Mystery Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#mystery
Ravenskraft
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 11:57pm
18th Jun 2024 11:57pm
Mr Oblong's Body Parts For Endless Press Studios By FD Ravenskraft
Mr Oblong's Body Parts
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
#gothic
#mystery
#scary #tragedy
#scary #tragedy
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 11:47pm
18th Jun 2024 11:47pm
The Shadows of The Trees by FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
In the Darkest Beginning
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
#gothic
#mystery
#narrative #scary
#narrative #scary
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 8:09pm
9th Jun 2024 8:09pm
Paradox
Only an artist can create what they don't understand
Just like language with no barriers on foreign lands
Memorize your poem, improvise when you recite
A larger then life coaster, I'm afraid of heights
These contradictions mean nothing to me
An enigma to all, nobody cares to see
Everything changes, it all stays the same
I'm in love with you, hatred is to blame
Yes me to death, ask questions if confused
Consensual sex, accusing me of abuse
These contradictions mean nothing to me
An enigma to all, nobody cares to see
...
Just like language with no barriers on foreign lands
Memorize your poem, improvise when you recite
A larger then life coaster, I'm afraid of heights
These contradictions mean nothing to me
An enigma to all, nobody cares to see
Everything changes, it all stays the same
I'm in love with you, hatred is to blame
Yes me to death, ask questions if confused
Consensual sex, accusing me of abuse
These contradictions mean nothing to me
An enigma to all, nobody cares to see
...
#dialogue
#learning
#lyrics
#mystery
#rhyming
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faithmairee
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 9:45pm
8th Jun 2024 9:45pm
Intuitive Empath
I am an intuitive empath
Sometimes, I know things
But I don't know how I know them
unexplainable knowledge
Of things that are going to happen
Events that have already occurred
Several times I witnessed events
Happening elsewhere at the
Exact time that they are happening
Of which I certainly
Have not seen with my own eyes
It's always been that way
I find it nothing short of a gift
That I am most grateful for
Sometimes, I know things
But I don't know how I know them
unexplainable knowledge
Of things that are going to happen
Events that have already occurred
Several times I witnessed events
Happening elsewhere at the
Exact time that they are happening
Of which I certainly
Have not seen with my own eyes
It's always been that way
I find it nothing short of a gift
That I am most grateful for
#myself
#mystery
#wisdom
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
25th May 2024 8:54pm
25th May 2024 8:54pm
FD Ravenskraft's The Watchers of Nevermore for Endless Studios By FD Ravenskraft
The Eyes of many
That sees everything and beyond
Within Ravenshenge is a terror within it
That all evil is trapped there to keep them in
Earth Dwellers want them to enter the world
of the living.
The king wants no part of this contract of the world
The Nevermore King heeds the call of his beloved
Watchers to seek guidance
Rochester keeps the Delightful ones from entering the world
as the graves are renovated for newcomers
and Pauline The Bearer controls the south of Banshees and witches.
As Izsenhimm will create a new nightmare to...
That sees everything and beyond
Within Ravenshenge is a terror within it
That all evil is trapped there to keep them in
Earth Dwellers want them to enter the world
of the living.
The king wants no part of this contract of the world
The Nevermore King heeds the call of his beloved
Watchers to seek guidance
Rochester keeps the Delightful ones from entering the world
as the graves are renovated for newcomers
and Pauline The Bearer controls the south of Banshees and witches.
As Izsenhimm will create a new nightmare to...
#gothic
#mystery
#narrative
#scary
#tragedy
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Sonneteer
Poem Published
20th May 2024 9:15pm
20th May 2024 9:15pm
Uncertainty
Catch a star within your eye
never tell a knowing lie
hold the magic of a copper band
steady self on sinking sand
and discover lessons taught
that make all minds less fraught.
Pace the paths that grant eternity
then returning full of certainty
explain the secrets of the universe
and how turn pig’s ear to silken purse
then telling fully wrong from right
banish darkness of the night.
But this would halt all mystery
abolishing uncertainty;
such is the stuff of heaven and hell
and it is here on earth we dwell; ...
never tell a knowing lie
hold the magic of a copper band
steady self on sinking sand
and discover lessons taught
that make all minds less fraught.
Pace the paths that grant eternity
then returning full of certainty
explain the secrets of the universe
and how turn pig’s ear to silken purse
then telling fully wrong from right
banish darkness of the night.
But this would halt all mystery
abolishing uncertainty;
such is the stuff of heaven and hell
and it is here on earth we dwell; ...
#Christian
#mystery
#rhyming #spiritual
#rhyming #spiritual
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
20th May 2024 2:29pm
20th May 2024 2:29pm
De' Nyghtshade's The Appointment
I. I see you in here
With your husband the lover of your life
But we vibe at first sight
As we all talk about your issues
Without your notice
You open your legs for a peep show
In the middle of a session
He left in anger. I think he knows
Our secret. Beforehand
So I talked to him and said
You both need a break. His anger was vicious
And he left you there
I have Her loved ones pick her up later
I need a one-on-one with her
II....
