's Personal Opinion On The Holidays
If
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
#trees
#Christmas
#MentalHealth
#dialogue
#nonfiction
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Autumnal Flow
crystalline ice flowing beneath
azure atmosphere living art
painter streaking stroking leisurely
creating erasing recreating adapting
autumn scented breeze cooling
yellowing leaves flutter falling
settling insulating brown earth
beneath flowing crystalline ice
azure atmosphere living art
painter streaking stroking leisurely
creating erasing recreating adapting
autumn scented breeze cooling
yellowing leaves flutter falling
settling insulating brown earth
beneath flowing crystalline ice
#trees
#fall
#wind #nature
#wind #nature
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Nature’s Bounty
What a time
To be alive
Slowly awakened by rustling leaves
Swaying in the gentle fall breeze
The distant call and response;
A pair of red robins
Join in nature’s chorus
A symphony of calmness
My eyes wander through the foliage
Admiring the collage of colors
Vibrant, lush greenery greets my gaze
Surrounded by an invigorating, uplifting aura
I lethargically take a strolling glimpse
Up above the forest —
A crisp, blue canvas patterned with milky, white clouds meets my pupils
The...
To be alive
Slowly awakened by rustling leaves
Swaying in the gentle fall breeze
The distant call and response;
A pair of red robins
Join in nature’s chorus
A symphony of calmness
My eyes wander through the foliage
Admiring the collage of colors
Vibrant, lush greenery greets my gaze
Surrounded by an invigorating, uplifting aura
I lethargically take a strolling glimpse
Up above the forest —
A crisp, blue canvas patterned with milky, white clouds meets my pupils
The...
#countryside
#forest
#trees
#sky
#nature
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The Wait
anarchy of soul rebels within...
I seek solace in nature
an open sky, trees vibrating green
guardians of the plane
discussing fate
whispers rustle their leaves
It's light enough now
Peering at what is right
The mighty redwoods
have seen it all
The deep abyss
holding all its secrets
takes a moment to comment
on the three earth revolutions
Nature sings on her own channel
with a memory of ages
broadcasting peace to the infant humans
Restless souls waiting
for the creator to...
I seek solace in nature
an open sky, trees vibrating green
guardians of the plane
discussing fate
whispers rustle their leaves
It's light enough now
Peering at what is right
The mighty redwoods
have seen it all
The deep abyss
holding all its secrets
takes a moment to comment
on the three earth revolutions
Nature sings on her own channel
with a memory of ages
broadcasting peace to the infant humans
Restless souls waiting
for the creator to...
#love
#trees
#sky
#rainbow
#nature
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Scarred Bark Part II
Admiring the trees with colorful leaves
That're falling from high as they grieve
Leaving some trees barrenly undressed
That just can't handle constant duress
Stress from storms got 'em torn & battered
Beginning to lean like a rose that's withered
Tethered to pain of epigenetic proportions
Trying to stay sane after late term abortions
They gotta use caution when standing tall in fields
Executioners are lurking while out carrying steels
Making it harder to heal as bark's peeled everyday
When roots are uprooted,...
That're falling from high as they grieve
Leaving some trees barrenly undressed
That just can't handle constant duress
Stress from storms got 'em torn & battered
Beginning to lean like a rose that's withered
Tethered to pain of epigenetic proportions
Trying to stay sane after late term abortions
They gotta use caution when standing tall in fields
Executioners are lurking while out carrying steels
Making it harder to heal as bark's peeled everyday
When roots are uprooted,...
#death
#LifeStruggles
#trees
#nature
#MentalHealth
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Lumber yard
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#forest
#trees
#funny
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Cabin
You
have marble eyes that glaze,
I glazed mine too,
last Sunday,
and the time before that
when I was at war with myself.
You extend them,
lick
around my outside until I am bound
to that necessity,
the absolute orchestral insistence in your face.
I'd lay every time,
arch the spine,
lift
until ribcage is an instrument to play
until
the sky forgets
there was ever sunlight,
until I am surrounded by pine and woodsmoke,
axe outside,
body unwinding
until we awake, ...
have marble eyes that glaze,
I glazed mine too,
last Sunday,
and the time before that
when I was at war with myself.
You extend them,
lick
around my outside until I am bound
to that necessity,
the absolute orchestral insistence in your face.
I'd lay every time,
arch the spine,
lift
until ribcage is an instrument to play
until
the sky forgets
there was ever sunlight,
until I am surrounded by pine and woodsmoke,
axe outside,
body unwinding
until we awake, ...
#trees
#fire
#nature
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dandelion
feeling in the moment
I take a look around me and wonder
such a beautiful day
the wind caresses my skin and I smile
tender day do you behold me also?
sacred nature tends to her own
the trees reach skyward
the sunflowers too
chicks in the yard stir up bugs
and my dog looks at me adoringly
oh happy day
I send my spirit on the air
and it returns to me refreshed
little restless soul so bound inside
finds respite in the outdoors
where my soul can rise cavorting in the sunshine
where everything...
I take a look around me and wonder
such a beautiful day
the wind caresses my skin and I smile
tender day do you behold me also?
sacred nature tends to her own
the trees reach skyward
the sunflowers too
chicks in the yard stir up bugs
and my dog looks at me adoringly
oh happy day
I send my spirit on the air
and it returns to me refreshed
little restless soul so bound inside
finds respite in the outdoors
where my soul can rise cavorting in the sunshine
where everything...
#beauty
#dreams
#trees #nature
#trees #nature
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THE TREES OF EDEN
THE TREE OF KNOWLEDGE
Its Root is SWEET
It's branches are ALIVE
It's Light is LOVED
It's leaves are HONEST
It's nectar of GOODNESS
is in its blossoms
It's fruit is WAKEFULNESS
It's seed is REBIRTH
It flowers in EPINOYA OF LIGHT
Those who eat from it your eyes will be opened
And you will be like God
The tree of knowledge
Represents higher thinking.
It's the Epinoia of Light
And it has to do with your mind and thought.
It is interesting how the tree of knowledge
is forbidden.
...
Its Root is SWEET
It's branches are ALIVE
It's Light is LOVED
It's leaves are HONEST
It's nectar of GOODNESS
is in its blossoms
It's fruit is WAKEFULNESS
It's seed is REBIRTH
It flowers in EPINOYA OF LIGHT
Those who eat from it your eyes will be opened
And you will be like God
The tree of knowledge
Represents higher thinking.
It's the Epinoia of Light
And it has to do with your mind and thought.
It is interesting how the tree of knowledge
is forbidden.
...
#trees
#religion
#Christian
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DU Poetry : Poems About Trees Seeking Honest Critique