Tanka Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#tanka
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
1st Feb 2025 8:47pm
Well? I Need To Do Something To Cool Off.
After looking all
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
over to make sure she is
alone, Debby stripped
down and sat in the water
before she saw Kevin there.
#beach
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#tanka
53 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
26th Jan 2025 1:58pm
Shocked At The Sight Of Her Mother
Holly became shocked
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
at the sight of her mother
naked and getting
probed from behind by her kid
brother Toby and his rod.
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
98 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
25th Jan 2025 7:56pm
Asked To Come To Work Tomorrow
Jonathan called the
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
office and asked to come to
work tomorrow for
he and Barbara are both
nude and humping each other.
#deception
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
92 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
Cheating On Her Husband The Audio Way
Roberta made sure
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
114 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
21st Jan 2025 9:50pm
You Couldn't Wait For Me. Could You?
Ashley went into
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
a nuru massage parlor
in Paris and saw
Kevin naked in a room
with two magnificent blondes.
#fiction
#lover
#sex
#tanka
#threesome
108 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 11:33am
19th Jan 2025 11:33am
After We Got In The Cabin
After we got in
the cabin and found ourselves
isolated by
the snow, the girls and I stripped
and hump each other right there.
the cabin and found ourselves
isolated by
the snow, the girls and I stripped
and hump each other right there.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
#winter
120 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
We Should Stay In Here
I agree with you
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
#winter
167 reads
2 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:53am
12th Jan 2025 00:53am
Polar
As your air frostbites
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
#heartbroken
#sadness
#tanka
32 reads
16 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
Like What You See?
Jeff was hiking in
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
#fiction
#love
#river
#sex
#tanka
106 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
This Is What I Realized On The Beach
After spotting some
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
64 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 4:18am
28th Dec 2024 4:18am
What A Way To Ring In The New Year
On the first day of
January, Barbara
woke and found herself
naked before Peter stepped
in and she smiled at the guy.
January, Barbara
woke and found herself
naked before Peter stepped
in and she smiled at the guy.
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
#tanka
193 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 8:25pm
15th Dec 2024 8:25pm
In A New Orange Micro Bikini
Tenika allowed
herself to walk over to
Henry in a new
orange micro bikini
and with a smile on her face.
She said "hi" to the
guy which made him look up at
Tenika and get
so turned on by her micro
bikini on that one beach.
herself to walk over to
Henry in a new
orange micro bikini
and with a smile on her face.
She said "hi" to the
guy which made him look up at
Tenika and get
so turned on by her micro
bikini on that one beach.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#tanka
#temptation
52 reads
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