With your husband the lover of your life
But we vibe at first sight
As we all talk about your issues
Without your notice
You open your legs for a peep show
In the middle of a session
He left in anger. I think he knows
Our secret. Beforehand
So I talked to him and said
You both need a break. His anger was vicious
And he left you there
I have Her loved ones pick her up later
I need a one-on-one with her
II....
#mystery
#romantic
#Romanticism
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
19th May 2024 9:56pm
19th May 2024 9:56pm
The Rose of Raven de Cyrano By De'Nyghtshade
The Rose of Raven de Cyrano
By De'Nyghtshade
Dear love, I shall crumble in my own filth to be clean with my simple rhyme. As I'm breathing the heathen within my favour to love you. Damage as I am no more - Raven de Cyrano
My love. My deepest Lady.
I'm your Cyrano
Not your tormented Romeo
Or should I declare to decline
With a glass of fine wine
My tears are the roses
Simple and fair.
Please caress a lock of your hair
For me to grasp in your favour
My...
By De'Nyghtshade
Dear love, I shall crumble in my own filth to be clean with my simple rhyme. As I'm breathing the heathen within my favour to love you. Damage as I am no more - Raven de Cyrano
My love. My deepest Lady.
I'm your Cyrano
Not your tormented Romeo
Or should I declare to decline
With a glass of fine wine
My tears are the roses
Simple and fair.
Please caress a lock of your hair
For me to grasp in your favour
My...
#gothic
#mystery
#romantic #Romanticism
#romantic #Romanticism
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
17th May 2024 12:45pm
17th May 2024 12:45pm
Dark chest of Wonders by F.D.Ravenskraft
i was walking towards the dead lands
and came across a well dried up
and lost from the moist without water for so long
and a foul smell came from it was the grasp of Death
an old musty odor from long ago
and was a chest placed by a dead child
that was murdered in cold blood
he grabs the chest and climb out
and ran home to open it
but was afraid to because of the voice of the child
who speaks in riddles
don't take my heart out
Let my heart be
As I beg of you
To leave me be
as the voice screams
he opens and the...
and came across a well dried up
and lost from the moist without water for so long
and a foul smell came from it was the grasp of Death
an old musty odor from long ago
and was a chest placed by a dead child
that was murdered in cold blood
he grabs the chest and climb out
and ran home to open it
but was afraid to because of the voice of the child
who speaks in riddles
don't take my heart out
Let my heart be
As I beg of you
To leave me be
as the voice screams
he opens and the...
#death
#gothic
#mystery
#scary
#tragedy
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Sonneteer
Poem Published
8th May 2024 9:04pm
8th May 2024 9:04pm
Identity
Alone through choice, through time, geography,
but communality in memory,
there is a strong urge to alienate,
but opposite wish not to isolate.
There must be some magic suspending life,
there must be some forces preventing strife,
coincidence can spark off trains of thought,
peace found at times, just as was always sought.
Advanced in years and still so quite naïve -
such mystery - uncertain to believe,
no wish to run the show, or be in charge,
but wish for change, present stasis to barge.
Labels of left and right, useless flotsam, ...
but communality in memory,
there is a strong urge to alienate,
but opposite wish not to isolate.
There must be some magic suspending life,
there must be some forces preventing strife,
coincidence can spark off trains of thought,
peace found at times, just as was always sought.
Advanced in years and still so quite naïve -
such mystery - uncertain to believe,
no wish to run the show, or be in charge,
but wish for change, present stasis to barge.
Labels of left and right, useless flotsam, ...
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
#mystery
#rhyming
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
29th Apr 2024 9:13pm
29th Apr 2024 9:13pm
Who am I?
I was there in the beginning
and I will be there at the end.
I am present throughout time and space,
and to the ends of the Earth.
I exist in other parts of the universe;
also in heaven and in hell,
inside and outside,
and within everybody.
I am in your home,
although not among the doors and windows,
and I am particular
about the rooms I inhabit.
You cannot see me
and many people do not know of me,
but I exist inside their heart.
Who am I?
and I will be there at the end.
I am present throughout time and space,
and to the ends of the Earth.
I exist in other parts of the universe;
also in heaven and in hell,
inside and outside,
and within everybody.
I am in your home,
although not among the doors and windows,
and I am particular
about the rooms I inhabit.
You cannot see me
and many people do not know of me,
but I exist inside their heart.
Who am I?
#mystery
#NaPoWriMo2024
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2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 8:02pm
26th Apr 2024 8:02pm
My friend Ron Delet
Do you know him?
I went to school with Ron Delet
Do you know him?
met in the 8th grade during gym
Amazing with stories & poems
one day he didn't make it home
Do you know him?
I went to school with Ron Delet
Do you know him?
met in the 8th grade during gym
Amazing with stories & poems
one day he didn't make it home
Do you know him?
#fiction
#friendship
#mystery
#rhyming
#ShortStory
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