Tanka Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#tanka
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 2:09am
20th Jan 2024 2:09am
What Happens To Be Some Guy's Dream
Nick was surrounded
by hot naked babes until
Lisa came in, stripped
and moved closer only to
have the alarm clock wake him.
by hot naked babes until
Lisa came in, stripped
and moved closer only to
have the alarm clock wake him.
#friendship
#dreams
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
167 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
After We Got Out Of That Winter Storm
It's a good thing we
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
221 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Jan 2024 2:23am
17th Jan 2024 2:23am
On The Floor Hungover And Topless
Kevin found Lori
on the floor hungover and
topless before she
looked up and wanted to tell
him what happened yesterday.
on the floor hungover and
topless before she
looked up and wanted to tell
him what happened yesterday.
#friendship
#drugs
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
171 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Jan 2024 8:29pm
14th Jan 2024 8:29pm
To Have Us See Sadness On Sam's Face
"Is she not the most
beautiful bride Peter is
lucky to have?" was
what Mom said only to have
us see sadness on Sam's face.
beautiful bride Peter is
lucky to have?" was
what Mom said only to have
us see sadness on Sam's face.
#mother
#marriage
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
154 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Jan 2024 7:14pm
12th Jan 2024 7:14pm
Maybe I Should've Knocked First
Greg opened the door
of the bathroom with some clean
towels and saw his
aunt Sharon naked in the
shower before he left there.
of the bathroom with some clean
towels and saw his
aunt Sharon naked in the
shower before he left there.
#family
#home
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
217 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2024 9:57pm
11th Jan 2024 9:57pm
Friday Became The One Day
Friday became the
one day on which Cody looked
out of his bedroom
window and saw his best friend's
mom sunbathe nude by the pool.
one day on which Cody looked
out of his bedroom
window and saw his best friend's
mom sunbathe nude by the pool.
#home
#summer
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
199 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2024 12:19pm
10th Jan 2024 12:19pm
What Do You Mean Where Is My Bikini Top?
Hi, Honey! Did not
expect you to be home so
soon. Some friends and I
were fooling around in the
pool. What is with the wide eyes?
expect you to be home so
soon. Some friends and I
were fooling around in the
pool. What is with the wide eyes?
#home
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
211 reads
9 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Jan 2024 12:23pm
9th Jan 2024 12:23pm
That Was Some Wild Party Last Night
When Jonathan woke
up and placed both hands on his
forehead, he felt a
pair of hands on his bare chest
and they belong to Maggie.
up and placed both hands on his
forehead, he felt a
pair of hands on his bare chest
and they belong to Maggie.
#friendship
#alcohol
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
190 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:41am
8th Jan 2024 4:41am
The Result Of Last Year's Fling
Last year, Eugene got
naked with Jennifer on
a friend's sailboat.
This year, Jennifer called and
told Eugene she's pregnant.
naked with Jennifer on
a friend's sailboat.
This year, Jennifer called and
told Eugene she's pregnant.
#friendship
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
#pregnancy
183 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Jan 2024 8:58pm
6th Jan 2024 8:58pm
Penny Woke Up And Found Herself Alone
Penny woke up and
found herself naked and all
alone at the camp
site that she and Jason built
together for he vanished.
found herself naked and all
alone at the camp
site that she and Jason built
together for he vanished.
#friendship
#fiction
#tanka
#mystery
#sensual
183 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Jan 2024 8:33pm
5th Jan 2024 8:33pm
Why Are You Doing It With Her Instead Of Me?
Karen walked over
to the pool and saw Cody
kissing her best friend
Margot on the lips instead
of the one he's engaged to.
to the pool and saw Cody
kissing her best friend
Margot on the lips instead
of the one he's engaged to.
#relationships
#friendship
#corruption
#fiction
#tanka
170 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 12:17pm
4th Jan 2024 12:17pm
So Much For Nothing Getting To Him
#corruption
#home
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
185 reads
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