Poems About Strength by Top Critiquers
#strength
Poems about strength by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
It's all in your mind
Hope
Fuck hope
Hope is a pig
Kick it, murder it
Annihilate it
Hope for hope?
To be full of hope is to be full of shit
Hope is a weapon used against you
Hope costs money, you always pay
You're always hoping that your god hears you
Do you truly believe that?!?
It's all in your mind
Fuck hope
Hope is a pig
Kick it, murder it
Annihilate it
Hope for hope?
To be full of hope is to be full of shit
Hope is a weapon used against you
Hope costs money, you always pay
You're always hoping that your god hears you
Do you truly believe that?!?
It's all in your mind
#atheism
#hope
#strength
#vulnerability
#weakness
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The Sleeping Terrain Of Thought
sacred thought kept in tear's regrets
fall down my cheeks in ripples of sorrow
I covet the honesty of my sadness
vulnerable in truth
guile resides in shadows
I prefer sunlit places where dreams are alive
though painful they never really die utterly
painfully aware of their beauty
they paint vistas on the horizons
and duly we follow
keening epiphanies alter our course
it is a solemn thing to live
to exist at all is pain
from umbilicus to breath
the first touch of air to skin
makes us startle
...
fall down my cheeks in ripples of sorrow
I covet the honesty of my sadness
vulnerable in truth
guile resides in shadows
I prefer sunlit places where dreams are alive
though painful they never really die utterly
painfully aware of their beauty
they paint vistas on the horizons
and duly we follow
keening epiphanies alter our course
it is a solemn thing to live
to exist at all is pain
from umbilicus to breath
the first touch of air to skin
makes us startle
...
#love
#strength
#StreamOfConsciousness
249 reads
14 Comments
It's a sad day
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ it's a sad day that there will not be a DUP no more after 5-12-2025 😔 For me I truly enjoyed my time on the site, for sure when I signed up for DUP I can say it's been great for me as it let me express my thoughts and insight and imagination for during my time on here I've meet a lot of good people's that I admired as they encourage me as they inspire me to be able to express my thoughts and talents of unspoken words ✍️ for being here was like family among friends who were writers and artists sometimes being...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#motivational
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
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6 Comments
Need
Society has tamed you
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
#courage
#motivational
#strength
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14 Comments
Lasso the Sun
The rider rides
With rage and passion in his heart
Over golden hills and across the plains
Across the great breath of land
Through realms and domains
Ready
To capture the sun
His untamed spirit and will
Has no time for menial things
There is a flame to catch and a force wield
As he gallops into the distance
Willing to conquer the day
Ready
To seize the sun
He chases the fire in the sky
Without wings or propellors he flies
Hi horse racing against time
Leaving a plume of smoke and dust...
With rage and passion in his heart
Over golden hills and across the plains
Across the great breath of land
Through realms and domains
Ready
To capture the sun
His untamed spirit and will
Has no time for menial things
There is a flame to catch and a force wield
As he gallops into the distance
Willing to conquer the day
Ready
To seize the sun
He chases the fire in the sky
Without wings or propellors he flies
Hi horse racing against time
Leaving a plume of smoke and dust...
#courage
#determination
#dreams
#hope
#strength
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6 Comments
if I can just hold the thought...
my mind has a nasty habit
hassling me
backing me into a corner
taunting
that one small word
guaranteed to see me spiral
...why...
as if there ever was an honest answer
can't be...you know
it's too subjective...ever changing
meant to drive me crazy
right now though...
...I'm not having it
flipping the tables
maybe it isn't that I was too much
...but they weren't enough
couldn't match my incredible frequency
maybe it isn't that I was too little ...
hassling me
backing me into a corner
taunting
that one small word
guaranteed to see me spiral
...why...
as if there ever was an honest answer
can't be...you know
it's too subjective...ever changing
meant to drive me crazy
right now though...
...I'm not having it
flipping the tables
maybe it isn't that I was too much
...but they weren't enough
couldn't match my incredible frequency
maybe it isn't that I was too little ...
#confessional
#SelfWorth
#strength
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12 Comments
Killer Goals
Twinkle asked me
to write down goals
the first 1 was clear
build more muscles
gain strength back
years ago i learned
that being physically
stronger made me
mentally stronger
more resilient too
improved stamina
is goal number two
(never ending sex)
as well as a boost
in mood of course
i showed the list to
my guy & said i'd lie
if i said i don't want a
killerbody he thought it
was a reachable goal
“it's way too shallow”
yet here we...
to write down goals
the first 1 was clear
build more muscles
gain strength back
years ago i learned
that being physically
stronger made me
mentally stronger
more resilient too
improved stamina
is goal number two
(never ending sex)
as well as a boost
in mood of course
i showed the list to
my guy & said i'd lie
if i said i don't want a
killerbody he thought it
was a reachable goal
“it's way too shallow”
yet here we...
#dreams
#strength
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28 Comments
IT FEELS SO GOOD!
OH,
you are working
magic; it feels so
amazingly good;
never imagined anything
could feel so wonderful
YES!
You do it perfectly.
Harder...the stiffness
in my neck is
going away; the ache
is gone too.
YES
it feels so good now.
you are working
magic; it feels so
amazingly good;
never imagined anything
could feel so wonderful
YES!
You do it perfectly.
Harder...the stiffness
in my neck is
going away; the ache
is gone too.
YES
it feels so good now.
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational
#strength
129 reads
9 Comments
One Liner....No 2
Even ants have shadows.
#hope
#love
#strength
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2 Comments
Mel44
Visual Expression IX
#admiration
#courage
#determination
#inspirational
#strength
443 reads
19 Comments
Lets Fight Together
Never let the darkness consume your light,
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
hold on to the whispers of hope,
embrace the strength within your soul
for you are needed, loved... cherished.
Never believe the lies of despair,
your existence is a beacon,
a guiding star in the night
shining brighter than you know.
Never forget the battles you've won,
each step forward is a victory,
your journey is a testament
to the resilience of your spirit.
Never surrender to the shadows,
for within you lies a fire,
a flame that will burn eternally...
#hope
#strength
#success
#suicide
#uplifting
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4 Comments
Is it okay to be not okay?
I couldn’t help but notice
That you seemed a little
Down.
I do not consider myself
An empath, but
Who knows?
All I know -
Is
That your sadness
Is
Like
Immediacy
to
my
Soul,
Circulating
Immediately.
I just -
Want to embrace you
With the whole
of my soul,
&
Send away the shadows
or
Just say
Everything
is
going
to
be
Okay.
Wondering
if ...
That you seemed a little
Down.
I do not consider myself
An empath, but
Who knows?
All I know -
Is
That your sadness
Is
Like
Immediacy
to
my
Soul,
Circulating
Immediately.
I just -
Want to embrace you
With the whole
of my soul,
&
Send away the shadows
or
Just say
Everything
is
going
to
be
Okay.
Wondering
if ...
#strength
#courage
#friendship #shadows
#friendship #shadows
497 reads
16 Comments
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